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CHAPTER 14! And my heart becomes Caleb's....I might have cried a little and then swooned hard.

Loved the bonus story more. It was faster and sweet. I think that AR writing longer stories just doesn't work as well. They have the short, hot, fast down. Don't mess with perfection.

Well....it was a cute story but I did not feel the blinding passion or possessiveness the other breeding stories had. It was good, just not amazing. I am diving into the bonus story now, but am not expecting much more. I might not automatically one click AR anymore and be a bit more selective. Still a good story, just did not live up to my expectations.

WHERE IS THE FIRE? I am fighting so hard not to skim. I want old AR back. Bummer.

I feel like AR has lost some of their power and amazingness. After Only His their short stories have suffered and this one is just the same. At 24% is is still just introduction dialogue and there has been no hot steam. In old AR boojs they were on each other already and I was fanning myself. So far, I am a bit bored. Hopi g it turns on the heat soon, as the breeding series is my absolute favorite.

So... not a fan of this story. I loved the lenght, but there was too much sex. It was like 1/2 the book and each scene was sooo long, I got bored. There was too much "dirty girl" it was repeated like every other page. The premise of the book was good, but it did not live up to Penny's standards. It was extremely repetative and annoying. I skimmed scenes because tgey were so long and drawn out. 3 stars.

The main male character has turned into a pu%$y. He is driving me nuts. I understand he is having trouble with surviving war, but this doesn't really fit with the rest of the story and is making me loss respect for his alpha-ness. I am kind of over this story. It has changed tones too much, and I not longer holding my interest. Alway there are some poor word choices by the author.

Good story so far. Love the quick short chapters and the alternative narration. The story flows quickly and almost seamlessly. The book formatting is a bit off but only slightly distracting.

Not bad. The ending was good and the book was over all a good read.

Kane is sweet and caring. I am hoping we get more time with his parents. The relationship is happening so fast and with very little emotions. Just interested to see how it ends.

Starts immediately where part one ended.

Cliffhanger....continues in Part Two.

This is like a condensed MC book, a lot of details missing but the story flows nicely. Surprisingly I am a little invested.

So far this is a descent story. Good writing. The plot or relationship between Kane and Kim is moving a little fast. I have not felt their connection to each other but they are already sleeping together. I do like that Kim is the one in control of thus "get together." Still interested to see where it goes.

"You're the woman who showed me there's good out there when all I fucking saw was bad. I can't do this life without you." Hyde to Monroe

"I can love you if you'll let me, Hyde."
"Give me everything, and I'll give it right back to you."

Great lines between Hyde and Monroe

So, um, well.... I thought this was going to be an Alpha male MC romance. However, it feels like a family drama. I am on chapter 13 and it has mostly been about Hyde, his former wife and his daughter. There is a little MC business in there but so far Monroe and Hyde gave only had two small interactions. Not impressed yet, and a little frustrated. The book was 20% over before Monroe even entered the story.

Oh My God! I am in love with this book. So funny. I have laugh snorted so many times already. Emmett is my favorite. Only dates his hand, breaking up with fist to marry new woman. So fun.

A stepmother, two nasty stepsisters, a Queen and a Duke, a fairy godmother, and the little cinder dragon girl. I am guessing that she is a white dragon, that being the reason her strpmonster placed a charm on her so she cannot shift.

This is a really fun version of Cinderella, only with dragons. Their coloring gives them rank and I loved the role reversal that the author added. Such fun so far.

Skimming the story, so very wordy. Repetitive thoughts, to much details slowed the story, feel like a slug reading it. Very disappointed. Not Mia's best by a long shot.

Story is dry, back and forth. Past, present, different times if day, does not flow well. Almost feels static and dry, boring. Ready to give up.

The humor and comrade between the men is amazing. They have been through Hell and back together and it shows through in the writing. I can very easily believe these men are friends and partners, that they have seen horrors and pulled each other up and out. The story reads so realistically. This author is an amazing surprise. I want to read more of her works.

Fantastic story. Amazing characters, great background info, there are lots of details, and the story flows beautifully. There might be a few to many characters to follow for me as I have not read the first and second books in this series. It reads like a standalone however. Exciting so far. Love it.

Grammar is terrible in places. Example: "... I needed to felt secure being with someone..." There are also black bars random placed through out the story, like a letter got highlighted in black ink. Still not excited about the story, Nia was so intent on not falling back with Hunter, but she is willing to sleep with him and use him.

A little confusing so far. Seems things are missing, a little jumpy. Also bad grammar and editing errors. Detracts from the story. Not really impressed so far.

Good so far. I am having a few issues with what feels like missing sentences but upon further examination there is nothing missing. I like the story line but the writing feels to simple. The story us also so short it feels like wam, bam. Not that that makes the story any less great.