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message 451: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Okay


message 452: by [deleted user] (new)

(Also adding that Ana is picked on a lot))


message 453: by [deleted user] (last edited Mar 15, 2014 06:42AM) (new)

Name: Sage Turner

Gender: Female

Appearance:

Personality: Sweet but Tough, Can stand up for herself, not afraid to speak the truth, but hates hurting peoples feelings that's why she can't stay in Candor. She loves sketching, and talking. Not afraid to be herself.

History: She had a pretty boring life. People loved her, so she always had friends. She used to watch Dauntless kids, and was jealous of their freedom. She, of course, told them and her parents got mad at her, and pretty much ignored her. She became an outsider in her own home and school, her 'friends' would not even talk to her. So instead of crying, she held her head high and told them they were being Jerkfaces.

Current Faction: Candor

Thoughts on leaving faction or staying and why: Please take me anywhere but here. I have nothing/nobody to stay for.

Divergent: Yes.


message 454: by [deleted user] (last edited Apr 13, 2014 10:37AM) (new)

Name: Viola Forte
Gender: Female
Appearance: Medium length auburn hair with strawberry blond streaks. Short for her age. Tan(ish) skin. Has bare feet. Almost had glaucoma as well as her brother, so now she is as well almost color blind and almost blind. (Vision is fading.)
Personality: She has an ear for music. Her favorite instrument is the fiddle, but loves all string instruments. She's optimistic, and tries to settle arguments with compromise. Remains low key. Loves to pick strawberries and climb trees. She is very sensitive. People go to her for relationship advice.
History: Parents are both from Candor and they are very truthful with her performances in at home and at school. Doesn't have a lot of friends, so she spends her time in the maple tree. She's been living a bittersweet life. Whole entire family tree is from Candor. Has a brother named Vincent, and they have a special bond.
Current Faction: Candor
Thoughts on leaving faction or staying and why: She wants to transfer to Amity, where she can strum her string instruments, pick strawberries, and climb trees all day instead of listening to (too truthful) arguments from her parents, and peers.
Divergent: Nope. (Wouldn't notice if she was)


message 455: by [deleted user] (new)

I'm not a mod but I love your charrie! :D


message 456: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Jessa Dauntless is closed but Sage sounds more Amity anyway but she is approve and Sophia, Viola is also approved both please proceed to aptitude test


message 457: by [deleted user] (new)

Alright.


message 458: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Ella I never said Ell was approved but she is lol and Ladies I will have your aptitudes up in a few minutes


message 459: by ʟ ᴀ ᴜ ʀ ᴀ (last edited Mar 16, 2014 10:33AM) (new)

ʟ ᴀ ᴜ ʀ ᴀ For Anya, she is dying to escape from Abnegation, she just wants to escape to Dauntless, where she can be free(first dibs for when that's open, please!). And for her history (cont.): She has three perfect siblings, but knows her little brother's real dream is Erudite. She lived there, being the best at being selfless that she could, just waiting to leave, though. She had a few friends, but none of them were very close. He closest friends was her little sisters, Kate and Sarah.


ʟ ᴀ ᴜ ʀ ᴀ Is Anya approved?


message 461: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Can you tell a bit more about what her personality is really like and less about how she is supposed to be selfless and can you edit it all into one post please


ʟ ᴀ ᴜ ʀ ᴀ Can you edit on a phone or no? And yes, I'll do that.


message 463: by Kjonesbookpage (last edited Mar 15, 2014 08:28PM) (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
No you can't unless you actually go to the website but not on the app and it can wait until your on a computer but please do it the first chance you get


ʟ ᴀ ᴜ ʀ ᴀ Okay, I'll probably be on tomorrow or Monday, is that okay?


message 465: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Yeah that's fine


ʟ ᴀ ᴜ ʀ ᴀ Okay, I'll get that done as soon as I can.


message 467: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Okay


message 468: by Anisha (new)

Anisha | 134 comments Name: Leyla Carrel
Gender: Female
Appearance: Leyla has straight, shoulder-length blond hair, warm brown eyes, bright smile, and rosy cheeks. She wears black-rimmed square glasses that balance precariously on the tip of her small nose. She doesn't actually need them, of course. She has a small, rather slight figure, and she isn't very tall for her age.

Personality: Leyla is always bright and happy. She bounces through the walls in such a way that even the other Erudite feel the radiance of her joy. Leyla loves talking, laughing and dancing. She is talented in talking with sad people. Her melodic, soothing voice helps them recover from whatever's upsetting them.

History: Leyla loves reading as much as the next Erudite girl, but she never quite fit in with the others. She befriended most of the compound, but they only really talk to her when they need her help. Otherwise, she's talking to the back of a book or computer screen. In every free hour, her parents drill her in various categories of random snippets of information. This is fun for a few rounds, but it gets dull. Leyla never quite saw the reason behind learning all this information.

