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message 5251: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments I smile at her. "Funnily enough neither do I. SO forgiveness means more to me than normal people." She looked up thinking about the question. She was silent for a minute.
"I have no idea... I honestly don't know. And that, scares the hell out of me." I finally say.


"Well you have to tell them. The longer they are together and in comas the less likely it is that both of them will end up alive when this is over." Patrik said angrilly. "If Emmy dies..."


message 5252: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean sighed and looked to Gwen and Jack. "I need to go back and see how she's doing... I just came back to tell you."
Without waiting for an answer, he closed his eyes and went back into Salem's dream.

He walked over to Shadow and knelt by her. "Are you okay?"


message 5253: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments I look up at them both. "Emmy...we'll fix this. Both of us..Patrik too. We must." I turn to Sean. "No." The tears are back and I despise them.


Mackenna nodded, "Okay, okay! I'll try!" she left the room quickly, phoning Kherington.


message 5254: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments "Hey," Marie called softly to the others. "Who are you guys?"

((you guys are all at Cobra right??))


message 5255: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((Mackenna and Patrik are at Torch. Salem and Emmy are unconscious all the italics right now are the dream.))


message 5256: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Kher picked up her cell.
"Hello..?" She said absently.

"I know you will." I smile and then look at Sean. "You need to get her out of here. I dont care how it gets done just do it." I say leavign the explanation to Salem.

Patrik nodded and stood now more anxious than before.


message 5257: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments ((oohhh!! in that case, i'm at Torch, cuz I don't dream well! :)))


message 5258: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean nodded and helped Salem to her feet. "I've never tried taking someone out of their dreams before... but I can try doing it the way I do it for myself."


message 5259: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((okay, lol))

Mackenna started talking. "Kher, we have a problem."

I had no clue what to say to Sean, so I jsut nodded, wincing at a stab of pain.




message 5260: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments I look up at him. "I mean her body too. Get her away from me. It's for her own good."


message 5261: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Kher nodded "Tell me about it. Do you have any idea from the video?" Seh asked praying for her to say 'Yes'


message 5262: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments ((scratch all the dialogue I said earlier, sorry, this entrance will be really choppy!!))

Marie and Josh walked to the group of people. "What's up???" Marie said loudly.


message 5263: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments I feel sad, the pain is multiplying but I'm not worried about that: it's what happens when you happen to have a gift that makes you feel everything three times more powerfully than you should. I lean on him.


message 5264: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Write, Read, Music, Volleyball wrote: "Kher nodded "Tell me about it. Do you have any idea from the video?" Seh asked praying for her to say 'Yes'"

"Uh, yeah. It's not good Kher. You have to seperate them. Apparently by a lot..oi..I don't know how much though!"


message 5265: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Kher looked at the phone incredously
"Umm. Ok...? I'll phone Jack and Gwen. Hang on. I might need more information" Kher clicked off and called Gwen.


message 5266: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean nodded. "Okay, I will." He put Salem's arm over his shoulder and closed his eyes, concentrating on leaving the dream. He took a step forward and was back in his body.




message 5267: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments "HELLOO!!" Marie yelled. "Need help?" Hey-I've seen you somewhere."

She looks to....((is Shadow, Teeghan, or Eric, or anyone I know around??))


message 5268: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments I look up at her. "I'll be seeing you." I wink trying to lighten this situation.


message 5269: by Ky (last edited Feb 22, 2010 01:19PM) (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Write, Read, Music, Volleyball wrote: "Kher looked at the phone incredously
"Umm. Ok...? I'll phone Jack and Gwen. Hang on. I might need more information" Kher clicked off and called Gwen."


Gwen answered her cell, "Yes?"



I smiled lightly at her, but then something happened.

Salem wasn't in the dream anymore, but she wasn't conscious.

((Teeghan is at Cobra. Eric is at United, and Shadow is at Cobra too, she's going by Salem right now))


message 5270: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean looked at Salem and shook her. "Shadow, wake up."

((Brb, gotta walk a dog. Which stinks. We have a fenced yard, but if we let him out he'll dig out, so I have to take him out on a leash. *sigh*))


message 5271: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments ((Right. you know, I really need to find a spot to be, maybe I should stick around at Cobra. :) I'm indecisive or maybe not...i don't know!!)))


message 5272: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Bellie the Squirrelly Girl wrote: "Sean looked at Salem and shook her. "Shadow, wake up."

((Brb, gotta walk a dog. Which stinks. We have a fenced yard, but if we let him out he'll dig out, so I have to take him out on a leash. *sig..."


((okipoki))


message 5273: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ♫ Mandy ♫ wrote: "((Right. you know, I really need to find a spot to be, maybe I should stick around at Cobra. :) I'm indecisive or maybe not...i don't know!!)))"

