Chapter 10: Somehow I feel that if chapters 9 and 10 had been combined, it would have felt more enticing. Break interrupted the flow and felt less exciting.
Chapter 11: That's what I'm talking about. Really good, exciting, and suspenseful chapter.
Chapter 12: It would have been the perfect chapter, it just felt a bit info-dumpey in the beginning. But then... It gave me that feeling only favorite books can give you.
— Aug 04, 2020 08:55AM
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