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message 351: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Emma (Ayala, Razia, Desta, Zadia, Gaza) wrote: "like it :P
could you add more to Personality and history please? just a little more? :P
otherwise approved, just add more to personality and history, if this is her character, she is defs Candor"


Okay she's been updated sorry for taking so long haven't actually been on a computer in the past couple days


message 352: by mels (new)

mels (padmeskywalkers) Melisquish wrote: "Name:
Veronica Beauregard

Gender:
Female

Appearance:
Personality:
Veronica hides behind her faction for support. She pretends to be a tough girl who doesn't care about anything, but you can s..."


Is she approved?


message 353: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Sorry Meli I've been busy I'll take a look at her now


message 354: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
I think you need to add a bit more history


message 355: by mels (new)

mels (padmeskywalkers) Katiana Rosa Juarez wrote: "I think you need to add a bit more history"
Gah! Stupid thing... I had more... Must not have posted... Is it alright, now? I think that's what I put...


message 356: by CJ (new)

CJ | 1497 comments Melisquish wrote: "Katiana Rosa Juarez wrote: "I think you need to add a bit more history"
Gah! Stupid thing... I had more... Must not have posted... Is it alright, now? I think that's what I put..."


"The infirmary was more full on those days."


BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!


message 357: by mels (last edited Mar 02, 2014 02:40PM) (new)

mels (padmeskywalkers) CJ wrote: "Melisquish wrote: "Katiana Rosa Juarez wrote: "I think you need to add a bit more history"
Gah! Stupid thing... I had more... Must not have posted... Is it alright, now? I think that's what I put....."


XD
How did that not copy? Grr... That was my favorite part!


message 358: by dyanne (new)

dyanne LOL #Thestruggle


message 359: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Okay so basically your favorite part was what didn't copy that's kind of funny lol but Approved please proceed to aptitude test


message 360: by dyanne (new)

dyanne @Katiana, Evelina already approved my characters but it seems as if you're the head mod and I just want to run them by you...


message 361: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Damn i never see this until too late lol


message 362: by Evelina (new)

Evelina (EvelinaOfTheElves) | 889 comments Mod
Woah, Dyanne! :O Most people don't do that. My gosh... I must commend you for your patience! xD


message 363: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Wait wasn't talking to you Dyanne was talking to Melisquish


message 364: by dyanne (new)

dyanne Oh... Okay, sorry, I was a bit confuzzled.


message 365: by DarknessIsUponUs, Frozen, Doctor Who and Sherlock are my lives no judging (new)

DarknessIsUponUs | 492 comments Mod
Could you add more to appearance as in a worded description?
also some more to personality and history, after that has happened you are approved


message 366: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Could you add more to the history please


message 367: by mikaela (new)

mikaela | 4 comments Sorry, is this okay?

Name: Jasmine

Gender: Female

Appearance: https://scontent-b-ord.xx.fbcdn.net/h...

Personality: Honest with every one, other people see her as sometimes insensitive, but also as trustworthy and confident. She is also easy-going and is at peace with others in her faction.

History: For a long time, she's been feeling like there's more for her, she wants to leave. She has been dreading the aptitude test and is really sacred of what she might receive as a faction. Over the course of her childhood, she has found out her mother is originally from Candor, and thinks of that as an option for her come the choosing ceremony. Her father had stayed in the same faction. She never really had time with her father. He was always somewhere else with her brothers. She was with her mother when she wasn't in her room keeping to herself. Jasmine is sure this faction is not the place for her.
Current Faction: Amity

Thoughts on leaving faction or staying and why: leaving; she doesn't feel like she belongs

Divergent: no


message 368: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Yes approved please proceed to aptitude test


message 369: by Claire (new)

Claire (cbert101) | 2 comments Name: Claire
Fraction: dauntless
Personality: outgoing, myself, not a dumb blond,and sometimes freak at little things.
Fraction wishing to go to: dauntless


message 370: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Need a lot more than that please Claire and if it's in progress please state it so everyone knows


message 371: by Evelina (new)

Evelina (EvelinaOfTheElves) | 889 comments Mod
Personally... I don't think a character should be you yourself. It just rubs me the wrong way... :P I mean, it's "roleplaying" for a reason. And Katiana: is Dauntless closed yet?


message 372: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Yeah I think Emma who was the last to give her opinion on the matter closed it but I have some editing to do on the character list


message 373: by dyanne (last edited Mar 03, 2014 09:41PM) (new)

dyanne Name: Grace Logan

Gender: Female

Appearance:
description

Personality:
Blunt, sarcastic, witty, and a bit clueless and ditzy at times, Grace has never known how and when to shut up. She spins elaborate lies so that people like her and respect her, but things never go as planned and she always ends up telling the truth. This has happened a couple of times, and as of now, she is so tired of hiding and trying to please everyone that she has resorted to being honest and wearing her personality on the outside. She is fun-loving and humorous, but she's not afraid to be straight up honest with you and let her inner raptor go crazy at times. She's not the most intellectual of people, but she does love a good scream-fest or a shouting match.