Current Faction: Erudite

Thoughts on staying or leaving and why: Just like any other Erudite girl, Leyla spends the bulk of her days reading and studying, but it doesn't have the same effect on her. She sees the ways the others' eyes light up as they debate subjects. As for Leyla, she finds herself sneaking a peek past the sterile white compound to the sun. She heard that the Amity are all kind-hearted and spend much of their time enjoying the sun. Leyla wishes to be part of them, where people will be just as cheerful as she is.

Divergent: No


message 469: by Evelina (new)

Evelina (EvelinaOfTheElves) | 889 comments Mod
Approved.


message 470: by Anisha (new)

Anisha | 134 comments If I got approved do I take the aptitude test?


message 471: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
yes please proceed there


ʟ ᴀ ᴜ ʀ ᴀ Is Anya approved? I edited her.


message 473: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Yes she is approved and I have started a conversation to figure out when Dauntless will open up again with the mods either I or another mod will let everyone know the moment a decision is made so please bear with it a little longer


ʟ ᴀ ᴜ ʀ ᴀ Okay! I was just waiting for her to be approved first, and I might make another character.


message 475: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
That's fine but be warned we need guys in this group and girls will probably be closed soon so you might want to make it a guy.


ʟ ᴀ ᴜ ʀ ᴀ Okay


message 477: by CJ (new)

CJ | 1497 comments Name: River Correston

Gender:
Male

Appearance:



Personality:
Having been raised in Dauntless, River has never had any trouble with shyness or fright. While he may be perceived as rather unpleasant, at first, he actually does have a heart (although if you ask him about it he'd probably tell you that you're an idiot and that he wouldn't be alive if he didn't have one). He isn't exactly a genius in academics, like the Erudite, but he can think on his feet and never loses his head in a crisis.

History:
River's life in Dauntless has been... interesting, to say the least. His mother died giving birth to the second of his younger sisters, who was inexplicably born without a right hand. The Dauntless leaders would have killed her if they'd found out, as she is useless to them with an inability to fight, so River, his dad, and his other sister have done their best to make sure she is hidden and safe. River has always wondered what it would be like not to have to sit on the edge of every seat, what it would be like not to have guard shifts at the window of his house on days of Dauntless inspections, and he plans to find out.

Current Faction:
Dauntless

Thoughts on leaving faction or staying:
River wants to leave Dauntless and find a place where it may be safe for his sister to flee to later.

Divergent:
Yes


message 478: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
I like him he's Approved please proceed to aptitude test


message 479: by CJ (new)

CJ | 1497 comments Thanks. :)


message 480: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Wolf I need more on appearance, personality, and history. Try to make it about three sentences each please.


message 481: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Name: Patrick Jane
Gender: Male
Appearance:
Personality: He is fun, laid back and hates confrontation. He is cool tempered and enjoys just hanging out with friends. He likes playing games, listening to music and going with the flow when it suits him. It brings him great joy to make up stories and write.
History: He was born Erudite but never fit in he was way too laid back and had no motivation to study. His parents were very disappointed and never let him forget it. He is an only child but he is looking forward to choosing because he would really like to make some friends who think the same as him.
Current Faction: Erudite
Thoughts on leaving faction or staying and why: Yes, he isn’t brainy and nerdy like the others and is definitely too laid back for it so he figures he’ll try somewhere else.
Divergent: No


message 482: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Thank you


message 483: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
to Aptitude chaos please


message 484: by Cecilia (new)

Cecilia (cecilialovesbooks) | 3 comments "Name: Hudson
Gender: Female
Appearance: Fierce, Brave, Kind,Smart
Personality: Out going
History: Divergent and knows it keeps it hidden
Current Faction: Erudite
Thoughts on leaving faction or staying and why: Wants to be dauntless.
Divergent: Yes


message 485: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Make Appearance, Personality, and History at least three sentences each and Dauntless is closed and there are no girls being accepted into Erudite but everything else is fine


message 486: by [deleted user] (last edited Mar 17, 2014 08:16PM) (new)

Name:Artemis (nickname: artie)
Gender: female
Appearance:('ll put an image when i find one) 5'3, small frame, black shoulder lengthed layered hair, tanned (similar to Tori's but slightly more tanned....meh), dark brown eyes (big)
Personality: feisty, vicious, blunt, loud, takes side of the underdog
History:mother was from erudite but moved to candor, father was from amity but moved to candor, little brother (age 8), small simple family
Current Faction: Candor
Thoughts on leaving faction or staying and why: abnegation, simple lifestyle, reserved and easier to hide away (before the aptitude test)
Divergent: (yes or no or slightly {meaning one result on the aptitude test})yes, (i actually did the quiz and got abnegation, dauntless and candor)


message 487: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Okay about the picture. The personality needs to be three sentences, I need more in the history and you don't actually get to choose you may have taken an aptitude quiz online but we are going by the one we created here so whatever you got there might not apply here so I advise that you say that she is leaning toward Abnegation without saying that that is her choice and you can't choose the result and you answer it based on what the character would say not what you would say.


