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((And now I'm gone.))

Sean nodded. "Hm..."


message 5052: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((bye!))

Salem smiled lightly. "Don't worry, you'll like it more than we will." she winked.


message 5053: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy smirked "You will. Trust me."

Patrik shrugged
"Well... you can't blame me for making sure."


message 5054: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shadow laughed.

"Sure I can, I can blame anything on anyone and I tend to." she smiled. "Especially my little sister."


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy layed down on teh ground.

Patrik nodded
"I know the feeling."


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Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem stood, walking over to the window in the door, confirming the fact that the thoughts she was hearing really were his. Hunter.

Mackenna couldn't help but lower her guard slightly, still fingering the gun in her belt.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((I thought he was killed..))

"What is it?" Emmy asked warily.

Patrik smiled, he tended to have that effect on people.
"Is that your sister?" He motioned to Anika still lying on teh floor.


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Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((Hunter?...he was..sort of. :P))

"Hunter. I thought- I thought he was dead?!" she put her back against the door, terrified at his sudden reappearance.

"No," she shook her head. "Anika is Russian. I'm Australian. My sister is Tylan, she's Salem's friend." Mackenna made a face. "She refuses to join us." she had no idea why she was telling him all this.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((lol ok jc.))
"Hunter?! He was dead I checked myself!" Emmy gasped jumping up to look for herself.

"Ok just checking." Patrik said shrugging. "And I've never heard the Name Tylan before."


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Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((ahaha))

"I know!" Shadow was breathing deeply, trying to calm herself down. "Dammit."

Mackenna smiled again. "My parents liked the name Tyler, but she of course is a girl."


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((Back for a few minutes.))

Sean stood. "I'm guessing Hunter is with them?"


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy paced the room. "What the hell?"

Patrik smiled at her
"Nice. I like how different it sounds."


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Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Yeah. He's friggin with them! He's my second worst enemy!" Salem said anxiously.

"Ya, she likes it too." Mackenna chuckled,really relaxed.


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Sean nodded. "Okay..." He frowned.


message 5065: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Agh, he's supposed to be dead!"


message 5066: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "I know!" Emmy said loudly.

Patrik nodded
"I bet. I know people with odd names that hate them, or it doesn't suit them at all."


message 5067: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shadow peeked out the window again.

Teeghan woke up, "Are we there yet?"

Mackenna nodded. "Yeah." she sat on the floor by Anika.


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"Well apparently he's not. Just calm down... it doesn't help to freak out."


message 5069: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "How can I not!? People don't just die and rise again! Not like Jesus!"


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"Maybe he's a vampire," Sean attempted a joke.


message 5071: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "No, not a vampire!" Shadow said,shuddering.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy paced, her tattoos glowing through her thin t-shirt.

Kher looked around "nearly"

"Yeah, like Emmy. Her name suits her, but its really Emmeline. Emmy is perfect for her." Patrik smiled still standing


message 5073: by [deleted user] (new)

((I'll be disappearing any minute now. Just warning you and saying bye ahead of time. Bye!))


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Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((oki,bye Bellie!))

"Emmy. I really don't want to sing that song..please don't." she said quietly.

"Good, I'm getting bored." she said, normal sarcastic Teeghan Brooke for a bit.

Mackenna nodded. "Yeah, it seems like it would."


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Sean frowned. "I'd like to say there's no such thing, but what with super powers being real and all I don't know. Let's hope not..."


message 5076: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Meh, he's not a vamp."


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"Good." Sean flashed a small smile.


message 5078: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She didn't smile back,just stood and faced the wall,her forehead against the white.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "I can handle it Salem hang on." Emmy said quietly.

Kher laughed.

Patrik laughed
"I'm Patrik. Hows that for normal." He winked


message 5080: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "okay,okay." she said tiredly, the only emotion she could manage without fear or freaking out.

Teeghan looked up at her. "I don't see how boredom is funny...but whatever floats your boat Kherington."

Mackenna nodded. "Yeah, that's pretty average. I'm Mackenna."


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Sean walked over to Salem and took her hand. "So is there anything I need to know about this Hunter?"


message 5082: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "He's an idiot. And he can be so unnervingly sweet that it isn't even funny. He knows what bugs me and uses that info. he knows my strengths and my weaknesses." she whispered. "More than anyone."


message 5083: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Get it together." She mumbled to herself. Thinking of Patrik.

