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April 18, 2016
3 Outstanding Ghost Stories to Encourage Kids to Read
Spooky��stories are��thrilling, scary, but always safe – because the child knows that if they put the book down, they can just walk away. Wish life was like that!
If your class/child/student enjoyed The Prankster and the Ghost here’s three other books they might enjoy.
The Ghosts of Tarawera by Sue Copsey.
Quick name drop: Sue was my editor for Prankster. Sue’s writing a three part series of spooky tales (this is the second in the series) so if your class enjoys this book, then don’t worry, there’s more! The Ghosts of Tarawera is a Storylines Notable Book, and is available from bookstores or directly from Sue, at her website: Suecopsey.com����Sue also has a whole lot of spooky jokes on this��website.
Under the Mountain by Maurice Gee
A well-known classic, Under the Mountain is��exciting to read aloud. There’s also a movie (which I didn’t like, but some people did), and Penguin have study notes available online��here.
The House on the Hill by Kyle Mewburn, Illustrations by Sarah Davis
The House on the Hill is Kyle’s homage to Edgar Allen Poe and is written in rhyming stanzas, a little like The Raven. A��natural performer, Kyle��has a youtube channel which is great fun. Scholastic have produced some helpful��teacher notes here.
Here’s a link to Kyle’s youtube Storytime Channel
Happy to take suggestions of other creepy, yet entertaining stories. For kids, please, because I find adult ghost stories just a little freaky! What other ghost stories would you recommend?
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April 16, 2016
3 Ghostly Facts Behind My Ghost Story
My��new book, The Prankster and The Ghost, is a fun-filled story about ghosts and practical jokes and friendship.��While Prankster is totally made up, it does include some��actual ghost stories…
Ghost Story One:
In Prankster, Jamie remembers��seeing a strange��lady in Edinburgh castle. This is based an actual encounter. My friend��was on a tour��through Edinburgh Castle and was creeped out by a strange lady in an old-fashioned dress. No one else��could see this woman, but the tour guide was not surprised. ‘Oh yes,’ she said, ‘she’s often seen.’
Ghost Story Two:
I’ve worked in hospitals all my working life and thirty years ago there were still many Victorian buildings. There were��plenty of tales of figures in white, or unexplained drafts, or a feeling of hands clutching you.These old hospitals��were the spookiest places; they had long echoing corridors and high dusty ceilings. ��We didn’t like being called out at night in those wards! But even in modern facilities��there are rooms with histories of unexplained figures being seen by patients, and there are still��places where staff prefer not to go – especially at night, when the hospital is quiet. I’ve never heard a��story��of hospital ghosts being violent; its more like ghosts are part of the hospital, rather like the furniture.
Ghost Story Three:
In Prankster, Tayla��floats��out of his body. This is based on something a patient told me – when he’d had a heart attack, he’d��floated free his body. He had returned when he was resuscitated. He said it was quite peaceful, and that he’d had no fear or pain (until returning to his body. He didn’t like the resuscitation��so much!) I took this idea a little further in Prankster, though –��I thought a kid might find floating around intensive care kind of��boring. Surely, a floating, invisible boy��would do exactly what��Tayla did – go straight for the computers!
And now you’ve read this – do you believe in ghosts?
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April 15, 2016
2 Pieces of Conflicting Advice for Writers
“There are three rules for writing. Unfortunately, no-one knows what they are.” Somerset Maugham.
Because I don’t have a degree in literature and totally missed out on grammar lessons, writing is something I find incredibly difficult. (Sometimes I really struggle to understand��out why I decided to do this…)
Here’s two pieces of conflicting advice. Strangely, I’ve found each piece of advice helpful.
Writing Rules
Because pictures speak louder than words, I thought better to post this advice as an infographic. Here’s one I found at Hunter is Writing��. (I’ve also linked her excellent blog post, too)
The Writer’s Rule Book from Hunter Is Writing
Sometimes, you can��break them
It’s also true that rules are made to be broken! The better a writer you are, the more you can comfortably break. Check out this great blog post��by Susan DeFreitas��for more information on which rules you SHOULD break (sometimes)…
Over to you: what advice would you share?
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April 14, 2016
How to Fall in Love With Words
Two nights ago I went to a workshop called ���A Continued Sense of Wonder���.
Hosted at the awesome Dunedin Public Library, the workshop was about Children���s literature. It���s to be held quarterly, and is open to anyone with an interest in kids books. Best of all, it���s totally FREE!
And what did I learn at this group?
This group reminded me of how central��a book can be in a child���s life.
We each brought a book that had resonated with us, either as a kid or as an adult. Books ranged from Tintin’s Explorers On the Moon��to The Illuminae Files, and we each had an interesting story about why this particular book was, or had been, important to us.
