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That was when they were walking... so now he was sitting on the side of her bed ((She is in a bed, right? I just skim read...)) holding her hand.
(('S okay. I wish I could stay on later.))
(('S okay. I wish I could stay on later.))
((I got a great plot twist idea for later! I want to introduce Lizzie! I'm thinking that before Sean became a guard for Cobra and Torch he found Lizzie, and she met up with him at the park after he called her, but she didn't want to stay with him. Her step-mom is with Cobra and Torch and so is her dad, though they're not very high up... In my novel she's special, she's "open" and she can sense others who are like her. Basically she can see people she knows or who are like her in her dreams, and she's more open to mind-readers, and they're sort of attracted to her and want to be near her because of that. I'm thinking that Fiona is like that, too. And maybe Lizzie has the power steal powers away, too. And then she tells her mom about Sean one day and she senses Fiona and sees Sean in her dreams, so she asks about them and I think she decides to go see Fiona and then afterwards she goes to see Sean. And she still has a bit of a crush on him, and she's been helping her parents with their job for a while, finding people with her gift. Sound good?))
Bellie the Squirrelly Girl (I'm a nut, I'm a nut) wrote: "That was when they were walking... so now he was sitting on the side of her bed ((She is in a bed, right? I just skim read...)) holding her hand.(('S okay. I wish I could stay on later.))"
((yeah,she's in a bed))
Salem was deaming and her hand gripped Sean's subconsciously with a crushing hold.
Bellie the Squirrelly Girl (I'm a nut, I'm a nut) wrote: "((I got a great plot twist idea for later! I want to introduce Lizzie! I'm thinking that before Sean became a guard for Cobra and Torch he found Lizzie, and she met up with him at the park after he..."((yeah. *nods* that would actually be pretty cool! And since we already know how Lizzie and Salem feel about each other..*laughs maniacally*))
((XD I know, right? I always get my twist ideas when I'm listening to music... I dunno why. *shrug* But they usually turn out pretty good.))
Sean winced slightly and stroked the back of her hand with his thumb, trying to sooth her.
Sean winced slightly and stroked the back of her hand with his thumb, trying to sooth her.
((olo, I love music!))The smooth touch of his thumb on her hand had the desired effect and her fingers unclenched slightly.
((Yeah, me too.))
Sean kissed her hand. "It'll be alright..." he whispered, hoping maybe in her sleep she would hear him and relax.
Sean kissed her hand. "It'll be alright..." he whispered, hoping maybe in her sleep she would hear him and relax.
Her breathing softened, deepened, and became more even. But her grip didn't change after that.
Sighing, Sean looked around the room to see if anyone was there who could tell him if Salem would be alright.
((Is Kher there?))
((Is Kher there?))
((yeah,somewhere, but SOG plays her. uno momento, I am writing a dream scene.))
((Ah. Hm... I will have to leave soon, btw. *sigh* I don't want to!))
The walls were white. Too white. Abnormally glowing with brightness that made my eyes hurt. There, in the wall, a reflection. Of myself. My hand reached out, unbidden, to touch the glassy surface, glowing, pulsing with light. It connected with a snap of electricity but I didn't pull back; it didn't hurt: I smiled. Someone was watching; their thoughts told me they were. I hated them: I smiled. I wanted to scream, but I couldn't: I smiled. They found all of this, this pain, funny. Stupid idiots. But I still smiled. Inside my head I felt the pressure, the waterlike drowning that took my breath away. I fell, the floor contacting harshly with a thud. The person found this funny. I smiled. Hunter.
Bellie the Squirrelly Girl (I'm a nut, I'm a nut) wrote: "((Ah. Hm... I will have to leave soon, btw. *sigh* I don't want to!))"((*sighs* that sucks))
((Nice.))
Sean closed his eyes and concentrated, then carefully entered Salem's dream.
He walked towards her and offered her his hand. "Salem, are you all right?" he asked quietly. "Can you wake up? I'm scared for you...
Sean closed his eyes and concentrated, then carefully entered Salem's dream.
He walked towards her and offered her his hand. "Salem, are you all right?" he asked quietly. "Can you wake up? I'm scared for you...
((meh..it was the weirdest dream scene I have ever done...but thanks))I looked up at him. "Sean?" I heard myself say it but I didn't feel the motion.
