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message 551: by Cameron (last edited Mar 25, 2014 05:45PM) (new)

Cameron J. | 6 comments Name: Aaron Stik
Nickname: Stickman
Gender: Male
Appearance: Aaron is 6'4, Skinny-Muscular, and Caucasian. He has Medium Length Brown Scruffy Hair, Green Eyes, and Big Hands and Feet.
History: Born to two Factionless, Aaron grew up on the streets learning to fight and survive on his own. His parents abandoned him as a child, so he was raised by other homeless teens about his age. Adopting the name Stickman, he was very successful in street survival. Until one day, his friends were all arrested for stealing food and Stickman was left alone to starve on the street. At age 15, he was adopted by an Abnegation family, illegally, while he was starving to death on the street. He has lived as their illegitimate child since.
Personality: Stickman is crazy. He can not sit still ever. He needs to be actively doing something. He is very gutsy and will always seek a thrill. Although, to other people, he is a shut in and generally does not like to open up his feelings or emotions. He is generally cool and relaxed but has instances of extreme anger and rage when he thinks about his past. He is tortured by the emotional pain of his past.
Faction: While he is grateful to his adopted, Abnegation family for saving his life, he is restless and desperately feels the need to get back into the world and join Dauntless, even though hes has a resentment for them for the arrest of his friends.
(Aaron had a rough childhood and a lot goes on in his mind making a slight divergent, but he was not born one.)

Thanks RSVP if Aaron is approved!


message 552: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Your missing personality and Dauntless still isn't open yet and appearance should be in sentence form please


message 553: by Cameron (new)

Cameron J. | 6 comments Katiana Rosa Juarez wrote: "Your missing personality and Dauntless still isn't open yet and appearance should be in sentence form please"

I just edited it, and will Dauntless open up or soon or is it not worth waiting?


message 554: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
I honestly have no idea and at this point he is third on the waiting list

wow he really ended up in the wrong place he is like the polar opposite of Abnegation lol


message 555: by Cameron (new)

Cameron J. | 6 comments Katiana Rosa Juarez wrote: "I honestly have no idea and at this point he is third on the waiting list

wow he really ended up in the wrong place he is like the polar opposite of Abnegation lol"


Haha! Well Factionless don't get to join faction's and who else would take him in right? lol Really though, is there no way you could squeeze me in, and I get it if you can't. I understand that the movie probably made it really busy for you, but really the other factions are just boring.


message 556: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
I do understand but I really can't just bend the rules I'm sorry but there will be more factionless to join him soon lol I just put up a list today so who knows I may be able to open Dauntless soon lol


message 557: by Cameron (new)

Cameron J. | 6 comments Katiana Rosa Juarez wrote: "I do understand but I really can't just bend the rules I'm sorry but there will be more factionless to join him soon lol I just put up a list today so who knows I may be able to open Dauntless soon..."

If you'll let me bother ya one more time can I ask how you're gonna let me know if a spot opens?


message 558: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
There will be an announcement to everyone and it will be messaged to everyone in the group when it opens


message 559: by ♡~♡Juliana♡~♡ (last edited Mar 28, 2014 10:43AM) (new)

♡~♡Juliana♡~♡ Name:Genevieve (Gen) Carson

Gender: female

Appearance:

Personality: Genevieve is loyal, competitive, out-going and unpredictable. Her birth sign is Scorpio so if you get on her bad side... Watch out, but if you're her friend she'll be totally loyal and trustworthy.

History: Gen is currently a Candor and she loved growing up with her two older siblings, Jem (20) and Chloe (18). But her whole family was thrown into great depression when Jem joined Dauntless and mysteriously died in the chasm two weeks into initiation. Her whole family has despised Dauntless ever since. Her parents would call them "raving savages" and "crazed psychopaths" and complained about how dangerous they were. But, oddly, Genevieve has always been fond of them. She didn't blame them for killing Jem. Maybe Jem accidentally fell over the side... Who knows.