((United maybe? Blaze and Liv are there))


message 5274: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Kher inhaled and said "We seem to have a bigger problem with them than we anticipated. They need to be sepperated by a large margin, or.. I don't know what's going to happen to them but it's not going to be good."

I exhale as both Sean and Salem shimmer and vanish, leaving me to my dream prison.


message 5275: by Ky (last edited Feb 22, 2010 01:27PM) (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Gwen exhaled. "Well then move them!"




message 5276: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments ((are Blaze and Liv online? u no wat i mean :)))




message 5277: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Yup I'm liv and Kenny is Blaze. Just jump in.))

Kher sighed "What do you think we are trying to do?"


message 5278: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Gwen sighed. "Fine, update me when it's done."


message 5279: by [deleted user] (new)

((Back, but now I have to eat in a few minutes... I'll be back at six.))




message 5280: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean looked at Salem and shook her. "Shadow, wake up."


message 5281: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments ((ok))

Marie and Josh walked into the tall building of United. Instead of seeing Teeghan and Eric there, they saw two new people.

"Who are you? Where is Eric and Teeghan?" Marie glared at the newcomers.

"Come on, Marie. No need to pick a fight with everyone you meet!" Josh scolded.


message 5282: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Bellie the Squirrelly Girl wrote: "((Back, but now I have to eat in a few minutes... I'll be back at six.))

"


((what time is it there?))




message 5283: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shadow could hear him, but it was too hard to come back. Too hard to open her eyes. No. Just too hard, and it hurt like hell.


message 5284: by [deleted user] (new)

((4:30 It's just that I have a lesson to do, too. So I'll be done with that at six.))


message 5285: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ♫ Mandy ♫ wrote: "((ok))

Marie and Josh walked into the tall building of United. Instead of seeing Teeghan and Eric there, they saw two new people.

"Who are you? Where is Eric and Teeghan?" Marie glared at the new..."


Blaze smiled. "I think we met. I'm Blaze."


message 5286: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Bellie the Squirrelly Girl wrote: "((4:30 It's just that I have a lesson to do, too. So I'll be done with that at six.))"

((it's 4:30 here too. I have to go to dinner soon..olo we're goin out somewhere))


message 5287: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean looked up to Gwen. "I need to take her away from Emmy. Now. Where can I take her?"


message 5288: by [deleted user] (new)

((Ah. XD Cool. We're just having pizza. And it's done, so I've gotta go!))


message 5289: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Kennyninja (the ninja is silent) wrote: "♫ Mandy ♫ wrote: "((ok))

Marie and Josh walked into the tall building of United. Instead of seeing Teeghan and Eric there, they saw two new people.

"Who are you? Where is Eric and Teeghan?" M..."


"Did we?" Josh stuck out his hand. "I'm Josh, this is Marie. What's going on? Where is everyone. The halls are empty...has Cobra struck?"


message 5290: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Back lol just in time for you all to leave soon.))

Liv looked at Josh and Marie "I'm Liv."

Kher shook her head and clicked back to Mackenna.
"What will happen to them if they aren't sepperated?"

I stood using the wall to pull myself up. There had to be a reason I was here...


message 5291: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((I'm on again, mom stole the comp AGAIN))

Mackenna bit her lip. "The guy says that they might..die."

Blaze grimaced. "They didn't strike here.."


message 5292: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((lol jez,;)))

Kher sucked in a breath "Shit... And what guy..?"

Liv bit her lip to keep the angry relpy from leaving them.


message 5293: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((olo I know! she just stole my aunt's now cause I won't let her back on...:P))

"Patrik, he knows Emmy and Salem..he knows more about Emmy than we ever will."






message 5294: by Hannah (last edited Feb 22, 2010 02:21PM) (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((lol very nice :D))

"Yeah. I'd expect he does. They've been together since they were seven." Kher said accessing the file they patched together about them.

"Damn it!" I yell at the dream like reality I've been living in. "Patrik where are you when I need you?" I whisper


message 5295: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((*grin* o__O))

"You guys know that much over there at Cobra?" Mackenna asked.




message 5296: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((I've gtg..roar. Dinner. I'll be on later))


message 5297: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((same here perfect timing. :} ))

"We have a shoddy file on them over here. Do you want a copy?" Kher said skimming the file and adding to it when it needed to be added to.


message 5298: by [deleted user] (new)

((Well, I won't be on later. This is the last time I'll be here and I'll be disappearing any minute now.))
Sean looked up at Gwen. "I need to take her away from Emmy. Now. Where can I take her?"


message 5299: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Kenny isn't back yet! :( ))


message 5300: by [deleted user] (new)

((Sad...))


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