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message 5301: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((yes very))


message 5302: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Write, Read, Music, Volleyball wrote: "((same here perfect timing. :} ))

"We have a shoddy file on them over here. Do you want a copy?" Kher said skimming the file and adding to it when it needed to be added to."


"Yes," Mackenna said brusquely.


message 5303: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Gwen shook her head. "I'll have Hunter deal with that." she didn't trust Sean.


message 5304: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Hey you are back! :D ))

Kher sighed
"I'm just updating it. And I think they are sepperating Salem and Emmy now.. Ok, It's sent you should be getting it now."


message 5305: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((yeah!))

Mackenna went back into the room, checking her mail on the laptop. "Thanks."

Gwen paged Hunter.


message 5306: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Anytime. Call if you get anymore out of those tapes that is much appreciated." Kher said hnging up.

HUnter walked in
"yes?"

Patrik looked up at Mackenna
"Please tell me they listened to you."


message 5307: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Mackenna sighed, putting her phone away and opening the email. "Oh..."

Gwen looked over to him. "She needs to be moved away from here," she pointed to Salem.


Mackenna looked up at Patrik, "As far as I know: yes. They sent me your files, and they should be moving Salem by now... anything else I need to know? So I can tell them?"


message 5308: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Hunter nodded "How far?"

Patrik loked at her
"Emmy isn't going to get better anytime soon as far as i know. And they have files? They don't know much about us? What do they say?"


message 5309: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "As far as possible without leavi- nevermind. You know? It would be better if you could get her over to the Torch building: it's not far." Gwen said, changing her mind halfway through.


Mackenna was starting to worry. "Emmy and Salem...what's going on with them?! Oh..and here, look." she turned the screen and gave him free run of the emails.


message 5310: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Hunter nodded and grabbed Salem and took her over to Torch's building.

"I don't know! But I can see the observation room on the feed from here. She's still sleeping, and I don't like it at all." Then he sat down and skimmed over the files.
"Well some of this is wrong."


message 5311: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She could feel him, she could hear him, and she hated every second of it.

"Feel free to open it in a document and fix it up." Mackenna said grimly.


message 5312: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Hunter walked in Torch's building carrying Salem.

Patrik nodded "If I do I feel like I'm betraying all of us." he said standing up again raking a hand through his hair.


message 5313: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Anika, now awake and pretty much fine, was sent to tell Hunter where to bring Salem. "Hunter?" she asked, not having ever met him before.

Mackenna nodded, reading a text on her phone from Anika. "Salem is..here? Would you mind overly if we bring her to this room?" she asked carefully.


message 5314: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Yup." he nodded shifting Salem's weight around in his arms.

"No bring her here." Patrik nodded vigorusly.


message 5315: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Mackenna nodded,quickly texting Anika.

Anika was releived when her phone went off. She read it and then turned to Hunter. "Follow me."


message 5316: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Hunter nodded and followed her.

Patrik murmured to himself.


message 5317: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Mackenna stood waiting by the door.

Anika appraoched the room, looking over her shoulder at Hunter every few minutes. She knocked on the door. "Hello?"

Mackenna swung it open, "Come on in." she said grimly.


message 5318: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik faced the door and smiled deviously at Anika.

HUnter walked in and relished in the look on Patrik's face.


message 5319: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Anika jumped back, "I suppose you've got this handled?" She left before either of the agents could answer.

Salem stirred in her 'sleep', the expression on her face one of anxiety and pain.


message 5320: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik laughed at her and went over to Salem.
You ok in there?


message 5321: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Hell no! she was really surprised that she could hear him, but pleasantly so. Then she remembered that he must've allowed her to hear him.


message 5322: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Ow.. Try not to yell. Major headache. Worried sick over here. How're you feeling?


message 5323: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Sorry..didn't mean to yell. Um..horrid? Yeah..that about covers it. It hurts Patrik. It hurts like hell.


message 5324: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments I'm sorry. I'm trying to figure it out. It's not going as fast as I'd like it to.


message 5325: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments I trust you...do you know what's happening? I'm in the dark. Don't laugh; that wasn't a funny joke..it was just stupid. but inside, she smiled at that. In the dark..unconscious..get it?


message 5326: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik smirked a little
Yeah I got it. I'm thinking that it has everything to do with Emmy and that little stunt she pulled earlier. I'm trying to figure it all out.


message 5327: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She was just trying to help...

