Getting a little better with respect to Watson, though Mary's arrogance with him is annoying. The writing style is also all right, though she sped through about six seven years of life in about a couple pages, I sort of wish she'd tried like a YA series with Mary and Holmes for us to see them bond, instead it's just "we talked, we were like old friends, it's awesome." Very fanfic like.
— Aug 30, 2012 01:09AM
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