Elysian Fields’s Reviews > One Night at Finn's > Status Update
Elysian Fields
is 14% done
Everything that is mintioned has to have a quip attached to it. It makes the stroy long and drawn out and a bit tedious. Example: Anderson Cooper is mintioned. Then " chew nails for lunch and survive a hostile alien environment wothout backup." This is every time something is mintioned. It is added fluff, it is not relevant to the story. Getting frustrated. There have been a few funny lines.
— Sep 29, 2017 06:21PM
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Elysian Fields
is 86% done
Well it has gotten marginally better. Still a lot of useless words and "banter" added in. Also the chaper breaks are weirdly placed and when the narrative starts again, it is like a section of the story is missing. I have to double check tgat I didn't miss anything or skip a page. Not sure I am going to keep this book. Not worth the $3.99 price to me.
— Sep 29, 2017 09:14PM
Elysian Fields
is 8% done
This is one LONG monologue/rant so far. No excited about the story, a bit bored and resisting the urge to skim.
— Sep 29, 2017 05:50PM