(Rather cheekily, I brought along my own book, The Prankster and the Ghost, because to be honest, this is the kids book that has touched me the most. I learned an awful lot about myself while writing it, and I wanted to share a little of that experience.)
Why we like stories
We��talked about how a��favourite book provided a pathway into fantasy. ���I used to imagine myself as Laura Ingalls Wilder, playing in the prairies.���
Books provided street cred: ���I was the only girl in my class who had read a book eight times!���
Books created friendships: ���I biked round to my friend���s house to read her books���.
Books provided escape: ���It was awfully soothing, just reading and listening to the waves.���
Books are important to us
We hold our favourite books gently. We smile as we talk about them and we turn the pages slowly, with reverence. If we���re talking to others about the book, we tip the book to share the pictures inside. Books carry more than a story; they carry memories; they remind us of a time we were happy.
Through stories, kids make sense of the world.
The evening reminded me again of just how much I had loved reading as a kid ��� oh, the memories! Mum coming home from the library with a bag full of books; picture books for the little kids, chapter books for us older ones. And the excitement of going to the library by myself, with my own library card. Reading by torchlight when I was supposed to be asleep; of the disappointment of watching Little House on the Prairie and realising it was nothing like the book.
How stories have changed, and how they���ve stayed the same.
I used to read books that had been translated. Heidi, Pippi Longstocking, Asterix. It���s much harder now to find translated works for kids (The Gecko Press is doing some great work in this space).
Thirty years ago, the plots of kids books had a slower pace, and frequently the words were more complex.
But many of the great novels are still as loved as they���ve always been. Astrid Lindgren���s Pippi Longstocking is as unorthodox and fun as ever ��� who wouldn���t love to have a horse on a verandah? Charlotte���s Web still makes kids cry. And children cheer when the Peach leaves with James inside.
Actually, kids today are even luckier than we were, because now they have Harry Potter!
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Original Cover of Pippi Longstocking – Wikimedia Commons
Remembering the importance of books
Sadly, it���s all too easy to lose sight of the enjoyment your work provides others. Perhaps I need to remind the marketers of this, when they talk about ���what is the unique selling point of your book?���: it���s not about my book – it’s about all books. Writers are not in competition with each other.
Caught up in the drive to update the Facebook page, to increase the word count, to promote one���s work, sometimes its good to step back and remember: we write because we love it.
We write because, once upon a time, we fell in love with reading.
Finally…
What was your favourite book as a child? What’s the first book you remember reading?��And now you’re an adult, what kids book do you love the most?
More information:
Dunedin Library’s A Sense of Wonder meets quarterly and is open to anyone who loves kids books (writers, readers, illustrators, librarians, parents, grandparents…). You can download the Fiction Highlights from the Children’s Collection here:��Continued Sense of Wonder 1 Booklist
Just for fun, I’ve added links to the Amazon holdings of all the books mentioned in this post!
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April 11, 2016
My Behind the Scenes Guide to A Writer’s Life
Hey there, welcome to my blog.
Over the next series of posts I’m going to��take you behind the scenes ��and show you a little of what it’s like to be an ordinary workaday writer. I’ll share with you some of the things I’ve learnt, things I wish I’d learnt earlier and tips that others have given me.
Of course, I’ll talk about my books. I’ll be explaining more of their background, and give you an insight to the worlds I’ve built.
I’m going to touch on the business side of writing, as this is��almost (but not quite!) as important as��the words. I’ll share with you some of my favourite resources and give you a sneak peak into income sources for writers.
But mostly��I’ll be talking about the craft of writing: how to structure sentences, how to avoid unnecessary verbiage and how to make your story interesting.
Posts will be a little jumbled, but I’m hoping that eventually some coherence will��eventually emerge. And of course, if there’s anything you’re particularly interested in, please let me know. I’ve finally figured out how to set up comments on this site, so now there’s something to fill in. 
So… Strap in and sit back. I hope you enjoy!
Welcome to my world!
And in the meantime, check out this Buzzfeed��post – 29 Words that Mean Something Different When You’re a Writer.
From Buzzfeed
Rachel
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April 3, 2016
How To Tell When Your Manuscript’s Finished
It’s hard to know when you’ve finished a creative work. How many times do you continue polishing, hoping to improve what went before? When do you ever finish?
Wanna know the hard truth?
Your Manuscript Will Never Be ‘Finished’.
For me, I normally do about five ‘Final Drafts’. It’s crazy. Each time, I save the next draft as ‘Draft_FINAL’ and it never is. There’s Draft_FINAL One’; ‘Draft_FINAL Two’ and so on. My personal favourite? ‘Draft FINAL_FINAL’.
Each time I review a draft, I find more errors, or more room for improvement. Each re-draft takes less time than the one before, but each re-draft is harder, more freaky, because each time I re-read it I realist that there’s��still so much wrong.
