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message 501: by hannah ❤️ (new)

hannah ❤️ (pure-per-fection) .


message 502: by [deleted user] (new)

I like dots too! ....


message 503: by CJ (new)

CJ | 1497 comments Is that what those cookies are called? I love them!!! :D


message 504: by hannah ❤️ (new)

hannah ❤️ (pure-per-fection) Yuppers i love them too


message 505: by hannah ❤️ (new)

hannah ❤️ (pure-per-fection) PURE CHAOS wrote: "¢αℓℓ мє нσиσя wrote: "~~~~~~~~~~~~~
{First Name:} Tatianne
{Middle Name:}Jade
{Last Name:} Potslark
{Nickname:} Tati
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
{Age:} 16
{Gender:} Female
{Birthday:} August 14
{Zodiac:} Leo
~~..."

yee haw


message 506: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Gemma and Ty are approved Catron is missing his personality


message 507: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Okay let me know when it's done and I'll take a look


message 508: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
okay


message 509: by [deleted user] (new)

Name: Cyril Baudin

Gender: male

Appearance:
Personality: Cyril is for the most part social and open about most things, sometimes he falls into bouts of melancholy for a few days. He can also be very tense at times like a trip wire waiting to be set off...

History: Born and raised in the selflessness of abnegation faction all of his life has caused him many problems and also has taught him many lessons. He grew up with just his dad he never knew his mother but knew that he didn't need her. So for the next few years he has followed the code of the abnegation exactly nothing else but selflessness and respect and politeness.

Current Faction: Abnegation

Thoughts on leaving faction or staying and why: mostly he thinks he'll be staying where he is he's grown used to the lifestyle of his faction and really doesn't want to change it. But, that doesn't mean he isn't curious about other factions.

Divergent: no


message 510: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Approved please proceed to aptitude test


message 511: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Okay Catron is approved


Jessica~We Are All Heathens~ (puppyluvr) ((I SAW DIVERGENT I SAW DIVERGENT!!!!!))


message 513: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Jessica*Tauriel **I love Legolas* (Jasmine) wrote: "((I SAW DIVERGENT I SAW DIVERGENT!!!!!))"

Me too lol it was great lol))


Jessica~We Are All Heathens~ (puppyluvr) ((:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D))


message 515: by DarknessIsUponUs, Frozen, Doctor Who and Sherlock are my lives no judging (new)

DarknessIsUponUs | 492 comments Mod
ahhhh, I still haven't seen it, it isn't out where I live :( I hope its good, is it good???


Jessica~We Are All Heathens~ (puppyluvr) Yes, yes, yes!! It is amazing!! :D


message 517: by DarknessIsUponUs, Frozen, Doctor Who and Sherlock are my lives no judging (new)

DarknessIsUponUs | 492 comments Mod
cool, I am happy now


message 518: by [deleted user] (last edited Mar 21, 2014 10:27PM) (new)

Name: Branden Cox
Gender: Male
Appearance:
Personality: Branden is kind caring. Most of the time, he will put others first. Branden works hard to accomplish his goals. He is persistent and passionate. He is also unafraid of speaking to large crowds at once. He can sometimes be blunt and say whatever is on his mind.
History: Branden never fit in in his faction. He lied too easily to everyone. His only gift was the gift to say whatever crossed his mind. Most of the time, that meant telling the teacher that her formula for an equation was wrong or his/her outfit ensemble did not look right. He studied secretly his room every night, hoping that he could leave Candor once and for all. He made sure no one knew of his nightly sessions. Everyone expected him to stay in Candor because he always said what was on his mind.
Current Faction: Candor
Thoughts on leaving faction or staying: He wants to leave because he feels he does not fit in and everyone expects something of him.
Divergent: (yes or no or slightly {meaning one result on the aptitude test}) He could be, but he does not think he is.


message 519: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Approved please proceed to aptitude test


message 520: by [deleted user] (new)

Okay. Thank you.


message 521: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
No problem


message 522: by hannah ❤️ (last edited Mar 22, 2014 05:40PM) (new)