Whenever she would say that her parents would yell at her and tell she didn't know what she was saying. Chloe was half-and-half; she used to have a Dauntless boyfriend who cheated on her, so she always had a grudge on them.

Chloe stayed in Candor, but at times Gen felt like she didn't stay. Their parents were the psychopaths. And, that's why Gen was intent on leaving.

Current Faction: Candor

Thoughts on leaving faction or staying and why: (see history)

Divergent: Yes, but doesn't know yet.

Gen's clothing:




message 560: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Need more in personality and Dauntless is closed right now so she can't be Dauntless


message 561: by ♡~♡Juliana♡~♡ (last edited Mar 26, 2014 02:15PM) (new)

♡~♡Juliana♡~♡ Katiana Rosa Juarez wrote: "Need more in personality and Dauntless is closed right now so she can't be Dauntless"

Do you know when more spots will be open? What else do I need in personality?


message 562: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
I don't know I might be wrong or it's that to me at the end that's bothering me I'm bad at judging this unless it's completely obvious that it's horrible lol which your isn't lol and I really don't know when spots will be available sorry


message 563: by ♡~♡Juliana♡~♡ (last edited Mar 26, 2014 05:36PM) (new)

♡~♡Juliana♡~♡ Alright, thank you though! I'll just put her in a different faction. Is she approved, though?


message 564: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Yes she is please proceed to aptitude test


message 565: by Kjonesbookpage (last edited Mar 26, 2014 05:59PM) (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
and get rid of that to me at the end of personality it annoys me since it doesn't belong there at all


message 566: by Cameron (last edited Mar 26, 2014 07:11PM) (new)

Cameron J. | 6 comments Hey its me Stickman again! While i wait for a place as Dauntless could I just Roleplay as a Factionless? Using the Aaron character, of course


message 567: by DarknessIsUponUs, Frozen, Doctor Who and Sherlock are my lives no judging (new)

DarknessIsUponUs | 492 comments Mod
Cameron wrote: "Hey its me Stickman again! While i wait for a place as Dauntless could I just Roleplay as a Factionless? Using the Aaron character, of course"

Sorry, no, once you have chosen a faction, it statys like that unless you become factionless, there is no changing once you have chosen


message 568: by Dell (last edited Mar 29, 2014 12:05PM) (new)

Dell Rei (gomesu) Name: Collin Timothy Vonché

Age: 16

Gender: Male

Appearance:description

Personality: Collin loves helping others. He is selfless, and also selfish sometimes. He usually tells the truth, but he must lie if needed. He doesn't like violence, but he still shows his dark side to defend himself or others. He doesn't like outdoors. He just wanna stay inside, and read a good book. He is really shy. He doesn't like going to big fights, and just watch things pass by. He doesn't talk to people that much. He usually waits for them to start the conversation.

History: Collin hates and loves being Dauntless. He hates it since he is forced to fight. But he loves it since he feels free. But he always thought he never belong there. Collin has a best friend. He transferred from Dauntless to Abnegation. His name is Rory Trivett. They have a lot in common. They both love helping the needy, they both love chocolate muffins, and they both love painting. Collin is pretty sad ever since he transferred a year ago. His parent's names are Alena and James Vonché. Him and his parents are the complete opposite as him. They like violence, he prefers peace. They love dogs, he likes cats. They weren't originally from Dauntless. They were from Erudite. But they acted complete Dauntless. He has 2 brothers. One is 15 and other is 19. The 15 year old's name is Nathan. Him and Collin are the closest. The 19 year old's name is Ray. They don't get along that much.


Current Faction: Dauntless

Thoughts on leaving faction or staying and why: He doesn't feel Dauntless. He might be strong, but fighting is not his passion.

