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message 5201: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments I jumped up, hearing him inside. In my heart I supposed. Instinctively I had tightened my hold further, but after a nano second I loosened it enough for the invisible hand (which I was now sure belonged to Sean) would not be hurt anymore.


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Sean smiled slightly, sadly, looking down at her. He whispered, "Shadow... I love you."


message 5203: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments That was it: I cried. And just to tell you, he'll pay for that when I wake up. Because you know what the watching man did? He laughed. Again.


message 5204: by [deleted user] (new)

"Don't cry..." He brushed away the tears running down her cheeks.


message 5205: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments The feeling of his unseen hand on my face was enough to make me want to collapse. I wondered breifly if my moving him out of the way from here in this dream would work. I tried it, finding his hand and just holding it in my other one.


message 5206: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean closed his eyes, and entered her dream again.
"Shadow... I talked to your parents. They don't know what's happening... they're waiting to hear from one of Emmy's friends." He said the words quietly, his hand still on her cheek while he held her hand in his other.


message 5207: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments I tried again to pull his hand off my face, now that I could see him. "You mean Patrik?" I sighed,somewhere in between releif and anger.


message 5208: by [deleted user] (new)

He frowned and let her take his hand away. "I don't know... probably."


message 5209: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I think it is..Torch hasa him. He'll know.. I hope." I still can't see the future, even the present is hiding. Emmy. But I don't blame her. Not one bit.


message 5210: by [deleted user] (new)

"Yeah... I hope so." He sighed. "Why did you cry?"


message 5211: by [deleted user] (new)

((Going now.))


message 5212: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((buhbye!))

I pretended that I hadn't, "I didn't cry.."


message 5213: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((I'm here now.... hows that for timing?))


message 5214: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((olo, hello SOG..sorry that I keep callig you that...hmm.. WRMV. lol))


message 5215: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((are you still on!?))


message 5216: by [deleted user] (new)

((XD Well, turns out that I don't have to go for another forty-five minutes or so. So, hi!))

"You did. I wiped away the tears." Sean insisted.


message 5217: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((olo, I hope she's still on then. this will b e great!))

Dammit, I thought to myself. "Um..I don't know why."


message 5218: by [deleted user] (new)

((XD Yeah.))

Sean sighed. "Really? It was when I told you that I love you."


message 5219: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((lol its ok I like SOG better anyway. So how can I smush Emmy back into this??? hmmm...))

Somehow, I'm there I'm home. That weird memory that every kid has, like the pefrect christmas memory. Its like that, when you are little and everything has magic and love in it. Nothing like the cold reality of your older life. It's that time I'm with my mom and she telling me a bed time story about the last girl to be born with tattoos. It's a weird story but somehow that is the best memory I have...

Patrik looked at Mackenna.
"That's it." He pointed at the screne showing the beginning of Emmy glowing and pulsatign light.
"THis is where the problem starts"


message 5220: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((Well then. *giggles*))

I froze. "Um..oh.."

Mackenna nodded. "What is the problem? What happened in there?"


message 5221: by [deleted user] (new)

"Shadow... why did that make you cry?" His eyes were pained.


message 5222: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Love hurts.." I said quietly, looking up at him. "I-I didn't think you really loved me..you know?"


message 5223: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments I look up and turn around, taking my attention away from that memory and draw it to what seemed liek Salem's voice.
"What the hell...?" I ask way beyond confusion.
I feel and sound like I'm underwater.


"Look," He played it in slowmotion. Then paused it after Emmy had done whatever she had done to Salem.
"See how the silver doesn't go away from the edges here?" He pointed at the silver outlines in her Tattoos.


message 5224: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments My gaze was ripped from Sean's face, to the sound of Emmy. My body hurt again, felt heavy and my mind swam. No thoughts. "Emmy?" I hated how my words slurred as if I were drunk.


"Yeah," she nodded. "What does that mean?"


message 5225: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Salem... What the hell happened?" I ask her as if she would know. I run a hand through my hair, that simple task takes too much energy. I look down at myself, my tattoos feel as if they are on fire. just burning my skin, nonstop. I sink to the floor.

"Something pretty damn bad." Patrik watched the rest of the film. Concentrating hard, trying to figure out what she had done.
"Can we turn up the Audio?"


message 5226: by [deleted user] (last edited Feb 22, 2010 12:42PM) (new)

Sean frowned. "Shadow... are you alright? Is she... part of your dream?"


message 5227: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments I shake my head, to both, but now I feel faint. And sick to my stomach. "Emmy.. I don't know." I go to sit next to her,because if I don't, I'll fall.

Mackenna nodded,turning it up as loud as it could go, which was fairly loud.


message 5228: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean bites his lip and says, "I'm going... I need to tell your parents, I think." He steps out of her dream.

