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This is starting to feel a little repetitive and I still have 500 pages left. I hope something else starts happening soon.

Holy. Moly.

I hate to say this but this book is sooooooooo slow.

Now we seem to maybe be getting somewhere.

I feel like maybe I should know what's going on and why Gansey is so obsessed with this guy and magic but I'm just kind of lost about the purpose of this search. Maybe soon I'll figure out why this is all so important...

HOLY SHIT! I did NOT see that coming!

One page the coordination is coming soon and the next is one month later with no coordination in sight yet. I don't like random time jumps but especially not when the timeline is so vague.

I wonder if we ever find out why her father hates her so much. It's such a big part of her story and who she is that I really hope we do. But I suppose you could argue that it doesn't matter, just that he does. Either way, I want to know.

"and I let out a breath I didn't realize I was holding." Is there, like, a YA authors club I dont know about that you can only join if you use this line in your book? And even if there is, can we just stop? Please? There have got to be other ways to express this feeling.

I'm definitely loving Sam and Hadley but I'm also loving the way the rest of the relationships in this book are being represented and how realistic they all feel.

These learning moments aren't very subtle.

This is getting pretty cute but I still don't think the voices are very authentic for high schoolers.