I’m still struggling with the language. I realize it’s not fair for me to be disappointed that it’s not lyrical like her debut, A Dowry of Blood. There are a sprinkling of lines that hark back to the 70’s, when the book takes place, but there’s something about it that feels disjointed, almost like it should have either gone all in or stuck with all-neutral diction
— Oct 02, 2023 05:32AM
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