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Mar 06, 2014 09:06PM

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Okay, thanks! =D
Evelina you don't need another mod to approve her
Cleo's good now go het run over to the aptitude just keep in mind Dauntless is closed right now
Cleo's good now go het run over to the aptitude just keep in mind Dauntless is closed right now

Cleo's good now go het run over to the aptitude just keep in mind Dauntless is closed right now"
Awh, Dauntless' closed =(
=D Thanks!
Yeah sorry everyone wants dauntless and there are no girls going into Erudite right now either just thought I would tell you now

Gender: Female
Appearance: Lilly has bouncy chocolate brown hair that falls just past her shoulders. She has clear blue eyes, and an ever-present smile. She is lithe and flexible from hanging around the apple orchard.
Personality: Lilly is sweet and kind outwardly- a perfect little angel, as most Amity girls are- but you had better not you cross her, for she can be harmful when not kept a close eye on.
History: Lilly's mother transferred from Erudite to Amity, and she has only ever seen Lilly's angelic side. Her father, on the other hand, had seen how she treats other members of the faction, and he tried to scold her. He had only held up his hand gently, but Lilly screamed and pinched her cheek, and the leaders of the Amity found him with his hand up over a poor girl huddled in a corner with a bright red cheek and teary eyes from being "slapped." From then on, her father was factionless.
Thoughts on leaving the faction: Lilly wants to transfer to Dauntless, where she could use her true personality and still fit in.
Divergent: No.
Sorry, but Dauntless is closed for now! Could you please add a bit more to History, and maybe just a wee bit of Personality? :)
Ah, thank you! :) I didn't not notice, actually. Could you do me a favor and just edit it into the character sheet?
I feel so bad for you Evelina. You have to say that Dauntless is closed to almost everyone. :(
Don't die of guilt! Don't die! Life will suddenly become harder on this group!
*wheezes* Listen closely... before I go... *coughs* I must tell you something the fate of the world depends on. Come clooooooser, my child... *lips stretch out to Luna's ear* NOOT NOOT!
You are so funny. I am laughing uncontrollably. Gosh. Where do you come up with this stuff?
OH MY GOSH! *starts to freak out* THAT IS THE CUTEST, MOST ADORABLE, MOST HILARIOUS THING I HAVE EVER SEEN!
We should stop spamming now. xD But we can continue this in chat! xD His name is Pingu. He just loves to go "noot noot". ^U^
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yeah. we probably should. :( where do we continue this chat?
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Gender: Female
Appearance: Long, straight brunette hair. Dark blue eyes. 5'7 in height. Has a fit body but not toned.
Personality: Kind, Caring, Puts people before her self, well mannered. Though no one really knows just how brave Belle is.No one know just how much Belle wants to get out of abnegation. You wouldnt even have a tiny clue if she'd hate the place. Belles good at keeping secrets. Very good at keeping things from everyone.
History: Belle has a normal family. Her parents are strict but caring. So caring that sometimes she dosent understand if they act like that because they are apart of abnegation or if they actually truly love her. shes an only child.
Current Faction:abnegation
Thoughts on leaving faction or staying and why: (before the aptitude test) She wants to get away from abnegation because of the way they are. She has always been looking up to dauntless which is where she wants to go. she wants to be free
Divergent: (yes or no or slightly {meaning one result on the aptitude test}) no
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after you do the aptitude test, then you choose after the choices have been made.
could you add more to personality, history and if possible but not compulsory, could you find an actual picture with a link? it would make it alot easier to get what the character looks like
could you add more to personality, history and if possible but not compulsory, could you find an actual picture with a link? it would make it alot easier to get what the character looks like

Gender: female
Appearance: http://viria.tumblr.com/image/6796059...
Personality: athletic and tomboy. Dakota is easy going, but determined and smart. She cares for her friends and family. Dakota is humble.
History: she has a brother, Ayden, who is 2 months younger than her. Her mother and father have both always been Erudite, along with the rest of their ancestors. Dakota would hate to break the chain, but she can't just learn her whole life.
Current faction: Erudite
Thoughts on staying or leaving: she didn't want to learn all her life. She wanted to experience life and LIVE.
Divergent: yes
Daunless isn't accepting any initiates right now and I think your history and personality need a little more.

