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Daniel
is 10% done
I'm getting a bit of an everyone knows they're gay but each other vibe. The writing flows wonderfully though. I'm a bit skeptical about the length, but so far so good.
— Dec 25, 2018 05:48PM
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Daniel
is 61% done
not loving the longass flashback. and I've never understood what the reader's supposed to take from the whole "let me tell you about" / cut to flashback things. clearly no one could believe the teller has conveyed to the listener all the detail, dialog, etc. that's conveyed in the flashback. hell, if someone tried to I'd get up and walk out. ugh.
— Dec 28, 2018 07:02PM
Daniel
is 48% done
hmmm, that was unexpected. maybe it's fake. on another note, the exposure danger in these historicals is far more nerve-wracking than anything i ever read that's actually trying to be scary.
— Dec 26, 2018 10:37PM
Daniel
is 26% done
I'm cringing every time he calls Alice honey, and I'm not really expecting any surprises plotwise, but I like this a lot so far.
— Dec 25, 2018 09:49PM
