Initiates Creation

[[deleted user]]

Fine. If you will not approve me, I approve myself.

[mels]

@Luna, while you're waiting, you can make a male. They just aren't accepting females presently. And you can't approve yourself...

[[deleted user]]

I just did. And I would rather die than create a male. All the girls would start trying to hit on me and... uhg.

[mels]

...

[Kjonesbookpage]

Then just wait a couple days I bet that's all it's going to take at his rate if you hadn't noticed someone's already made another guy that puts the tally up to like 6 guys since I made the announcement

[[deleted user]]

I can't wait anymore.

[Kjonesbookpage]

Are you sure you can't wait a couple days because if I'm wrong and there still aren't enough guys by then then I will approve your girl that's my final offer take it or leave it's your choice

[Kjonesbookpage]

Xandra wrote: "Name: Orion Blake
Gender: Male
Appearance: cropped black hair, cold blue eyes
Personality: if he does not know someone, he is cold, calculating, honest (but often cruelly so)
History:
Current Fact..."

As soon as he has a history I will approve him

[[deleted user]]

Name:Kai Lakes

Gender:Male

Appearance:Tall with short brown and bright blue gold rimmed eyes .

Personality:Quite quiet until you get to know him then you realise how mad he is and how much he longs to leave his faction.

History:He has just lived a quiet life and wishes to leave to join dauntless .

Current Faction: Amity

Thoughts on leaving faction or staying and why::He would love to leave as he is too much of a risk taker and cares for his own opinion too much to stay in amity.

Divergent: yes

[Kjonesbookpage]

I'm sorry Natasha but I can't accept any girls right now as we are trying to even out the genders in the group after three more guys are accepted I will gladly take a look at Asha I am very sorry for the inconvenience

[Xandra]

History: His parents are very kind and honest people, and he has always been shunned for being honest in all the wrong ways. The only one he showed any kindness towards was his little sister, until she passed away a couple years back. He planned on staying in Candor for her, but now that she's gone, all he wants is to get out of Candor and start fresh.

[Kjonesbookpage]

Okay Orion is approved please proceed to aptitude test

[Xandra]

Thanks

[Kjonesbookpage]

No problem

[[deleted user]]

Ok I could change her name ect.

[[deleted user]]

*etc

[Kjonesbookpage]

Sure as long as the characters a guy it will be fine or if you want the girl just make a separate guy and as soon as another couple guys are made I'll take a look at her okay

[[deleted user]]

Ok I'v changed it so it's now a boy.

[Kjonesbookpage]

Okay give me a second

[Kjonesbookpage]

Just go through and proof read it it still says she in a couple places but beyond that approved please proceed to aptitude test

[[deleted user]]

OK

[Kjonesbookpage]

We need more guys in Erudite there is only one which is sad as Candor actually has more guys than girls at the moment lol

[CJ]

Katiana Rosa Juarez wrote: "We need more guys in Erudite there is only one which is sad as Candor actually has more guys than girls at the moment lol"

Heh, heh. Some of the Candor guys lead sad, sorry lives now that they foolishly challenged a transfer from Dauntless to a fight, though...

[Kjonesbookpage]

lol that's just something isn't it lol they really should have known better than to challenge a former dauntless, where did their common sense go lol XD

[mels]

They evidently weren't an Erudite transfer... XD

[Kjonesbookpage]

Too true LOL XD

[mels]

The Erudite transfer didn't do all that much... Because APPARENTLY wait for me=over 70 posts XD

[Kjonesbookpage]

Yeah that sucks lol

[mels]

XD

[CJ]

Melisquish wrote: "The Erudite transfer didn't do all that much... Because APPARENTLY wait for me=over 70 posts XD"

Go ahead and post so we can get 70 more in before other people come online! XD

[mels]

XD

[CJ]

Melisquish wrote: "XD"

But seriously, you can post.