I'll change up her personality: athletic and tomboy. She cares deeply for her family, but fear she will somehow loose them or disappoint them. Dakota is easy going, yet determined, and funny. She may seem all happy and perky all the time, but when you tick her off she explodes with anger.
Now I'll add to her history: she was never liked as a kid until she was 10 then she started acting different. She never wants to go back to the way it was 6 years ago.
Okay can you edit it into one post please and I was just telling you so you would be aware since I wasn't sure where you wanted to go and you don't get to choose until your character has been approved any you have been given an aptitude you should not have a post in the choosing ceremony thread
Name: Marielle Zangon, but really hates her sophisticated name, so she goes by Ell. Not Mary, not Ella, just Ell. She doesn't even answer to her birth name.
Gender: Female
Appearance: Ell has short dark brown hair that she recently cut by herself to fit her personality. She has overgrown bangs that are often tucked behind her ears. She is tall and slim at the height of 5'7" and weighs 136 pounds. She has emerald green eyes with gold littering her irises. She has long eyelashes, but still wears eyeliner and sometimes mascara.


Personality: Ell is feisty and mean. She isn't afraid to stand up to somebody. She is strong and quick-thinking in the head. She is cold and stubborn. She does not accept things easily and bullies other people when she doesn't like them or they tease her or something like that. She is sensitive, but doesn't show it. She could beat somebody up in seconds. This is how she expresses herself and releases her anger.
History: Ell was born and raised in Amity. She was naturally mean. Her father left the family after her personality grew since he didn't want to have a daughter like that. He remarried and they never contacted him again. Her mother spends hours lecturing her and being disappointed in Ell. She bullies her younger sister, Roslyn, who is only 7. Her mother is considering giving her away. but she is too grown up for that to make that choice. She has always been determined to leave her faction because she is nothing like anybody else and can't even try to be.
Current Faction: Amity, peace. She despises Amity due to the fact that she grew up nothing like them.
Thoughts on leaving faction or staying and why: Ell is sure of leaving no matter what it says on the aptitude test. Her personality is nothing like other people in Amity. She is the complete opposite of peaceful. She is thinking of choosing Dauntless, but she doesn't know everything about all of them. If not, maybe Candor, because she was sick of living in lies at times. For example, if her mother says, "Everything will be okay" when it won't.
Divergent: Yes. Although her personality shows nothing of it, her inner self is truly Divergent.
Spiders
Dying
Being forever alone
Tight spaces
Water
Birds of prey
Gender: Female
Appearance: Ell has short dark brown hair that she recently cut by herself to fit her personality. She has overgrown bangs that are often tucked behind her ears. She is tall and slim at the height of 5'7" and weighs 136 pounds. She has emerald green eyes with gold littering her irises. She has long eyelashes, but still wears eyeliner and sometimes mascara.