"It's not."

"That's pretty." Patrik said with a smile


message 5084: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shadow stayed wary for Emmy, just in case, but she knew her friend was strong enough to stop. If she wanted to.

"Good."

She sighed. "Thank-you."


message 5085: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy shook her hair out of her eyes. She stopped glowing.

Kher shook her head and jumped out when the car pulled to a stop.

Patrik nodded.
"What are you?"


message 5086: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((sorries, my mom took my laptop to check her Faboo..lol))

Shadow sighed in releif. "Thanks Em."

Teeghan attempted to open the door but it was locked, so she knocked on the window.

"A captivator." she answered without thinking.


message 5087: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((lol its ok hey do you have a facebook?))

Emmy nodded still needing to concentrate.

Kher had someone unlock the door.

Patrik though about that for a second.
"Well I hope your people know that Captivators don't work on me."


message 5088: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((no. I don't..not allowed yet :P))

She hummed again, a new flood of his thoughts hitting hard.

Teeghan got out. "Can I see her?"

She shrugged. "Captivators don't do much. We can sing, and hold attention..but that's about it really."


message 5089: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((:P when you do tell me. I'll friend you. :D))

"What's up Salem?" Emmy asked needing something to get her mind off of this.

"yes you may." Kher said nodding. She started walking.

Patrik nodded "Then there are Decievers. Right? They can make what they say be what you think to be the truth."


message 5090: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((:D If my mom will let me..she'll probably be like " You don't really know her!" roar that sucks :P))

"His thoughts are pissing me off."

She sighed in relief and followed Kher.

"Yeah. I hate them, stupid manipulators."


message 5091: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((lol ik the feeling.))

"DO I even want to know?" Emmy asked him.

Kher led her to Avery. "See. Here she is."

Patrik nodded
"They don't work on us either."


message 5092: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((xD))

"No. No you don't." Salem sighed,still facing the wall.

Teeghan kept a straight face,except her eyes which were wild with emotion. She felt stupid but she asked, "Can I hold her? Or did the dictator say no?"

"Lucky you."




message 5093: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy nodded "How's everyone else doing?" She asked

Kher nodded "Go ahead."

Patrik nodded
"yes it comes in handy."


message 5094: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Teeghan is pissed but she's at least getting to hold Avery..Patrik is-" she laughed. "He has Mackenna talking like she's his best friend!"

Teeghan picked up her baby, cradling the preemie's small head in one hand. "What have you guys been feeding her?"

Mackenna grinned ruefully. "I hate this job," she leaned back to the wall.


message 5095: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy laughed "Your kidding me! Leave it to him."

"What you would have." Kher said smoothly.

"I bet you would. So why do you do it?" Patrik asked smoothly


message 5096: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Ya, Patrik! He must be a good 'friend'." she winked at Emmy.

"Not true." Teeghan said, smirking. "You couldn't have."

She shrugged, a little confused. "I don't know..maybe because my parents do. Sometimes I wish I was Tylan."


message 5097: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy laughed "Oh he is."

"We substituted as well as we could." Kher shrugged

"Why are you confused?" Patik asked "Your parents are they shadows? Or what are they? Tylan just does what she think is right."


message 5098: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She smiled, grateful for the distraction.

"Thanks," she mumbled, just happy her child was well-fed.

Mackenna looked up at him. "Are you like an Emote? Telling how people feel? My parents are Dancers...they just..yeah..Tylan is the only one who thinks right apparently. I blame her friends."


message 5099: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy smiled "You of all people know he's one of my best friends."

Kher nodded again.

"No I'm not an Emote. I'm just good at reading people. I'm a water Lyr I already said that. The exent of my emmotion controling powers stops at Emmy. Like I said I'm the only one that can stop her from loosing herself when she gets bad." Patrik said "Blame them? What did they do but help your sister?"


message 5100: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Yes." she nodded. "Maybe more than that. Maybe." she winked again.

Teeghan kissed her daughter's head.

She rolled her eyes. "I didn't know how else to say it! I 'say it was them' who 'helped' her."


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