Mackenna sat by the door, confused as ever, arms crossed over her chest. She started texting Anika again.


message 5328: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments With what? Salem I need to know everything you can tell me.

Patrik looked at Mackenna
"You don't have to stay.."


message 5329: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Too many thoughts. There were just SO many. It hurt, alot. She wanted to see if she could make them fade..dull a bit.


She looked up at him. "Actually, I do.. orders." she scrunched up her nose. "I'm telling Anika to get some things for Salem. Are you hungry? Thirsty?"


message 5330: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Okay, what happened after? She looked like she was talking.

"Yes starving and thristy," Patrik nodded


message 5331: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She was mumbling..she didn't want me to talk to her: said 'Not yet Salem'.

"Anything specific? Anything at all?" Mackenna jsut wanted him to say something that they'd have to actually find.


message 5332: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Ok... Did you talk to her after that? I know this is a lot Salem but... I need to know.

"Ummm..." Patrik thought abotu it sensing her mood "Yeah, water, orange soda and honey mustard and onion pretzels." He said saying the first thing that came to mind. The only thing he really cared about was the water.


message 5333: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She asked me if I was okay. I said no..she said it felt like she was underwater. It was almost the same for me..suffocating.

Mackenna smiled, "Awesome. I'll get on that." she stood quickly, texting Anika and telling her to replace her for a bit.

Anika came by two minutes later, cautious and emotionless. "Thanks!" Mackenna said,leaving and closing the door behind her.

Anika had a water bottle and a small bag with various items in it. She passed it to Patrik. "For Salem." she said,barely speaking. There were a few cloths and other small items.


message 5334: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Huh... ok...

"Thanks," Patrik said with a sisister grin.
"I really scared her didn't I?" Patrik laugehd to Mackenna.


message 5335: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Does that mean anything?

Anika shuddered and stood as far away from him as she could.

Mackenna nodded. "Yeah..I'll be right back." she left.


message 5336: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments I don't know yet. It could...

Patrik grinned at her and waved with a wiggle of his fingers.

"See ya."


message 5337: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Oh. she sort of smiled in her mind. Anika is here?

Anika grimaced. "So she left me here.." she muttered under her breath.


message 5338: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Yup, I scared her the first time I met her.

"Yup, with me. Try to control yourself." Patrik grinned


message 5339: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments I know, another mind smile, I was watching the whole thing.

She looked up at him, anger in her eyes. "Ya..right."


message 5340: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Haha. Funny wasn't it?

Patrik flashed a grin and made the room cold again.


message 5341: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments It was hilarious. And weird..I usually can't see you like that..when I want to.

Anika shivered and glared at him, looking pointedly at Salem.


message 5342: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Yeah, I kind of lost it....

Patrik snickered


message 5343: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments It was great. And don't worry about me and the cold. It makes it hurt less. She felt a little smug, wanting Anika to suffer fear.

Anika made a face at him.


message 5344: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Good.

Patrik smiled at her, it was dark and uncaring.


message 5345: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem wondered how long it would take for her to be able to wake up, sort of dreading it and wanting it at the same time. Anytime. Sarcasm never fails, even when you are not awake.

"Don't."


message 5346: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments I think you should be able to wake up in a little bit longer.

"Aww. Nervous are we?"


message 5347: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Yeah, that will be good.

"No."


message 5348: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Yeah, I agree.

"You sure sweatheart?"


message 5349: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Hmmm....having fun?

"I'm sure. Dead sure."


message 5350: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments For now. She annoys me

"Good."


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