I suppose for me, a piece is finished is when I CANNOT��bear to read it again. It’s when I think “If I work on this story anymore I will go insane.”
That’s the time to��take a deep breath, package the��finely crafted work up and sit it on it for four to six weeks. Then check it one more time – just in case!
I dread the next part, the sending it out into the wide wide world. Because as soon as that happens, I start getting rejections.��Rejections are almost inevitable. And��oh, how they hurt.
Perfection isn’t Possible.
Your work will never be perfect, but at some point you HAVE��to��step away. Because only then can you get ready for your BOOK LAUNCH!
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April 2, 2016
9 Tips to Getting Published
What most people actually mean by the question ���How can I get a publishing deal?��� is: “How can I see my work in print?”
I totally get��this. It is a buzz to see your book on sale at the bookstore (it���s a lot less of a buzz to see it in the sales bin!) My first novel was A Necklace of Souls and when it came out I spent a lot of time visiting bookstores and taking photos of it on the shelves!
Here’s a reprint of my article on Kura Carpenter’s blog last week. Thanks for the opportunity to share, Kura!
Inner Fire is at #5!!
Here’s what worked for me…
A ton of hard work. I wrote on and off for about ten years before I got an acceptance. Over that time I wrote one novella, one novel, and many, many short stories.
Write for free. I edited a professional magazine, which gave me experience in working with deadlines, keeping to word counts, formatting documents.
Join a writer’s association. I joined the New Zealand Society of Authors. Associations like the NZSA often have mentoring programmes for new writers and access to grants and competitions.
Formal training. I completed a Certificate in Creative Writing at a local polytechnic, but there are other opportunities both on-line and in person. Just do be aware of cost if you���re doing this, as paid tuition at a university is not cheap.
Develop networks. This sounds cheesy, but often in life it’s not what you know, it’s who you know. (And be POLITE. Apart from the fact it���s the right thing to do, the writing world is a really, really small place!)
Submit to e-zines and small journals. My first paid acceptance was an e-zine which paid TEN DOLLARS! So exciting!!
Enter competitions. Comps can be expensive, so now I only enter those with that offer the opportunity to get my script read by a publisher, or that provide direct feedback on my script. The Romance Writers of America has some good ones, and my lucky break was with Storylines.
Keep writing. Evaluate critically. Write some more. When you feel it’s good enough – and only then – begin submitting to agents or publishers.
And finally, and this isn’t something you can ever predict, you need to get lucky. Why was A Necklace of Souls accepted, when another person’s might have been equally as good? I don’t know. Maybe the commissioning editor liked fantasy. Maybe they were looking for a novel with a strong female protagonist. Maybe the stars had aligned.
Reality checks:
Don’t expect overnight success. Actually, don’t expect to make a living wage from writing, period. Treat it like a passion and then anything’s a bonus.
Or, you could just be famous, notorious or both. Then landing a publishing deal is way, way easier.
Me with a much less famous author…
PS I haven’t quite figured out the way to allow comments onto this page 
I will work it out one day, but in the meantime if you do have anything to share, feel free to tweet me at @rlstedman or contact me here.
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March 31, 2016
Writing a Novel? How to Improve Your Third Draft.
For me, the third draft is about copy-editing. Tightening the words, so everything is succinct, where the writing is powerful and immediate and interesting. Third draft makes sure the right word is in the right place.
I like doing my third draft. I work in hard copy, sliding a ruler under each line, and read line by line down the page, following the ruler. This stops me skimming, makes sure I consider each word carefully. I often do this in a cafe, just for a change of scene.
I save my draft two file, make a new one, called ‘Draft Three’ – duh – and insert the hardcopy��changes as track changes. ��It’s time consuming, of course, but it’s also fun, because it’s a chance to see if the premise and themes I dreamt of so long ago are coming together, that the story kind of hums along.
The big problem that I have is the continual second-guessing. Oh, but will this appeal to a reader? To an agent? To a publisher?
3��Tips to a Successful Third Draft
1- ��Consider a Critique Partner (CP).��
A CP is someone who reviews and comments on your chapters. Preferably, someone who will be brutally honest, without fair of reprisals. Don’t use a family member, or a neighbour, or a friend. You need someone to tell you the parts that are boring, or which scenes don’t make sense.
Personally, I don’t find it too useful to have a CP until draft three, because up until this point, there’s so many changes. But after draft three, it’s invaluable. Especially for the all-important first three chapters.
Where Can I Find a CP?
If you’re doing a creative writing course, well then, it’s obvious. You’ll have more than enough eyes on your manuscript.
You can join a writing group. ��Google writer’s groups��+ [the town you live in]. Or look up your local Writer’s Society. Here’s the link to the��New Zealand Society of Authors
You can join a special interest group – such as a Romance Writers Association
Or – and here’s a special tip from me to you – you can join��Ladies Who Critique��. LWC is kind of like a speed dating service for writers, matching writers with critique partners. I’ve found it useful and its a good way to chat with other writers, all from different parts of the world, with varying experiences. Ignore the ‘ladies’ bit. They welcome men, too.