Divergent: Yes.... But I'm not 100% sure


message 569: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Dale need a bit more in the appearance please


message 570: by Dell (new)

Dell Rei (gomesu) I just used a photo instead


message 571: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
That works approved proceed to aptitude test


message 572: by Dell (new)

Dell Rei (gomesu) Thanks!


message 573: by CJ (new)

CJ | 1497 comments How is he 18?


message 574: by Dell (new)

Dell Rei (gomesu) Idk... When I was looking at the other submissions, I thought my character can also be older than 16. But if it's not allowed, then Collin can be 16.


message 575: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Well they choose at 16 so every initiate is 16


message 576: by Dell (last edited Mar 29, 2014 12:04PM) (new)

Dell Rei (gomesu) What I meant was, the other submission character's age is over 16. But I'll just change mine from 18 to 16


message 577: by Cameron (new)

Cameron J. | 6 comments Hey I know this isnt the place to ask this but I checked the character lists and it said something about spots opening for dauntless on april 1st? Is that true and if so is it first come first serve or by request?


message 578: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
No there was nothing about spots opening on April first for Dauntless that's the Factionless rping will start on April first.


message 579: by Greensparksjp (last edited Apr 01, 2014 11:02AM) (new)

Greensparksjp | 4 comments Name: Shayde Green
Gender: Male
Appearance:

Personality:He is usually selfish, keeps to himself, he doesn't usually like other people, it takes him awhile to like somebody, he is extremely intelligent (though he never admits it), he is sarcastic, he is stubborn, courageous, brave, protective, cocky, and an ***hole.
History:Shayde never knew his father growing up because he died a couple months after Shayde's sister, Lizzie, was born (His father was Divergent; Shayde was 3). His mother had to raise bothe Lizzie and Shayde. Shayde quickly learned how to defend himself at the age of seven. By his eighth birthday, Shayde knew how to hunt. His mother always nagged him about how killing innocent animals is not selfless, it is selfish, that Abnegation provides enough food for them, so why go out and be a glutton. Though, deep down Shayde's actions were selfless---he just wouldn't admit it: he was hunting to feed Lizzie, who never ate the food their faction provided them because she didn't like it. Although Shayde can be selfless, he doesn't want to be. All his life he has thought about his mother and sister, and how he is the only man to take care of the family. Even to the day of the Choosing Ceremony, he debated between Dauntless (due to his bravery, courage, and ability to hunt), Abnegation (in order to protect his little sister Lizzie), or Erudite (due to his intelligence). Secretly, Shayde wanted to choose Erudite. His intelligence was something Shayde never showed. Even in school, he purposely failed some of his assignments. Shayde has always been ashamed of his intelligence. So how can he choose Erudite, the faction he wants to choose? That would be selfish of him! The tattoo of a feather on his right forearm represents his longing to be set free and weightless: being who he really is, despite what people think.
Current Faction: Abnegation
Thoughts on leaving faction or staying and why: He hates being selfless, that's all he has been all his life.
Divergent: Yes


message 580: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Alright I like him just keep in mind he can't choose Dauntless every thing else is fair game and he is approved please proceed to aptitude test


message 581: by Greensparksjp (new)

Greensparksjp | 4 comments Katiana Rosa Juarez wrote: "Alright I like him just keep in mind he can't choose Dauntless every thing else is fair game and he is approved please proceed to aptitude test"

I know, but that doesn't mean he hasn't thought about it lol :)


message 582: by [deleted user] (last edited Apr 01, 2014 02:25PM) (new)

Name: Luka Stevens

Gender: Male

Age: 16

Appearance:


Personality: To people he doesn't know, he comes off as polite, well mannered and friendly, albeit slightly distant. However, he tends to be distrusting, cold and almost snobbish, and is highly intelligent. He loves chess, and is the current school champion. He's confident enough, and doesn't hate public speaking, but he's not amazing at it like some of the other Candor. He gets into a surprising amount of arguments though. His favourite subjects are maths and science.

History:
Born in Candor, to his parents Mariah and Tomas. Does well in school, not brilliant but well. He has two younger siblings, twins Xanthe and Hwan who fight A LOT. His family is quite strict, however they are also loving and very close as a family. He doesn't have a lot of friends at school, not since Emile (who was his best friend) died. After that, he seemed to retreat into himself and become very distant to everyone except his siblings.

Current faction: Candor

Thoughts on leaving: Maybe, maybe not. He likes Candor well enough, but has seriously considered Erudite.