"Jack. Emmy is in her dream now... and she's getting how she was before. I don't know what's wrong, but... I don't think she should be around Emmy right now." Sean's voice was worried and he hardly cared that he hated the man that he was speaking to.


message 5229: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments I look over at her. Trying to figure this out for myself
"Tell me what your feeling. I feel like I'm stuck underwater and I'm burning at the same time."


"Salem.. Can I try something?" Emmy's voice bounces off the walls of Patrik's cell.
"Ok..." Salem replied
Patrik watched as Emmy did her thing.
"Well. This isn't good." Patrik stated


message 5230: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Jack nodded. "I'll see what I can do, in the meantime, I'd appreciate your help."


message 5231: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean nodded. "What do you want me to do?" he voice was flat, toneless.


message 5232: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Write, Read, Music, Volleyball wrote: " I look over at her. Trying to figure this out for myself
"Tell me what your feeling. I feel like I'm stuck underwater and I'm burning at the same time."


"Salem.. Can I try something?" Emmy's..."


"I feel sick," I say instinctively. "But not like the flu. My head feels like there's too much in there, but I can't see or hear thoughts..or the future. Emmy, I feel scared and heavy.."

Mackenna leaned in, "What is it?"


message 5233: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Bellie the Squirrelly Girl wrote: "Sean nodded. "What do you want me to do?" he voice was flat, toneless."

Jack didn't say anything, too prideful really. So Gwen stepped up. "Can you go back in if needed?"


message 5234: by [deleted user] (new)

"Yeah," he answered immediately. "I just need to be close to her to do it."


message 5235: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Gwen nodded. "Thank-you for this."


message 5236: by [deleted user] (new)

He sighed. "It's all for her."


message 5237: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments I nodd slowly.
"Ok." I want to stand and pace the dream room, but all my energy is drained.
"Salem... I think it's me. And yes i know that I did this to us. But thats not how I mean it. You know how you can't see my future? Like that. Like I'm this block ish grey area, that can both magnify and take away your powers the closer you get to me..." I thought out loud.


"Sometimes Salem can't see our futures or see us at all. Sometimes its freakishly magnified. I think thats what happened. You need to take Salem far away from Emmy. Now."


message 5238: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Bellie the Squirrelly Girl wrote: "He sighed. "It's all for her.""

"I know."


message 5239: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Write, Read, Music, Volleyball wrote: " I nodd slowly.
"Ok." I want to stand and pace the dream room, but all my energy is drained.
"Salem... I think it's me. And yes i know that I did this to us. But thats not how I mean it. You kno..."


I look at her, sort of understanding. "Well that's wonderful. I don't blame you Emmy." I can't. I'm just like that sometimes.

Mackenna nodded. "Like..how far?"


message 5240: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments ((can I come in somehow? where are you all?))


message 5241: by [deleted user] (new)

He nodded and looked at Salem. He squeezed her hand gently.


message 5242: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ♫ Mandy ♫ wrote: "((can I come in somehow? where are you all?))"

((Yeah, you can. Blaze and Liv are somewhere near the United camp thing..the rest of them are at Torch or Cobra))




message 5243: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Bellie the Squirrelly Girl wrote: "He nodded and looked at Salem. He squeezed her hand gently."

I looked down at my hand again, the sensation off when paired with the feelings from Emmy. "Hmm."


message 5244: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments ((alright, what are you all at Cobra for?))


message 5245: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments I look at her. "Still I'm so sorry. I had no idea that I could do this." I wave my arm at her meaning this screwed up state that we were in. "When Sean comes back, and he will come back. Have him take you out of here. I think that might help with this."

"Pretty far." Patrik answered. "I think that if they keep them in their longer than they already have we are going to be in trouble."


message 5246: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ♫ Mandy ♫ wrote: "((alright, what are you all at Cobra for?))"

((they got 'kidnapped' olo))




message 5247: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Write, Read, Music, Volleyball wrote: " I look at her. "Still I'm so sorry. I had no idea that I could do this." I wave my arm at her meaning this screwed up state that we were in. "When Sean comes back, and he will come back. Have him ..."

I smile lightly. "I forgive you. It's funny..I don't do that. Lucky you," I knew I sounded like an idiot and that what I said really, really didn't matter. But for some weirdo reason I just wanted her to know. "I will. I'll ask him..but Emmy..will you be okay?"

Mackenna grimaced. "Shit. They won't listen to me you know."


message 5248: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments ((Oi!!! no cuss cuss!!!))


message 5249: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments ((OK))

Marie heard other voices. "Josh," she whispered to her friend. "I don't think we're the only prisoners!"


message 5250: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((Mackenna is a - nevermind. They don't say anything beyond that and damn. don't worry))


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