message 488: by Wolf (last edited Mar 22, 2014 03:28PM) (new)

Wolf | 14 comments name: wolf

gender: male

appearance: https://encrypted-tbn1.gstatic.com/im...

personality:can be very fun when relaxed and really stern and focused when necessary. has a sense of humor (not everyone gets it though). can be cold or light hearted, can be funny, can be serious, likes reading, doesn't like huge crowds, is unorganized etc.


history: parents: one dead and had transferred from dauntless, one disappeared and is born from and stayed in erudite. siblings: two boys, both older, both transferred to amity, both failed being peaceful in other words they are factionless.

current faction: erudite

thoughts of leaving: wants to try something new. is fit but is bored and knows most of what there is to learn there


message 489: by Evelina (new)

Evelina (EvelinaOfTheElves) | 889 comments Mod
Sorry but you have to add a lot more to personality and history.


message 490: by Wolf (new)

Wolf | 14 comments personality: cold or light hearted, funny or serious, likes reading, doesn't like huge crowds, is unorganized etc.

history: one from erudite and stayed, other transferred to dauntless but came back to erudite to be with partner, siblings all tried amity but all failed


message 491: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Okay can you edit the personality into the character and write it in sentence form so that it comes out to 3 sentences and edit the history into the character as well please


message 492: by Alyss (last edited Mar 19, 2014 03:09PM) (new)

Alyss Frey (omgthg) | 3 comments Name: Elody Valmire

Gender: Female

Appearance: http://media-cache-ec0.pinimg.com/736...

http://sharetv.org/images/bakuretsu_t...

Elody is known for her elegantly gorgeous looks, with her long, long scarlet hair, and her sapphire blue eyes. Elody draws the attention of many people, and a lot of them wish to be her friend.

Personality: While Elody draws the attention of many, her attitude is what pushes most people away. Elody is very physical and is known for her smart-ass reputation. If you are annoying her, she'll usually try to stay calm and use comebacks, but she can pack in a mean punch, too. She is not afraid of much and aspires to be fearless. Elody fights people for fun if they want to challenge her impeccable skill, but no one, boy or girl, has ever been known to have beat her in a fight. She has two friends that she is very close to, but she ignores all of the people who want to be her friend. Elody hates people who are sexist, and thinks that all girls should learn how to fight and defend themselves. She thinks that it is wrong for girls to sit around and let men do all the work. Unlike most girls, Elody is not self-conscious of her appearance, and while she is not exactly conceited, she is aware of her beauty. She does not pick on people unless they are picking on her, and will punch them if she feels like she has to.

History: Elody gets along pretty well with her parents, except when she gets in trouble at school, and mainly tries to keep her fights secret. She has had a natural gift for fighting, and is better than most people in Dauntless. She would often get in trouble when she was little, mainly for mouthing off to authorities, and was known for breaking a boy's nose when she was 9. Elody loves to sneak and pull stunts, and she feels pride when she isn't caught.

Current Faction: Dauntless

Thoughts on leaving faction or staying and why: She believes that she is a true Dauntless, and will try her hardest to place first overall in initiation.

Divergent: No, but she does have some Divergent traits, like Four(Tobias)


message 493: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Alyss I'm sorry but dauntless is closed


message 494: by Wolf (new)

Wolf | 14 comments Katiana Rosa Juarez wrote: "Wolf I need more on appearance, personality, and history. Try to make it about three sentences each please."

better now?


message 495: by DarknessIsUponUs, Frozen, Doctor Who and Sherlock are my lives no judging (new)

DarknessIsUponUs | 492 comments Mod
Wolf wrote: "Katiana Rosa Juarez wrote: "Wolf I need more on appearance, personality, and history. Try to make it about three sentences each please."

better now?"