Divergent: No

I posted it, Elmo! (Like my little Easter egg in there?)


message 583: by DarknessIsUponUs, Frozen, Doctor Who and Sherlock are my lives no judging (new)

DarknessIsUponUs | 492 comments Mod
nice abs however you need more in history and personality :-) just Because your my friend, doesn't mean I can't be mean :-)


message 584: by [deleted user] (new)

Emma (Sherlock, the Doctor, River, Moriarty, Ayala) wrote: "nice abs however you need more in history and personality :-) just Because your my friend, doesn't mean I can't be mean :-)"
XD I'll add it


message 585: by DarknessIsUponUs, Frozen, Doctor Who and Sherlock are my lives no judging (new)

DarknessIsUponUs | 492 comments Mod
abbey luka is approved

mackenzie addison needs more in history


message 586: by [deleted user] (new)

Emma (Sherlock, the Doctor, River, Moriarty, Ayala) wrote: "abbey luka is approved"

Yay! XD What do I do now?


message 587: by DarknessIsUponUs, Frozen, Doctor Who and Sherlock are my lives no judging (new)

DarknessIsUponUs | 492 comments Mod
Addison is approved :P


message 588: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Could you edit the add on into the character when you get a chance please and yes please proceed to aptitude test


message 589: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Dauntless isn't accepting initiates you may want to read the announcement thread


message 590: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Well a bit and the result gives dauntless so I kind of wanted to make sure you knew


message 591: by Sab (new)

Sab (unluckyducky) | 295 comments Juuuuusst wondering, what exactly do the trainers do in Erudite? And where to they teach?


message 592: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Fiona is in initiation giving out an IQ test there will probably be a few more random tests then they will choose what they want to study or whatever else erudite do


message 593: by Sab (new)

Sab (unluckyducky) | 295 comments Ah okay makes sense. I'll just introduce Leaf at the test area.


message 594: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
You can but I don't know when that will be


message 595: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Okay


message 596: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Okay


message 597: by DarknessIsUponUs, Frozen, Doctor Who and Sherlock are my lives no judging (new)

DarknessIsUponUs | 492 comments Mod
Mackenzie, Bekah is approved, proceed to the aptitude test


message 598: by DarknessIsUponUs, Frozen, Doctor Who and Sherlock are my lives no judging (new)

DarknessIsUponUs | 492 comments Mod
Giulia needs more history


message 599: by Natasha (new)

Natasha Name: Lacie Noir

Gender: Female

Appearance: description
Lacie is tall, has white hair and violet/blueish eyes.

Personality: She is kind to those who deserve and earn the kindness. She tries to stay out of people's way. She is smart and enjoys to learn new things. She is artistic and always tries to find some beauty in everything she sees and does. She is also good at keeping her emotions hidden when she wants to. She is also a hard worker and perfectionist who tries and tries until she has perfected something.

History: She was raised in Erudite with her little brother (12), Carter, and her parents. She has always been attached to her little brother and she would always protect him from any harm. But her parents would always try to make her perfect. As a child, she always tried so hard to please her parents. She just wanted to be praised. So she'd study whenever she had the chance, she stayed away from any sort of trouble and did many extra curricular stuff like music and art. In the end, she never felt love from her parents. Her brother was a bit different though. He would always find himself in some sort of trouble, always misbehave and always speaking the first thing that comes to mind. Lacie always admired how free her brother seemed.

Current Faction: Erudite

Thoughts about leaving and staying: She thinks about staying because of her brother. But she knows that when he turns 16, he will probably not choose Erudite. So she knows that she would only keep him from choosing what he wants.
She considers leaving because she wants to think about herself for once. She wants to start over somewhere new.


message 600: by O (new)

O | 11 comments Name: Joanne
Gender: female
Appearance: dark hair a shadowy feel
Personality: criminal mastermind
History: wanting to be aggressive so ever since second grade plastering a fake smile and skydiving at night
Current faction: amity
Why leave: fits better a dauntless
Divergent: probably


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