History: Born in Amity, Grace had the misconception from a young age that the best way to keep the peace was to try to please everybody, and that meant EVERYBODY. In the end, it turned out to be the hardest way, as she had to lie and spin stories to everyone from the faction leaders to her parents to her friends and classmates to keep them all satisfied. By the time she was 12, she had no idea who she was anymore, and at one point, she snapped. As of now, she makes a point in being brutally honest, and she feels as if it is better to understand and know other people, to be able to see through them, to know they are being honest with you, than to keep a superficial type of peace. Her honest and her sarcastic personality has gotten her into a bit of trouble here and there, but she feels that once she turns 16, she will finally find a place where she belongs.

Current Faction: Amity

Thoughts on leaving faction or staying and why: (before the aptitude test)

She knows she is not suited for either Amity or Abnegation. She's not that bright, so that kicks out Erudite, and it really only leaves Candor and Dauntless.

Divergent: (yes or no or slightly {meaning one result on the aptitude test})
Slightly


message 374: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Alright Approved please proceed to aptitude test


ஐღ♥Stine♥ღஐ (stine0489) Name: Eva Johnson
Gender: female
Appearance: http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-Bo405VBkgKU...
Personality: she is kind, caring and smart. She never wants to be the cause of any issue but she likes to know as much as she can about something before making a decision.
History: she comes from a family that generation after generation has remained amity. And never once has she ever thought about transferring to another fraction.
Current Faction: amity
Thoughts on leaving faction or staying and why: she has never thought of leaving. For as far back as anyone can remember her family has been amity.
Divergent: yes


message 376: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Approved please proceed to aptitude test


message 377: by DarknessIsUponUs, Frozen, Doctor Who and Sherlock are my lives no judging (new)

DarknessIsUponUs | 492 comments Mod
Name: Trey Jackson
Gender: Male
Appearance: http://photos2.demandstudios.com/dm-r...
Personality: he is a very nice and understanding person, he likes to be close with his family, but knows that he will make the right choice when initiation comes around
History: Trey is from a family of Candor's, even though he loves the Candor way of life, he just likes to lie to much, he is very good at deceiving people and is beginning to hate Candor and his family.
Current Faction: Candor
Thoughts on leaving or staying: Trey would very much like to leave, and believes that Erudite would be the best place for him, he is the first of his family to ever change factions
Divergent: NO


message 378: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Approved please proceed to aptitude test


message 379: by Evelina (new)

Evelina (EvelinaOfTheElves) | 889 comments Mod
Sorry, but you're going to need a lot more information in appearance, personality, and history; as well as the faction he wants to transfer too and why. For an example of an acceptable character sheet, you may want to see some of the above. Also, please note, as stated in Announcements, that Dauntless is closed for the time being.


message 380: by [deleted user] (new)

which is really sad but necessary, or so I hear. :(


message 381: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Is there anyway you might be able to write the personality, appearance and history so that they have at least three sentences each please and when you can can you just make both postings of your character into one please


message 382: by Tyson (new)

Tyson Rasmussen (hooptyson10) thanks for helping i was on my ipod and couldn't copy my last post sry


message 383: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
That's fine and you're welcome


message 384: by Tyson (new)

Tyson Rasmussen (hooptyson10) I have no clue what to put as appearance


message 385: by Tyson (new)

Tyson Rasmussen (hooptyson10) help plz


message 386: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
You could always find a picture if your really having a hard time I know trying to describe a character can be quite difficult


message 387: by Tyson (new)

Tyson Rasmussen (hooptyson10) thanks


message 388: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
no problem


message 389: by Tyson (new)

Tyson Rasmussen (hooptyson10) is there a chance i could put not filed


message 390: by Evelina (new)

Evelina (EvelinaOfTheElves) | 889 comments Mod
Hmm. Try looking on the internet for a picture of what you want him to look like. Just search the qualities in Google that you want him to have, along with "teen boy". So search something like "brown-haired teen boy". Then click on the image, and "view image". Post the link next to "Appearance", and make sure to describe the character based off of the image. :)


message 391: by DarknessIsUponUs, Frozen, Doctor Who and Sherlock are my lives no judging (new)