Sorry Wolf, you need more, try writing it in more full sentences at least three proper FULL sentences with examples and stuff to History and personality and maybe a better picture, or add a worded description

Also could you please add the updated version either to a whole new comment or edit the old one and put it in


message 496: by Isabelle Jade (last edited Mar 20, 2014 04:04PM) (new)

Isabelle Jade (isabellejade) Name: Cassandra Wallace
Gender: Female

History: Mother transferred from Dauntless to Erudite, Father born in Erudite. Cassandra has two older brothers who are still in Erudite (they are doctors) and her parents are scientists and don't have much time for spending with the family, another reason why she wishes to transfer. She has never had many friends in Erudite, as everyone is so focussed on studies, and that has added to her shy demeanor. People make fun off her height, and she hopes that once she transfers, she will never be made fun of again, though she would never admit that that is a reason for her transfer. Once, when she was ten, she was beat up by a fellow Erudite for standing up for a "Stiff". That Erudite ended up transferring to Dauntless and she never saw him again, to her fortune.

Current Faction: Erudite, but planing on transferring to Abnegation, no matter what her aptitude is.

Appearance: Light brown hair in a pixie cut, blue eyes. She often wears big square glasses (though she only wears them to make her look clever, and will throw them out when she transfers). She is taller than most the girls in her class, and has often been told she looks boyish with her short hair. Her features are mousey-dull brown hair and nimble frame. Her face is narrow and her eyes are large and prominent on her face. She looks older than her age, and acts older as well. Her mother calls her beautiful, but OF COURSE her mother calls her beautiful, and Cassandra doesn't really care either way. She is more concerned that she comes off as smart and selfless and not mean, as so many of her peers are.

Personality: shy, clever, but uncomfortable in her current faction because she feels forced to be smart, and while she is knowledgable, she is also too shy to raise her hand at school. She loved to read, but doesn't like to draw attention to herself and feels that she belongs in Abnegation.

Divergent: Yes, though she doesn't know it yet...


message 497: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Can you add more to history and appearance please


message 498: by DarknessIsUponUs, Frozen, Doctor Who and Sherlock are my lives no judging (new)

DarknessIsUponUs | 492 comments Mod
more please and could you edit this into your old pot please? it just makes it easier to approve it


message 499: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Jade wrote: "Name: Cassandra Wallace
Gender: Female

History: Mother transferred from Dauntless to Erudite, Father born in Erudite. Cassandra has two older brothers who are still in Erudite (they are doctors) a..."


Alright she is approved please proceed to aptitude test


message 500: by hannah ❤️ (last edited Mar 21, 2014 04:41PM) (new)

hannah ❤️ (pure-per-fection) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~
{First Name:} Tatianne
{Middle Name:}Jade
{Last Name:} Potslark
{Nickname:} Tati
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
{Age:} 16
{Gender:} Female
{Birthday:} August 14
{Zodiac:} Leo
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
{Appearance:}
[Hair:] She has warm chocolaty brown hair.
[Skin:] Tatianne’s skin is very pale from never going out in the sun.
[Height:] She is 5’6”.
[Eyes:] Her eyes are hazel.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
{Current Faction:} Candor
{Thoughts on leaving/staying in Current Faction:} Tatianne wants to stay in Candor because she has always found value in telling the truth. She wants to be in Erudite because she also values intelligence.
{Divergent:} Yes. (Candor, Erudite)
{Strengths:}
× enjoys her instruments, piano and viola
× extremely intelligent
× deeply cares for her mother
{Weaknesses:}
Ω doesn’t always tell the truth
Ω sometimes despises her siblings due to lack of intelligence
Ω sometimes wishes her mother chose one of her other siblings to teach
{Quirks/Habits:}
α twirls hair
α excellent secret keeper
α draws hearts everywhere
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
{Personality:} Tatianne has always loved the people close to her. She is kind to others and loves playing the piano and viola. She is intelligent and loves to study. She looks up to the Erudite faction.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
{Family:}
∞ Spacienne Adine Potslark, mother, 37, lawyer, Erudite-born, alive.
∞ Dardov Jenoin Potslark, father, 40, judge, Candor-born, alive.
∞ Aline Adine Potslark, sister, 13, alive.
∞ Edvard Youte Potslark, brother, 18, counsler, alive.
∞ Carlo Tetes Potslark, brother, 14, alive.
{History:} Tatianne’s mother, Spacienne, was secretly born Erudite. When she transferred to Candor, she met Dardov. Dardov’s father, Edvard, was one of the heads of the entire Candor faction. Dardov already knew he was to be with Spacienne. When they were married, Edvard Sr. gave Spacienne a job as a lawyer. She, of course, already knew all the laws because she was Erudite-born. Dardov was given the job of Head Judge. When Tatianne was 12 years old, Spacienne began to teach her secretly. Spacienne taught Tatianne everything she knew. She taught Tatianne how to play piano and viola. Spacienne secretly hoped that Tatianne would transfer to Erudite. Spacienne did not bother to teach Tatianne’s siblings, Edvard Jr., Carlo, and Aline, because she knew they would not want to learn everything Spacienne knew.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
{Other:} Tatianne is very fond of white chocolate macadamia nut cookies.


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