I want more of the Acquisition action. This push and pull is getting a bit dry and stale. If as a reader I got more information about the Acquisition, what is required, and the consequences of not following through, I think the story would be better. Stella doesn't have to know but I am not satisfied at waiting until she learns something to know it as well. I want that knowledge before hand.
— Feb 10, 2018 03:34PM
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