This thing is WEIRD. He keeps jumping back and forth between POV characters and they all have wildly different voices on the page so it’s making it feel even more tonally jumbled.
The whole opening that’s an entirely different adventure, barely connected to this one, aside from its’ Eleven’s first “case” with Jenny and Vastra, also didn’t help much. I can understand why they made him cut this down now
— Nov 25, 2021 09:20PM
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