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message 51: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy looked at Thyra with a raised eyebrow, "We are elementals, we all have extra powers but only the Shadows can shift."


message 52: by [deleted user] (new)

Thyra glanced up at the darkening sky. "On Murkaa our enchanters can shift. Follow, me. quickly now and watch your step."


message 53: by ]-[olden (new)

]-[olden (holden_) | 7 comments tom sprange up ok whats going on here paul looked at him questioningly


message 54: by Matthew (new)

Matthew that stinks, no snow


message 55: by ]-[olden (last edited Jul 20, 2009 04:28PM) (new)

]-[olden (holden_) | 7 comments paul concentrated the whispered in toms ear tom stood up straight and announced "Paul and i think we might be over our head if our powers can ever help you call me" ~he handed Thyra a note~ "but until then we will get out of your way fare well" they ran off into the town looking more than a little disappointed


message 56: by [deleted user] (new)

Thyra barley glanced at the note before cramming it into the pocket of her tunic.


message 57: by Matthew (new)

Matthew :D


message 58: by [deleted user] (new)

Iago sighed and stalked off, looking for some random person to kill.


message 59: by Matthew (new)

Matthew random person?
"Uh how about this one?"
"No, this one!"


message 60: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy and her group follows closely behind Thrya.
"What are your extra powers? If you have any," Liv asks


message 61: by [deleted user] (new)

Erik sighed and began diing through a radom trash can.


message 62: by Musical♥Writer (new)

Musical♥Writer (musicalwriter) ((Can I join this???)))


message 63: by Catie (new)

Catie  | 243 comments Me too.


message 64: by [deleted user] (new)

((sure!))


message 65: by [deleted user] (new)

Gwen stumbled out of the shadows, her left calf pouring blood. She looked at the group with her crystal clear blue eyes and very persuasivly said, "Help me." Then she fell to the ground unconcious. A large, handsome man came out of the shadows with a rather large, strange looking knife and a determined look on his face. " Where are you, Princess?" He said menacingly.


message 66: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "What the?" Emmy said starting to the girl, Patrik right behind her. She ran to the girls side before the man could get to her. But Rife and Liv were already advancing on him. "Patrik, grab her. I'll cover you," Emmy says allwoing the fire to spring to life on her fingertips once more.


message 67: by [deleted user] (new)

Iago was bored.


message 68: by [deleted user] (new)

The man jumped back when he say fire on the fingertips or the girl in front of him. "This is impossible." He stated before running back into the shadows. "You'll regret ever helping her!"


message 69: by Catie (new)

Catie  | 243 comments Sevral more girls came out of th shadows. One had extremly pale skin and jet black hair that went to her back. Her eyes were the most startling thing about her. They were ice blue and seemed to peirce through the darkness swirling around them.


message 70: by [deleted user] (new)

Gwen started moaning, "Addy, gotta find Addy..."


message 71: by Catie (new)

Catie  | 243 comments The girl cocked her head, "Addy?" she said


message 72: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "What in gods name?" Rife says looking at all the girls around him. Liv shoots a look at Emmy, who is loooking at Patrik her eyes full of questions.


message 73: by Catie (new)

Catie  | 243 comments "You have questions." she said in a soft voice. "one of you is hurt. We can help." She looked at the group.


message 74: by Hannah (last edited Jul 24, 2009 05:07PM) (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Yes of course we have questions. But if you can help, then by all means. If you need anything tell one of us. Patrik is our healer, he will help if you need it." Emmy smiles grimly"A watr lyr is a good thing to hav eif you ever need healing."


message 75: by [deleted user] (new)

Thyra cocked her head. "Who was that man?"


message 76: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "And why was he after that girl?" Liv asks from next to Patrik


message 77: by [deleted user] (last edited Jul 24, 2009 05:25PM) (new)

Mattatosk came running up with a very dangerous looking machine gun. Thyra rolled her eyes. "I'm not even going to ask how you got that. Just put it back where you found it and don't press anything"
Mattatosk looked dissapointed. "But this is so much more fun that swords or arrows."
"Put it back Mattatosk," said Thyra and steel could be heard in her tones.
Matti got the message and loped back, clutching his newfound toy tightly.
Thyra sighed. "He's not going to let it go without trying it now that I've warned him."
Just then, the sounds of bullets hitting the side of a building emanated from beyond the trees.
"No comment."


message 78: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Damn I wanted to try it," says Rife looking longingly in teh direction of the gunshots. Emmy and Liv shoot him death looks and he, getting the message shuts up. From next to the bleeding girl Patrik laughs.


message 79: by [deleted user] (new)

Iago sighed.


message 80: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy heard the sigh and looked up and saw a man standing there.


message 81: by [deleted user] (new)

Iago looked around. He saw a person walkng down a deserted street(not emmy). He grinned, walked up, and drank their blood, before killing them.


message 82: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy did nothing as she watched the girl fall limply to the ground. She watched with a dull horror as the man relished in her death.


message 83: by [deleted user] (new)

Iago shrugged, and the ripped the corpse to shreds in some random dark alley.


message 84: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy looked to Patrik and walked over to him, placing her hands on his shoulders to comfort herseelf


message 85: by [deleted user] (new)

Iago didn't realize anyone was watching him. He scaled the wall of one of the buildings and dissapeared.


message 86: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments It wasn't like she hadn't seen Liv scale walls before but seeing anyone else do it was fascinating.


message 87: by [deleted user] (new)

Iago leaned up against the chimeny of the building.


message 88: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Pstrik looked up at her touch and met her eyes with a quite concern. She grinned and tried to shrug it off. Patrik touched her face with a cool hand, she smiled and cupped his face in her hands
"The girl Patrik,"Emmy said pointedly


message 89: by [deleted user] (new)

Iago poked the chimney absent mindedly.


message 90: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy crossed her arms and walked toward the wood.


message 91: by [deleted user] (new)

Iago looked around.


message 92: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy stopped and stared up at the sky. Clouds were comming in a huge storm was comming.


message 93: by [deleted user] (new)

Iago relized it waas close to dawn He began walking back towards the cemetary.


message 94: by [deleted user] (last edited Aug 11, 2009 01:18PM) (new)

"Thank you, my name is Gwendalynn Farr, and I have a twin sister is Adalynn. She helped him. That man is working for Andrew Kingston who was my fiance before I ran away. And now Grant is dead, because of me. And I don't know where I am." She began to cry.


message 95: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy looked at the girl, she had hardly understood a word she had just said. Patrik looked up at her "what?!" he mouthed. Emmy shrugged her shoulders


message 96: by [deleted user] (new)

Vittoria and Antony walked up the street.


message 97: by [deleted user] (new)

Thyra knelt beside the girl. "Are you alright?" She asked softly.


message 98: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik stood and offered Gewn a hand. Emmy walked back to the group, "Wherever we gotta got we should get there soon. A storm is comming,"
Patrik looked at her and grinned "You know we could,"
"Patrik, I like the storms." Emmy interupted
"Me too," Rife chimed in
Liv looked up at the sky she raised her arms and a wind rattled through the trees and hit the group. Liv looked satisfied and let the wind die.


message 99: by [deleted user] (new)

Gwen took Paticks hand. "Um, sorry, but who are you?" she said sniffling. "And where are we going?"


message 100: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Patrik," He replied
"Emmy," Emmy said from behind him
"Liv," Liv piped up from a little ways away
"Rife," Rife said walking away from the woods
"And I have no idea where we are going," Emmy said to Gwen.


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