i have no clear idea of the setting for this story. it's distant future, i know that, but it's mostly had a pre-industrial revolution venice sort of vibe for me. i don't generally consider vagueness of setting a problem, but the last little section dropped a few references that suddenly upended my model of their world, which i don't love happening at over a third of the way in.
— Sep 08, 2025 05:53PM
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