Focus on your first three chapters.
2- ��Focus on your first three chapters and your ending.
Your first three chapters are the ones read by agents, editors and readers. Actually, the first three words, the first three paragraphs, the first three chapters. If you spend time polishing anything, polish these parts of your story. And don’t forget the ending. Endings are what we remember the most, and a��great ending makes��a reader keen to��read another of your books.
3- Allow for length changes.
You may lose a lot of words in draft three. I usually lose about 10 – 20 percent. This means that if I’m aiming for a final word count of say 70,000 (average for a YA novel), I need to write about 100,000 to ensure I still have enough words for my manuscript. By contrast, some writers��find they increase��their word count. Whatever works for you, just be prepared for changes.
And at the end of Draft Three – will my (good) novel finally be finished?
It’s up to you. If you are happy with it, then yes, perhaps. But for me – no. I will keep going on redrafting for quite a little longer.
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March 28, 2016
How to Improve Your First Draft – Beauty and Murder
Okay, so hopefully your first draft is finished, and you’re quietly (or not so quietly) celebrating.
The good news?
Finishing the first draft is a massive milestone; an exercise in tenacity and sheer bloody-mindedness. Word after word joining chapter after chapter, until finally you have enough content to make a book.
For me, the first draft is the fun part, where the story-telling happens. ��I’m not bound up with grammar or word-appropriateness or even too much plot. In the first draft I am feeling my way into the story.
The bad news?
The hard work is just about to start.
Beauty and Murder
So this is what I do. ��At the end of the draft one – which takes anywhere between six weeks and five years, depending on number of words and time and circumstances and life just getting in the way – I put the manuscript aside. ��Usually for about four to six weeks. For some reason this seems to coincide with other breaks, like school holidays or Christmas or something, so this has never been too much of a problem.
Once the six weeks is over, I re-read it in hard copy with a critical eye. I try not to get too bogged down in the words at this stage (although of course I do, a little), but for me, draft two is all about STRUCTURE. What goes where.
The point of Draft Two is to kill your darlings. Heighten the tension. Compress the narrative. ��I find it a very hard process.
In Draft Two I shuffle scenes about. Sometimes I write in the margin – ‘Compress.’ ‘Tighten.’ ‘This drags.’ ‘Do I need this scene?’ If I think a scene should be somewhere else, I circle it, draw a big arrow to where it needs to go.
You can do this in other ways. Some people use post-it notes, drafting a short, cryptic summary on each, and putting them on a big wall. Some use index files, or software.
The point of any method is always to ensure that everything in your story has a purpose; that each scene drives the story onwards. Do whatever works for you. It’s not like there’s a right and a wrong here – it’s the outcome that matters, not how you manage your process.
When I’ve ruthlessly worked through the manuscript, I start back on the computer. I make another file called ‘Draft Two’ and work through the marked-up edit points. I start a file called ‘leftover’ and anything I’m not sure about deleting I cut from Draft Two and paste into the leftover. Most of the time I won’t need this pasted material, but it’s like a security blanket, just in case. It’s pretty hard to let my darlings go completely.
I find Draft Two the hardest stage. It’s when I realise that my shining gem of a first draft is actually only a damaged pebble.
Although even a pebble has beauty; Draft Two is about exposing that beauty.
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March 24, 2016
7 Steps to Writing Your First Draft
The purpose of the first draft is to get stuff out of your head and into words.
Warning: Don’t expect great things from your first draft. It’s almost always shit. But that doesn’t matter – what is important is getting the WORDS ONTO THE PAGE. Remember, if you don’t start, you will never finish. That’s the point of the first draft – to finish.
My First Draft Process
Every day I write something new.
First draft stuff is written early in the day, when I’m still feeling creative.
I have a word target. I do not get up from my chair until I reach this target. It might be 500 words, it might be 2000, but whatever it is, I keep going until I’m there.
I begin by reviewing what I wrote the day before. ��But I try not to edit it too much, otherwise I get stuck in Edit Mode. There’s a big difference between Edit and Create.
Once I reach my word target, if I’m in the zone, I keep going. (If I’m not, I go for a walk. I find walking clears away the cobwebs, helps me think knotty issues through.)
Every day, I tell myself ‘well done’.
Repeat this process until finished.
And I DO NOT get worked up over what is happening until the story is finished.
Worrying about plot holes is a sure fire way to procrastinate.
Something like��Nanowrimo��can help – the way you get a little graph at the end of the day is quite cool. Plus, its nice to feel you’re not alone.
Of course, this is all wonderful stuff. I break my rules all the time.
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