[mels]

Haha, k :)

[Evelina]

Two things: Natasha, is it possible for you to maybe edit your comment so that the history is included in the first character claim? That way, it'll be easier to read. If you're on mobile, that's fine. Just as long as you do it, I'm good.

And maybe we should move this to chat or something, lol! xD

[Kjonesbookpage]

Yay good timing Evelina I just made a character that I was about to place up that means you can look at him lol

[Kjonesbookpage]

Name: Seth
Gender: Male
Appearance:
Personality: Prefers to stay out of the line of fire not someone who gets involved in fights intentionally. He likes learning just not learning to fight. He is more quiet than vocal.
History: He was always the odd man out when it came to doing anything in Dauntless and decided he had had enough. He made up his mind to transfer factions when he was allowed to take the aptitude test and hoped he got something other than Dauntless. He almost didn’t care which other faction he got but if he could choose it might be Erudite.
Current Faction: Dauntless
Thoughts on leaving faction or staying and why: Yes he plans to leave the moment he gets the chance. Dauntless is just too violent for him.
Divergent: No

[Evelina]

Me likey! ^U^ His name fits his personality... that's really hard to do, lol! xD I approve him! What d'ya think his aptitude is? :3

[Kjonesbookpage]

thank you thank you *takes a bow* I was going for Erudite for him get some guys in there lol I'll go do that now lol

[Alex]

Name: Garret Kown
Gender: Male
Appearance: http://thumbs.dreamstime.com/z/caucas...
Personality: Garret is kind and overly smart. But he has a trouble with being overly aggresive.
History: Garret knows he belongs in Erudite, but he's tired of being overly aggressive and starting fights in his school, he also knows that all his teachers despise him.
Current Faction: Erudite
Thoughts on leaving faction or staying and why: (before the aptitude test) Leaving, he needs to be free of all the fights and anger.
Divergent: Yes

[Evelina]

Luna: Don't worry. About the whole Creating a Male thing: It's fine, trust me. When us mods notice an uneven ratio, we pitch in, as well. ^U^ And we pitch in excessively. You can't approve yourself, I'm sorry. But just try making a male; it's more fun playing a male than you think! xD I'm working on some males right now, actually. And don't worry: the girls won't all start hitting on you. I know mine won't. :)

[Evelina]

Alex: I love him! Just might want to change the picture, though. xD He looks a wee bit over 16. If you don't want to, that's fine. It just looks a bit weird, that's all. ^U^

[Kjonesbookpage]

I agree with Evelina about the picture and the approval lol and Evelina I put the aptitude test just put the characters name and faction beneath it please it's Erudite lol

[Evelina]

Way ahead of ya! ;O

[Alex]

((LOL :D yeah... just a bit ;D))
http://thumbs.dreamstime.com/x/young-...
There that's.... a little bit better :)

[Kjonesbookpage]

Evelina wrote: "Way ahead of ya! ;O"

lol just saw that lol

[Evelina]

Alex: try this! ^U^

Maybe edit the new picture into your original charrie comment... and use this. :) I just discovered this little linky thang.

Remove the dots!
<.img. .src.=."http://thumbs.dreamstime.com/x/young-..." <---at the end, it should be a />

[Kjonesbookpage]

As soon as the last two guys that were approved are on the list 2 more girls will be accepted so get them into the choosing ceremony asap lol we got a few people who want their girls approved lol

[Alex]

Ok thx! :D

[Kjonesbookpage]

Luna wrote: "Name: Luna Lovegood
Gender: Female
Appearance: Look at the Profile Picture
Personality: Very odd but so kind. She is very smart.
History: Her mom does when she was seven and her dad brought her up..."

You see this Luna you only had to wait about 3 hours not counting over night since you were only on to make the character lol now she is approved please proceed to aptitude unless you really don't want to once again your choice

[Kjonesbookpage]

Okay Paige now Amillia is accepted I will look at her aptitude now lol thanks for waiting sorry about that