DarknessIsUponUs | 492 comments Mod
just find a picture that represents your character, and then put a link and describe them in words


message 392: by Tana Lovegood of Dumbledore's Army✞~ (last edited Mar 06, 2014 07:07PM) (new)

Tana Lovegood of Dumbledore's Army✞~ Rogers/America  (givealittleloveandsaveanimals) Name: Adeline Jefferson
Gender: female
Personality: she is cheerful and bubbly. She is loves to laugh and gives great hugs. She puts others before herself she is very selfless and isn't the bravest person because she is afraid to try new things but will always protect her friends! She loves games and having fun. She is very peaceful and avoids conflict between her family.She doesn't care about education but is a great problem solver and is "street smart"
Appearance: http://www.trendfashion2013.com/brown...

History: her mother was a Erudite and her father was Abnegation they divorced when she was 4 because their factions were enemies. Her mom and dad are always fighting and she hated the conflict. She grew up in Erudite a place full of smart people and knowledge seekers and she hated it because she didn't care about education. She doesn't want to be in Erudite because knowledge leads to lust of power.She has a sister who is factionless and a brother who died a few months ago. She is unsure which faction to choose but likes Amity and Abnegation are her top wanted factions.
Current faction: Erudite

Divergent:Yes

Thoughts on leaving or staying: she is leaving Erudite because she doesn't belong there and doesn't agree with their ways of thinking. She also doesn't value education or knowledge and the people there have to much lust for power in her opinion.


message 393: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
The picture isn't in the link the personality needs to be put in three sentences and the history needs more and you don't get to choose what your divergence is that's for the aptitude to decide


message 394: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Okay biggest question how is she from Erudite if her mom is Candor and her father is Abnegation?


message 395: by Tana Lovegood of Dumbledore's Army✞~ (last edited Mar 06, 2014 02:34PM) (new)

Tana Lovegood of Dumbledore's Army✞~ Rogers/America  (givealittleloveandsaveanimals) Katiana Rosa Juarez wrote: "Okay biggest question how is she from Erudite if her mom is Candor and her father is Abnegation?"

Yeah I changed that to erudite just now so it could make more sense


message 396: by [deleted user] (last edited Mar 06, 2014 05:27PM) (new)

Name:
Xevelia (Se-ve-le-ah) Collins

Gender:
Female

Appearance:
description
dark brown hair, and purple eyes (runs in the family)

Personality:
She has trouble holding her tongue when it comes to her opinion. She has a bad temper, but does what she must for her younger siblings she cares for. She gets irritated fast and is always curious about something. She is smart, but must hide it, and she hates having to hide who she really is.

History: She was raised by her mother along with her older brother, older sister, little brother, and little sister. Her father died when she was young for reasons she did not know until she found out about divergence. As a result, her mother hates the Dauntless for executing him. She could never be a selfless as some of her family members. Her older brother chose Erudite once he took the aptitude test and her older sister chose Candor.

Current Faction:
Abnegation

Thoughts on leaving faction or staying and why: Leaving. She doesn't belong there and she knows it.

Divergent:
yes


message 397: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Xevelia is approved please proceed to aptitude


Tana Lovegood of Dumbledore's Army✞~ Rogers/America  (givealittleloveandsaveanimals) Ok I added more to the history and other stuff :) tell me if I need to change more stuff!


message 399: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Alright Adeline is now approved please proceed to aptitude test


message 400: by Sab (last edited Mar 06, 2014 09:05PM) (new)

Sab (unluckyducky) | 295 comments Name: Cleo Bane
Gender: Female
Appearance:
description
Personality: Cleo''s quick to temper, and quicker in fighting back. Her tongue's like a serpent just waiting to strike out, and attack her opponent. Though she may have a tough exterior, she's soft and vulnerable on the inside. She's not easy to fool, but she falls for people too quick. She's intelligent, and doesn't really know what she wants to do with her future.
History: Cleo's past is dark, and murky. Her parents were never abusive, but nor were they warm, and close to her. She was raised as a stranger in her own house, and had no freedom to be who she really wanted to be. Raised beside her older, and apparently smarter brother she's felt as if she's lived in his shadows all her life. Her parents always preferred him to her anyway, he was more... Tamable whereas she asked too many questions.
Current Faction: Erudite.
Thoughts on leaving faction or staying and why: (before the aptitude test) Cleo longs to be free, and choose her own future. She wants to break free of her parents leash, and write her own life.
Divergent: (yes or no or slightly {meaning one result on the aptitude test}) Yes


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