De la Cruz's story is okay, but it definitely crosses the line into cheesy. Plus, I don't think starting with an established couple works as well. It doesn't help that the story doesn't do anything about the MC's judgmental, snob friends or the fact that the heroine, who we learn is the most beautiful girl in school so she's accepted despite not being wealthy, wishes her boyfriend would change to be more popular.
— Feb 23, 2019 04:00PM
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