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message 5551: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments I laugh again "YOu can have plent of people to deck soon enough.

Patrik walked up to Teeghan's room and unlocked the door.


message 5552: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem laughed again, even though Mackenna found it freaky. Great. Cause after whatever Patrik did..I'm suddenly energetic again.

Teeghan jumped,expecting someone else. "Patrik?!"


message 5553: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "That's good." I smile

"Hey Tee, good to see you again." Patrik smiled at her


message 5554: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Yep. Oh! I seee them! Shadow jumped out of the car and ran over to Blaze and Liv. "Come on, let's go!"

"How'd you get here?"


message 5555: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv looked up and almost squeeled "Salem!" She hugged her.

"Drove." Patrik shrugged "Well, we're going back home. Salem said you and Avery would want to come."


message 5556: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem hugged her back, "HEy,nice tp see you...we've got to get going.."

Tee nodded. "Well ya!"


message 5557: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv nodded and jumped in the car sure Blaze was following her.

"Ok follow me then. We can just leave. I just have to get Emmy." Patrik said


message 5558: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze got in warily beside Liv and Salem took shotgun.

Teeghan nodded, putting Avery in a blanket and following him.


message 5559: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv rested her head against the seat "Why the rush Salem?"

Patrik found Emmy easily. He hesitated before picking her up. But he did and walked out of the room. He looked at Teeghan
"Salem and the others should be here soon."


message 5560: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "We've just got to go." they sepd off and stopped in front of Cobra.

Teeghan nodded. "They're here."


message 5561: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Alright..." Liv said slowly.

"Lets go." Patrik said carrying Emmy outside.


message 5562: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Teeghan went over to the car and got in the backseat.

"Oh,it's a rescue mission!" B;aze said in releif.


message 5563: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik opened the back and climbed in. He rested Emmy on his lap.

"I don't think so Blaze.." Liv said softly "Patrik..? What happened?"


message 5564: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Mackenna sped off. "Where to?" she asked Patrik.


message 5565: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Anywhere. It doesn't matter just the less crowded the better." Patrik said ignoring Liv.

Liv was figuring it out.
"No. Patrik, we can't. We don't have Rife. We ca-"
"I can bring him to us Liv. That's not important now."


message 5566: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem blocked everyone out: they were thinking too loudly.

Mackenna nodded and veered off the highway onto the first exit. The state park was empty.


message 5567: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments When she parked Patrik jumped out throwing a look to Liv.


message 5568: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem climbed out robotically and Blaze got out too, pulling Liv out of the car.


message 5569: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv was kind of zoning.
"We're going home. I can't believe it."

Patrik started working on the portal.


message 5570: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments blaze was confused. "Huhh?"

Salem ignored them and sat in the grass.


message 5571: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv didn't hear him
"Patrik!" She ran over to him "We said-"
"I know what we said ok? I remember. But this is the only chance."
"Chance for what?" She asked kneeling next to him.
"Emmy to be ok, Liv, for all of us to be ok."
Liv looked around her eyes resting on Blaze.
"They aren't comming." She said fiercly


message 5572: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Who aren't? What, where?" B;aze asked,confused.


message 5573: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Liv I thought you would want-"
"No. They won't make it through."
"They will. Emmy and I can make sure of it."
Liv looked down
"Promise me." She said "Promise me you can."
"I promise, Liv. I promise." Patrik said


message 5574: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem finally looked up at them. "Don't worry Liv. I saw Blaze and Tee there, with Avery too."


message 5575: by Hannah (last edited Feb 23, 2010 10:59PM) (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments She nodded. Rife stepped out of the trees. "You called?"
"We're going home Rife." Liv said nodding


message 5576: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments It was then that Shadow noticed she hadn't seen herself there. She ignored that fact and smiled at Rife: last time she'd seen him, he hadn't liked her much.


message 5577: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife grinned at her.


message 5578: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "How's it been?"


message 5579: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Boring." He shrugged "How about for you? I hear the last week hasn't been fun."

"Tell me this is almost done" I say to nothing hoping Salem can hear me.


message 5580: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Np, not fun..oh, other line!" she joked. Hey, I think so..Liv was mad at first..but I think she's cool with it now...Emmy..I didn't see myself there.. Emmy was the only one Shadow planned on telling that particular fact.


message 5581: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife chuckled.

I close my eyes "Your part Shadow aren't you? You can't see me because I have so much in me or something. Maybe that's why you can't see yourself in Sildon powers multiply exponentially. Maybe.."


message 5582: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem nodded and then remembered Emmy couldn't see her. Oh, that's right...makes sense..maube what?


message 5583: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "When I get back home my powers like quadrouple. Don't you think it'll just make it worse? Or maybe that's why we can take you with us. Because we all get our full powers back." I say thinking about it


message 5584: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Ah.. well it's worth checking out anyway...what's life without adventure?


message 5585: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Horrendously boring and safe." I say with a laugh

"Done." Patrik says standing. "Let's go home."


message 5586: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments That's....scary. It's ready..hopefully I'll see you soon!

Salem stood up slowly. "So....how does this work?"


message 5587: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "You better!"

"Like a door you walk through." Liv said loking at Patrik "How are we going to do this?"
"Pair up. You and Blaze, me and Tee, Rife and Avery then I can come back and help Salem with Emmy."


message 5588: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Haha, see ya soon.

Blaze nodded. "Okay...like Narnia."

Salem laughed. "Without the coats and a bit more dangerous. Good plan Patrik."


message 5589: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((On tomorrow.))


"Yeah like Narnia." Liv agreed laughing walking towards the portal. She stepped through it Blaze by her side.

Rife went before Patrik taking Avery.
"Come on Tee." Patrik said holding out a hand.


message 5590: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((bye!))

Blaze smiled.

Teeghan grabbed his hand.

Salem sat beside Emmy. Soon.


message 5591: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv focused on him as colors started swirlign and then they stepped out into darkness.

Patrik smiled gently and walked her through the portal.

"Alright..."


message 5592: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Woah, that was cool Liv," Blaze said happily.

Teeghan's eyes widened and she half-smiled.

Shadow smiled and took Emmy's hand in her own. Emmy. I hope you're right.


message 5593: by [deleted user] (new)

((If Sean had been there then he would have said that he was totally coming too. So let's say that he did. XD))


message 5594: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((okay..olo.))


message 5595: by [deleted user] (last edited Feb 24, 2010 09:15AM) (new)

((Sorry I can't be here when you guys are usually!))


message 5596: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((I'm sorry we tend to go far.. :( ))


message 5597: by [deleted user] (new)

(('S okay. *shrug* Ooh, guess what! You know that dog I was talking about that we just rescued? We found her owners a while ago. And then this morning a couple of really skinny labs that had been lost for a long time showed up and we took them to the vet and they were microchipped! And their owner came and took them home! Yay!))


message 5598: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((that's awesome!!))


message 5599: by [deleted user] (new)

((Yeah. Our first happy endings.))


message 5600: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((olo,even better))


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