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message 5351: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Same here.

Anika clenched her fists. "Don't be stupid."


message 5352: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik laughed at both Salem and Anika
"What are you going to do? I have more power than you, you can't do anything."


message 5353: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "So? I have more backup than you."


message 5354: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "So? I know where they all are and can kill them before you even think about callign them."


message 5355: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Anika froze. "You can do that?"


message 5356: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Of course I can." Patrik said


message 5357: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Well that's stupid. What's keeping you here?" Anika asked snidely.


message 5358: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Emmy is." Patrik answered cooly


message 5359: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Anika made a face. "She's in the Cobra building. She's not here."


message 5360: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Oh I know, I can help if I'm here. I can't otherwise." Patrik replied.


message 5361: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I don't..get it?"

Salem stirred, moaning a little with the pain of waking up.


message 5362: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "You don't have to." Patrik replied curtly before turning his attention on Salem.


message 5363: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Anika watched them.

"Dam-mit." Salem groaned, trying to sit up dizzily.


message 5364: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Easy.. go slow. Ok?" Patrik said helping her up.


message 5365: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She hung her head till her chin touched her chest, trying to breathe normally. "Oooh... not fun."


message 5366: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Yeah." Patrik nodded "Go easy." he kept a hand on her back.


message 5367: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Mmmhmm. Thanks..." Salem muttered, feeling like she was going to throw up.


message 5368: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Yeah, anytime." Patrik said gently "You want some water?"


message 5369: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Please..oh gosh please.." she kept her head down for the time being.


message 5370: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Alright, hang on." Patrik grabbed the bottle and gave it to her. He opened it and held it out.


message 5371: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Carefully she got a hold of it and sipped it cautiously. It settled her stomach but had nothing for her headache. "I want to know how Emmy is," she said quietly, setting the bottle down.


message 5372: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik grabbed Mackenna's laptop. It had the observation room camera's feed on it.
"Not so good Salem.." Patrik said softly.


message 5373: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Like..how 'not so good'?" she could've cried.


message 5374: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Like I'm scared 'Not so good'." Patrik told her. "See for yourself." he showed her the screne.
It was just Emmy in the room unmoving.

I had been wandering in this place for so long. I don't know what I am supposed to get from this. Whatever it is it's taking too long.


message 5375: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem moaned. "No, no. Is this my fault?" for a nanosecond, Shadow heard Emmy's thoughts.


message 5376: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "No. It's not. It's no one's fault." Patrik said looking at her.

Jesus Christ. "What am I doing here?!" I yell at this place. "What?! Huh? What?!"


message 5377: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "It is. It so is." Salem tried to send her own thoughts to Emmy, wincing. Emmy?


message 5378: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "No, Salem, it isn't." Patrik said again

"Oh my god, Salem. Tell me you're ok. Please tell me you're ok." I say into my dream hell. I know sh ecan hear me.


message 5379: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She ignored Patrik, focussing on Emmy even though it pained her to do so. It was more important.

Uh, ya. I mean. I'm awake now. It still hurts. I'm sorry! This is my fault!


message 5380: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments I laugh that takes a lot of energy. "It's not your fault. It's mine. I'm glad your awake, how far did they have to take you? And the hurt probably isn't going to go away for a while." I sit down again, the burning underwater feeling came back. It makes it hard to focus on what I'm saying.


"Salem, are you talking to Emmy?"


message 5381: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments It's not your fault, she shook her head. I'm at Torch, we can see you on the laptop, Patrik and I. Gre-eat. She made a face.

"Yes..I'm talking to her."


message 5382: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "It's not yours either. Patrik's there? He's ok right?" I put my head in my hands "What does he think happened?"

Patrik sighed
"Good thing right?"


message 5383: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Well then, it's no one's fault. Yeah, he was here first, 'member? I don't know, but I can ask him what he thinks."


Salem nodded. "Yeah," she exhaled slowly. "She wants to know what you think happened."


message 5384: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments I think for a few seconds "Oh yea. I remember now. I'm sorry, it's so hard to concentrate. Ok, tell me what he thinks." Now it's so hard to focus, my words sound weird and off. I'm slipping and I can't hold on.

"I thought it was you two. Like Emmy was blocking you and vice versa. I don't know what else it could be." Patrik said with a shake of his head.


message 5385: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments He thinks we were blocking each other. Salem held her head in her hands, a moan slipping out jsut as Mackenna came back in.

Anika left quickly.


message 5386: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Salem.. I can't..." I try to say as I slip away completely. It was odd to fall into the blackness in a dream. It wasn't something that people would normally feel, well I'm not normal. Never had been.

Patrik looked up at Mackenna he stood and started pacing again. He hated this.


message 5387: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Can't what? she died to ask, but it was too late for the moment. Salem fell back, crying.

Mackenna handed him the food and stood there awkwardly. "What's...wrong?"


message 5388: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik didn't say anything all of his attention was on Salem.
"What happened?"
Fear colored his voice.


message 5389: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments At first she couldn't talk to him, the pain magnified and stealing her voice. "She left!"


message 5390: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Left..? As in what...?" Patrik asked slowly.


message 5391: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I can't hear her anymore..and it hurts." she gasped.


message 5392: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "I'm sorry." Patrik said kneeling down next to her. "What do you need?"


message 5393: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I need- it to stop," she broke down crying, something she never,ever did.

"I'm guessing this is bad...anything at all: your wish, my command? I guess."


message 5394: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "I know. I don't know what to do about it." Patrik said gently. He looked back at Mackenna "Can I have some water and asprin? Please?"


message 5395: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Sure thing.....we have morphine..?" Mackenna said softly, worried.


message 5396: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "That too. Please." Patrik nodded "Salem would that be ok? Morphine? What do you think?"


message 5397: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem nodded the best she could.

Mackenna nodded and ran off.


message 5398: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik sat with her, quietly thinking about Emmy.


message 5399: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Mackenna came back in record time, with Hunter. She wasn't certified for the morphine injection, but he was. She gave the water to Patrik.


message 5400: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Thank you." Patrik said to both of them. Hunter put the respective ammount into a needle and put it in Salem's arm. He injected the morphine into her.
"There." Hunter said standing up and walking out.


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