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Michael Cargill - 2nd edition of Saying Goodbye to Warsaw


I've barely been able to get all my marking done, Mike.
I was told I'd be heading up this class for a month. The month was up last Wednesday. Still no end date in sight.
I'm not complaining. I love the kids and the responsibility, of course. Hard to fit the other bits of my life that I love in as well, though. Teaching isn't a full time job.
It's an all-encompassing life endeavour. Every experience, every conversation, is potentially a teachable moment or something to share with the munchkins or colleagues.
It really hit home this afternoon on the bus ride home. Friday afternoon. Bus full of teachers. What did we chat about? The things we did in class, the achievements our kids made and the joy it brought to us.
Excuse me while I get soppy. :)

I'm on my phone so can only be brief but your help so far has been phenomenal.

Nothing phenomenal about it. When you shared your initial idea it hit a chord as its a subject that fascinates me. I'd read enough of your stuff to know you have great talent as a writer. And by stuff I mean everything from your irreverent posts in our group to your blog posts to your published work.
I felt honoured to be trusted with your manuscript and very disappointed that I couldn't feed back to you as quickly as I was wanted to.
I think you know I gulped the book down in about two days. I found it gripping.
I'm so pleased that our Ignite and Elle-belle read it too.
I know they won't pull punches on what they thought was crap, any more than I would. We only tell it like it is cuz we want our authors to put out the best stuff possible.
If we didn't give a shit, we wouldn't give a shit.

*bottom lip trembles*
(I'm not apologising for making Elle miss her bus though)

Don't you dare ever apologise for causing a reader to be immersed in the world you've created with words.

I'll be interested to find out what I wrote:)


Set in the Warsaw Ghetto during World War II, it’s a story about the struggle for survival that the Jews had to endure every single day. At the hands of their Nazi tormentors they battled against starvation, disease, and deportations to concentration camps… until some of them decided to fight back.
It's available in ebook and paperback formats, and any reviewers/modmins are welcome to use the Smashwords code below to bag themselves a free copy.
Amazon UK - Kindle and Paperback
Amazon US - Kindle and Paperback
Smashwords - Code for a free copy is SB55G
Like any girl who is loved by her family, Abigail Nussbaum loves to chase butterflies, enjoys lying on her back looking for shapes in the clouds, and happily teaches young children to make daisy chains.
In the eyes of certain people, however, Abigail has committed a heinous crime. The year is 1940; the place is Poland; Abigail happens to be Jewish.
Along with half a million other Jews, Abigail and her family are evicted from their home and forced to live in the bombed out ruins of Warsaw, the Polish capital.
Although a handful decide to fight back, is the uprising strong enough to save Abigail’s spirit?


To be honest I get confused as you post as Lindsay, yet your email display name seems to change between John Taylor and Kiwi...!


Um, just about breaching double figures is the best way to describe sales of Warsaw at the moment.
Early days though, I'm spending a few bob sending out paperback review copies.

It's the best thing you've written so far, I reckon.

Have you anything in the works?

It's pretty soul destroying so I don't do too much.
I haven't actually started anything new yet but I know what it is I'm going to be doing. It'll be another WWII story but nothing like Warsaw was. Some of the recent books I read threw up some very interesting things that I can work into the story.

As I've said before, you really showed your strength in characterisation. And the flow from scene to scene was faultless. But I'm sure you know that.
I'm really pleased you have another tale percolating.

I'm sort of aware that my stories don't have complicated plots or anything like that, and I don't think they ever will.

Seeing as I’m the office fat bitch know-it-all…
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Mind you, £70 for a checkup. I usually tip the bowl into my bag.

You're infecting all the threads you visit!

Oh, thought of you earlier, actually.
We've been re watching Band of Brothers. You seen it?
Episode seven where they liberate a death camp.
I was in floods of tears.

The 1970s World at War documentary series is excellent though, and still very highly regarded - http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Worl...
The German film Downfall, which is about Hitler's last few days in his bunker, is very good - http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Downfall...
And Conspiracy, a film about the Wannsee Conference where various heads of the Nazi state discuss what shape the Final Soloution should take is also very good. It's chock full of recognisable British actors, including a very good performance from Kenneth Brannaugh - http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Conspira...

That concentration camp episode is powerful."
My sister worked on that series as a sculptress. She worked with others in a large warehouse creating emaciated corpses. She says that as the quantities built she got a real impression of what it must have been like to discover the real ones, and still has bad dreams about it to this day.

Watching one of the snow episodes with the frozen corpses, I did wonder if it was just normal actors lying there or if they used dummies.

Very well done, mind.
I do think that war films need to be very realistic. Band of brothers was good but very biased. History is written by the victors, as some dead guy once said.
I've sat in some wonderful history lessons.
One teacher stood in the doorway of the classroom and told the kids to remove one shoe as they came in and put it the corner. Then divided them up and told them to take one shoe from every child in the school and add them to the pile.
800 kids in the school.
800 shoes.
Much more powerful than any film.
The films held more meaning after that.

Yes, I've been bashing away at the keyboard again and I've finally hit the 25k words milestone that gives me an idea of where things are going and stuff.
For the second book in a row, I'm sticking with the WWII era, although this one is very different from the last one, and is sort-of-a-sequel-but-not-really. For those that have read Shades of Grey, I'm re-using the two main characters from the WWII story in that collection.
For those that haven't read it, fret ye not, for it works perfectly as a standalone story and actually takes place four years later anyway.
This new story concerns a squad of eight British soldiers on a scouting mission after D-Day in France, and so far I'm covering the mental effects of war on the soldiers along with the role of women back home on the domestic front.
Although it's always a worry at the 25k point, I genuinely can't see the story being longer than about 35k words, meaning it might not be long enough for a standalone release.
But who knows what the future holds, eh?
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