Personality: Ell is feisty and mean. She isn't afraid to stand up to somebody. She is strong and quick-thinking in the head. She is cold and stubborn. She does not accept things easily and bullies other people when she doesn't like them or they tease her or something like that. She is sensitive, but doesn't show it. She could beat somebody up in seconds. This is how she expresses herself and releases her anger.
History: Ell was born and raised in Amity. She was naturally mean. Her father left the family after her personality grew since he didn't want to have a daughter like that. He remarried and they never contacted him again. Her mother spends hours lecturing her and being disappointed in Ell. She bullies her younger sister, Roslyn, who is only 7. Her mother is considering giving her away. but she is too grown up for that to make that choice. She has always been determined to leave her faction because she is nothing like anybody else and can't even try to be.
Current Faction: Amity, peace. She despises Amity due to the fact that she grew up nothing like them.
Thoughts on leaving faction or staying and why: Ell is sure of leaving no matter what it says on the aptitude test. Her personality is nothing like other people in Amity. She is the complete opposite of peaceful. She is thinking of choosing Dauntless, but she doesn't know everything about all of them. If not, maybe Candor, because she was sick of living in lies at times. For example, if her mother says, "Everything will be okay" when it won't.
Divergent: Yes. Although her personality shows nothing of it, her inner self is truly Divergent.
Spiders
Dying
Being forever alone
Tight spaces
Water
Birds of prey
First she can't be Dauntless right now since it's closed, second she can't be Erudite either since it isn't accepting girls, Third she can't choose what her divergence is that's what the aptitude test is for, fourth there needs to be more on the personality try to write it in three sentences instead of just listing the qualities please let me know when that's done and I'll look at it again
Could I wait until Dauntless is open? I could just wait until they are accepting, because I really want Dauntless!!!
Also, I edited it.
Also, I edited it.
Sure but I don't know when Dauntless will be open again. I suppose you could make another character for another faction in the meantime if you wanted
Name: Ana London Brooks
Gender: Female
Appearance: Ana is extremely minuscule for her age at a size of 4 feet 11 inches and weighs 70 pounds, extremely skinny and a bit unhealthy. She has brown eyes and shoulder length blonde hair that she likes to put up to get it away from her eyes. She has pale skin and has a few cuts and scars on her wrist and arm from her father.

Personality: Has depression. She is sad about life in general. She is quiet as well. She doesn't have much to say after most of her family fell apart. She is mysterious. She doesn't hide things, but she is never asked to reveal them, making her not known of many things. She's not a closed book, yet she is an open book with few words. She also doesn't care about much. She goes with the flow and doesn't care. Sad.
History: Mother died as she gave birth to Ana, or so she was always told. Her father was devastated and began to forget to care for Ana and her older brother, Hunter. He remarried, but never felt the same with Hannah (their new mom) as he did to their original mother. Soon Hannah had another kid, a girl. They named her Sophia. They began to grow in sadness and quietness. Hunter chose Dauntless, and then died weeks later for no reason Ana knew of. Hannah and her father got the news, but they refused to tell poor Ana and Sophia. Ana was determined to find out, and was extremely mad for not knowing the truth. Two years later, Sophia went out one day for a walk. Her parents didn't advise her to go alone, so she forced Ana to go with her. They were walking along a pond, across the bridge, when Sophia lost her balance and she pitched over, her body just small enough to fall under the rail. Ana shrieked and sobbed. She thinks it was her fault, and she still does. Hannah left the family, hating the depression, and her father was so mad, their entire family fallen apart. He would let it out on Ana, abusing her. Beating her, starving her, locking her in a closet for a day. Ana would always think what she had done wrong.
Current Faction: Dauntless, but she was never strong like the others and was left out and bullied a lot, resulting in part of her depression.
Thoughts on leaving faction or staying and why: Thinking of switching to Candor, because she is truly sick of being hidden from the truth, in which she wants to know everything.
Divergent: yes, and her mother was, too, but she was discovered and killed.
Other: -her fears back in dauntless: snakes, death, blood, inability to evacuate quickly, confined spaces, birds or prey, becoming deaf, becoming blind, and bodies of water in which she can't touch the bottom.
-has night terrors about the day Sophia died.
Gender: Female
Appearance: Ana is extremely minuscule for her age at a size of 4 feet 11 inches and weighs 70 pounds, extremely skinny and a bit unhealthy. She has brown eyes and shoulder length blonde hair that she likes to put up to get it away from her eyes. She has pale skin and has a few cuts and scars on her wrist and arm from her father.

