not loving the longass flashback. and I've never understood what the reader's supposed to take from the whole "let me tell you about" / cut to flashback things. clearly no one could believe the teller has conveyed to the listener all the detail, dialog, etc. that's conveyed in the flashback. hell, if someone tried to I'd get up and walk out. ugh.
— Dec 28, 2018 07:02PM
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