((Turns out I don't have to go right away. Another hour or so, actually. XD ))
He smiled. "Didn't I tell you I can walk into people's dreams? I don't do it much, but... I can." He helped her to her feet. "Come on, wake up for me."
((awssie!!!))I let him help me, knowing the person watching found this funny as well. I didn't smile this time. "I can't. I don't know what's going on Sean."
"Try! You need to wake up... I don't know what's happening, either, but you need to wake up!" His voice was frantic, scared.
I knew, at that moment, that I looked as frightened as he did. Why? Because I did, that's why. "I did try Sean," my voice was just a whisper. "I can't yet. Seriously CAN'T."
He closed his eyes for a second, then opened them again with a sigh. "Do you want me to stay with you until you can? Or do you want me to try and see if anyone else can figure out what's going on?"
I know I shrugged: I felt it. But it hurt more than a shrug should have. "Whatever you want to Sean..."
"I don't know what I want to do! I want to stay here with you. But I probably should see if I can find someone who knows what's going on..." He was torn.
"Do want your mind tells you, not your heart," I smiled ruefully.
"Alright... But one thing first." He took her face in his hands and leaned in, looking into her eyes to make sure she was okay with this.
He touched his lips to hers softly, carefully.
I let him, I shouldn't have, but I did. I pulled back a moment later. "Go. Do good Sean."
He smiled wistfully. "I'll try." He stepped out of her dream.
He looked down at her sleeping face sadly, then looked around for someone who could help.
He looked down at her sleeping face sadly, then looked around for someone who could help.
I sat down once he left, tired and extremely confused. The mirror was still there.((there's her mom and dad))
((Okay. Cool. Eek, though... you wanna be Jack now? XD))
Sean saw Salem's parents and asked, "Do you know what's happened to her? Why can't she wake up?"
Sean saw Salem's parents and asked, "Do you know what's happened to her? Why can't she wake up?"
((sure))Gwen shook her head,silent. But Jack cuffed him. "You should've stopped them!" ((not like, handcuffs..like the hitting kind of cuff))
Sean scowled. "I didn't know what would happen and neither did they!"
((Not to mention he wasn't really there at that point... lol.))
((Not to mention he wasn't really there at that point... lol.))
((olo Jack doesn't care))Jack shook his head. "That doesn't matter."
"Whatever. Are you going to do anything about it? Your daughter might be in a coma right now, and all you're doing is telling me I should've prevented it when we don't even know for sure what happened!" Sean stood up, his fists clenched at his sides.
Jack just looked at him. "They are in observation."
"That helps a lot. Thanks," Sean growled, his voice dripping with sarcasm. "What is wrong with you? I've been talking to her, and she can't wake up and she's scared, and you don't even care!"
Jack was still getting used to the fact that this kid could read mindss. "You talked to her?"
"Yeah." Sean tried to calm down.
He narrowed his eyebrows. "What did she say?"
"Not much. She said she didn't know what was going on and that she'd tried to wake up but couldn't."
Jack nodded. "It was the other girl then." he concluded.
"What was? What is going on with them?" Sean demanded frantically.
((Is Emmy unconscious, too?))
((Is Emmy unconscious, too?))
((yeah. We need SOG))"I don't know. We're waiting on what the other girl's friend thinks."
((So I guess we should stop here and wait for her.))
Sean sighed and sat down on the edge of the bed again, taking Salem's hand.
Sean sighed and sat down on the edge of the bed again, taking Salem's hand.
((Ya, I guess.))I felt pressure on my hand, but when I looked down there was nothing there. So I thought to myself, Sean? Maybe. I curled my fingers tighter and I laughed at the odd way I looked, as if I was holding someone's hand. How silly.
((*sigh* I have to leave soon anyway...))
Sean felt her hand close around his and smiled slightly. He stroked the back of her hand again with his thumb.
Sean felt her hand close around his and smiled slightly. He stroked the back of her hand again with his thumb.
((okay. *nods* perfect timing much?))I ignored the feeling rising up inside of me, but it was harder than usual. The watching man laughed; knowing my 'pain'. A harder hold on the invisible hand was made. Sorry, I thought to myself.
Sean winced slightly. He put his other hand on hers, holding her hand between both of his. "It's okay..." he whispered.
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