Cute so far, insta lust: strong woman, alpha man. The story is easy to read, flows nicely. Nothing complicated. Easy friendships and moderately steamy love scenes.
In the first 40 pages there are a handful of editing and spelling errors. Nothing major, just noticeable.
The story line is FAST; already in the story she had been undercover/with Reed for 6 weeks. I am interested in her past, seems she knows MC life.
— Jan 01, 2018 01:23PM
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