Personality: Has depression. She is sad about life in general. She is quiet as well. She doesn't have much to say after most of her family fell apart. She is mysterious. She doesn't hide things, but she is never asked to reveal them, making her not known of many things. She's not a closed book, yet she is an open book with few words. She also doesn't care about much. She goes with the flow and doesn't care. Sad.
History: Mother died as she gave birth to Ana, or so she was always told. Her father was devastated and began to forget to care for Ana and her older brother, Hunter. He remarried, but never felt the same with Hannah (their new mom) as he did to their original mother. Soon Hannah had another kid, a girl. They named her Sophia. They began to grow in sadness and quietness. Hunter chose Dauntless, and then died weeks later for no reason Ana knew of. Hannah and her father got the news, but they refused to tell poor Ana and Sophia. Ana was determined to find out, and was extremely mad for not knowing the truth. Two years later, Sophia went out one day for a walk. Her parents didn't advise her to go alone, so she forced Ana to go with her. They were walking along a pond, across the bridge, when Sophia lost her balance and she pitched over, her body just small enough to fall under the rail. Ana shrieked and sobbed. She thinks it was her fault, and she still does. Hannah left the family, hating the depression, and her father was so mad, their entire family fallen apart. He would let it out on Ana, abusing her. Beating her, starving her, locking her in a closet for a day. Ana would always think what she had done wrong.
Current Faction: Dauntless, but she was never strong like the others and was left out and bullied a lot, resulting in part of her depression.
Thoughts on leaving faction or staying and why: Thinking of switching to Candor, because she is truly sick of being hidden from the truth, in which she wants to know everything.
Divergent: yes, and her mother was, too, but she was discovered and killed.
Other: -her fears back in dauntless: snakes, death, blood, inability to evacuate quickly, confined spaces, birds or prey, becoming deaf, becoming blind, and bodies of water in which she can't touch the bottom.
-has night terrors about the day Sophia died.

Gender: Female
Appearance: Anya is very pretty, with flowing long brown hair and stunning grey eyes. She is very short at 5'0", but don't let all of that fool you! Anya has long dark brown hair that cascades in loose curls down her back. She has flawless skin and full, pink lips. Framed by long dark lashes her blue grey eyes hold an air of mystery to them, captivating your mind with their beauty. Her smile is heart warming, a very contagious one, but one that is rarely seen.
https://p.gr-assets.com/540x540/fit/h...
Personality: Anya lives in Abnegation, which means she is supposed to be selfless, just like her 3 perfectly selfless siblings. The only problem with that is, she isn't. No matter how hard she has tried, she couldn't be as selfless as her family wanted her to be. She is tough, but can be gentle and kind at moments too. She has the perfect description for Dauntless: She is brave, tough, strong, quick witted, and knows that she belongs in Dauntless, no matter what anyone else says. She is not usually a go with the flow kind of person, and she loves getting her way, as long as its the right way.
History: Anya lives in Abnegation with her mother, father, 14 year old twin sisters and 11 year old brother, but REALLY wants to go to Dauntless (first dibs for when that's open, please!). She has three perfect siblings, but knows her little brother's real dream is Erudite. She lived there, being the best at being selfless that she could, just waiting to leave, though. She had a few friends, but none of them were very close. He closest friends was her little sisters, Kate and Sarah.
Current Faction: Abnegation
Thoughts on leaving faction or staying and why: (before the aptitude test) Anya doesn't belong in Abnegation, and she knows it. She is dying to get out of there and escape to Dauntless, where she can be free. (First dibs for when Dauntless is open, please!)
Divergent: (yes or no or slightly {meaning one result on the aptitude test}) Yes
Dauntless is closed, and you need more in the history try to make it at least three sentences. Can you tell a bit more about what her personality is really like and less about how she is supposed to be selfless please

Everywhere except Dauntless and no girls in Erudite and it's that way because there are an abundant of initiates in those places and a lot less in the other factions so we are trying to even both gender and number of initiates so it's uncertain when either will open again as for the gender rule it's basically in each faction when you make a girl the next character in that faction has to be a guy and vice versa and that goes for each faction individually except Erudite which is only accepting guys if you need to see numbers or anything you can take a look at the initiates list under character lists
I know but this isn't the book in fact it's pretty far from being close to the book and I don't want to hear complaints from people about not having a guy for their girl in any of the faction that's why we need some balance
No sorry I really don't I would have to discuss it with the other mods before I can say or do anything I'm sorry