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One more thing... when two characters are speaking there is no separation between their dialogue within the same paragraph. In order to follow who is speaking you gave to pay attention to the quotation marks. It is annoying and distracting.

two characters with the same name.
Ryder Dixon, AKA Fury
Rider, a club brother. Confusing...

Another thing tgat bugs me is tgat the narration changes between characters randomly in the same chapter. Each paragraph or so and there is no warning or labeling. I have has to double check how is actually speaking a few times. Its frustrating and slowing my enjoyment a bit.

A few editing issues, some word choice issues, repetative thoughts/lines, and too formal/sophisticated dialogue for a 1% MC.

Really like Rayna/Daisy and Fury. Cute slighly dark/heavy story. Enjoying it.

So, it is good so far, but is not an MC story. Sure, Tank is in the Werewolves MC, but a coupke of of hand mentions, doesn't make it a story line. I do love Foxfire, she is awsome, and Tank is cool. Not what I was expecting, but liking it so far. And I paid $4.99, tgat is a small fortune for me, so I will be over critical. Mostly positive at this point...

So... I am skimming pages, just reading the interactive diaolgue and forgetting the internal dry ramblings. I am not lost, as nothing is really said, so nothing is lost. I am also not liking the main character, Jess, she is very jivunille. I think I am going to call it here and try and pick it up again later...

Good so far. There is a lot of internal dialogue with a bit of action thrown in. I would like way less "thoughts" and more interactions...

I have this unsettling feeling that I have read this story before... either that or I am suddenly physic...

Loving this story very much... best Kati Wilde in awhile. Going to love this Detective.

Yep... totally loving it now. I do wish there was a bit more action/Mafia type action, but I do believe that is coming...

It starts getting better....

A bit slow or dry so far. Interesting characters. I want a bit more details on plot related things rather then lines about life being a bit unfair. I am 18% in and still have no idea what Catarine does for a living.

Liking it so far. I love Catarine and Jag's first words to each other. "You done eye-f#&king me?" ... "Not yet." Love it, sassy and strong.

This is a cute story, it is just not holding my interest. I am not connecting with the characters. The humor is there, though I am not laughing out load like other gave stated. Cute but not amazing...

I am currently enjoying this story, however I am a bit lost as I have only read one other story in this kindle world. It might be best read with a little more knowledge of this world, the characters, and their roles.

Oh... dirty alpha princess fun. Yes please!!

I am utterly addicted to this story. I love that it is more then a romance. I feel so connected to the characters, and I can feel their pain. I have to put it down to go to bed, even if I REALLY don't want to. Amazing story so far. Oh, and YES PLEASE to Colt.

Cute story so far. Not much different then any other MC read. The characters are all a bit soft in this story and there is very little dirt or grit. I would classify this as a soft read. The repetitive dialogue during the steamy scenes is getting annoying, Jake says the same things over and over again.

Horse seems to have a split personality...he is sweet and kind one minute and then he is an a*$hole the next.

A have heard mixed review about this story, with majority of them being positive, I decided to finally read it. I am only just starting, but I am a little unsure of the harshness of Horse so far, granted it is all around club related issues, but I want a little more out of Marie. Well shall see...

Book one, Noose, just ended. It is fast paced and addicting. I like it so far.

Mostly sex. There is a bit of story mixed in. I must say I am trying of Ivy fast. She is so anti MC, anti Jag, but boy does she want to f*$k him over and over. The pushing needs to end soon, any more and the stars will be dropping from my rating.

Fast and Insta love it is. At 12% he is thinking about breeding and keeping her. This is a lot faster and more simple then expected from this author.

Hot, dirty, and decadent. Wow, still amazing good. I need a fan it is so hot.

Holy FUCK! Where did this come from. This is such an amazingly dirty, fantastic read. It is remenise of old school Alexa Riley. It is so well written, I am just absorbed. There is certainly the Alpha male, possessive, dominate man and the strong, smart sassy, older then her years woman. I cannot wait to read more.

Well it has gotten marginally better. Still a lot of useless words and "banter" added in. Also the chaper breaks are weirdly placed and when the narrative starts again, it is like a section of the story is missing. I have to double check tgat I didn't miss anything or skip a page. Not sure I am going to keep this book. Not worth the $3.99 price to me.

Everything that is mintioned has to have a quip attached to it. It makes the stroy long and drawn out and a bit tedious. Example: Anderson Cooper is mintioned. Then " chew nails for lunch and survive a hostile alien environment wothout backup." This is every time something is mintioned. It is added fluff, it is not relevant to the story. Getting frustrated. There have been a few funny lines.

This is one LONG monologue/rant so far. No excited about the story, a bit bored and resisting the urge to skim.

WELCOME BACK ! Oh how I have missed this Alexa Riley. Ever since the full lenght novels I have felt like AR has lost their magic, but this new shifter story, is classic AR. Funny, sweet and so very HOT.

This is a collection of their shifter stories and all of them a wonderful reads, so of my favorites from AR.