A really strong start. The shock of entering a new world, from power and "respect" to being just another sick old bag of bones, where nobody cares what you have to say, is portrayed with some feeling. The devastation of the sickness itself seems largely lacking so far, though, save for a few fleeting mentions of how hard it is for him to turn his neck with its growing tumor.
— Apr 08, 2020 09:45PM
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