hannah ❤️ (pure-per-fection) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~
{First Name:} Chester
{Middle Name:} James
{Last Name:} Johnson
{Nickname:} Ches
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
{Age:} 16
{Gender:} Male
{Birthday:} May 31
{Zodiac:} Gemini
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
{Appearance:} [image error]
[Hair:] Chester has sandy blonde hair with dark highlights.
[Skin:] Chester is very tan because he is out in the sun every day.
[Height:] Chester is very tall, 6’5”.
[Eyes:] Chester has green eyes.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
{Current Faction:} Abnegation
{Thoughts on leaving/staying in current faction:} Chester wants to leave Abnegation because he hates being selfless and has a natural aptitude with intelligence. He looks up to the Erudite and admires them and the amount of knowledge they hold.
{Divergent:} No
{Strengths:}
∞ enjoys studying
∞ has lots of restless energy
∞ reads very fast
∞ enjoys telling the truth
{Weaknesses:}
× pays too much attention to detail
× self-conscious
× gets nervous quickly
{Quirks/Habits:}
α loves being outdoors
α loves to spend lots of time with his twin, Jacob
α always runs in big circles
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
{Personality:} Chester is really easy going and doesn't worry about too much. When it comes to school, though, he is all business and very, very serious. He loves his family and his friends dearly. He loves being around his mother and brother, and sometimes his father. He used to look up to his father and he wanted to become like him. That all changed when his mother began to teach him.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
{Family:}
Ω Jane Johnson, 34, volunteer, Candor-born, alive.
Ω Albert (Al) Johnson, 40, head of volunteer office, Abnegation-born, alive.
Ω Jacob Johnson, 16, Abnegation-born, alive.
{History:} Jane Johnson, a Candor-born transfer, worked hard to learn to lie a little to make others happy. It ripped out pieces of her soul to think about what she was doing. When she could bear it no longer, she started to teach her two twin sons, Chester and Jacob. She taught them not only to tell the truth but also all of her knowledge. This just happened to be a lot of knowledge. She began her lessons in secret when the boys were ten. She made them promise not to tell their father because she knew it would hurt him. The boys learned to study hard and do all their math problems. That wasn’t enough for them. They wanted to know more and more. They became hungry for their mother’s knowledge. They begged and begged and eventually got to spend more time in their secret lessons. They both thrived tremendously. Now, at age sixteen, the boys have to make a choice that will affect the rest of their lives.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
{Other:} Chester knows that if he transfers, his mother will be happy. That does not mean he will be happy. If he does transfer, he wants to make sure Jacob will go with him.


message 523: by DarknessIsUponUs, Frozen, Doctor Who and Sherlock are my lives no judging (new)

DarknessIsUponUs | 492 comments Mod
lots of detail with other things Pure Perfection, but there needs to be a larger personality but other than that approved


message 524: by Wolf (new)

Wolf | 14 comments ok is it good now?


message 525: by Wolf (last edited Mar 22, 2014 05:30AM) (new)

Wolf | 14 comments Katiana Rosa Juarez wrote: "Okay can you edit the personality into the character and write it in sentence form so that it comes out to 3 sentences and edit the history into the character as well please"

good that now? (same as good now?)


message 526: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Wolf I don't understand how the add on of history fits could you please make it a bit more cohesive


message 527: by Wolf (new)

Wolf | 14 comments ok,i re-edited.... you may have noticed but writing is not something I totally enjoy.


message 528: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
Okay wolf approved but Dauntless is closed right now though but proceed to aptitude test


message 529: by Wolf (new)

Wolf | 14 comments ok
thnx


message 530: by Kjonesbookpage (new)

Kjonesbookpage (krj29483) | 3015 comments Mod
You're welcome


message 531: by hannah ❤️ (new)

hannah ❤️ (pure-per-fection) Emma (Sherlock, the Doctor, River, Moriarty, Ayala) wrote: "lots of detail with other things Pure Perfection, but there needs to be a larger personality but other than that approved"

Okay. I updated it, Emma.


message 532: by DarknessIsUponUs, Frozen, Doctor Who and Sherlock are my lives no judging (new)

DarknessIsUponUs | 492 comments Mod
cool I am looking at it


message 533: by DarknessIsUponUs, Frozen, Doctor Who and Sherlock are my lives no judging (new)

DarknessIsUponUs | 492 comments Mod
Approved Pure Perfection :P have fun at the aptitude test


message 534: by Shav (last edited Mar 24, 2014 04:21PM) (new)

Shav (keelahlove) | 34 comments Name: Xander
Gender: male
Appearance:
Personality: he's a very shy person who likes to keep people out of his life because he's afraid that they'll hurt him. He's often thought of taking his own life, knowing that that would be extremely selfish of him towards his faction and family. He also has an anger issue. If he want to know something he'll prefer to get to it with violence.
History: his parents come from abnegation. His causin, born in abnegation who chose Dauntless, tried to kill him when he was 7 because she was mentally unstable. He didnt trust anyone else after that.
Current faction: abnegation
Thoughts on leaving faction or staying and why: he wants to leave abnegation because he thinks that he's too selfish and wants to be somewhere where he can be left alone.
Divergent: No
(result: Erudite)


message 535: by DarknessIsUponUs, Frozen, Doctor Who and Sherlock are my lives no judging (new)

DarknessIsUponUs | 492 comments Mod
@Shavony wow, that is pretty good
approved :)
cousin is spelt wrong it is not causin it is cousin
sorry grammar nazi


message 536: by Sandra ((was olaf)) (last edited Mar 25, 2014 01:04PM) (new)

Sandra ((was olaf))  | 59 comments Name: Jack Frost
Gender: Male
Appearance: (Minus the staff, paleness and the frost on his clothing )


Personality: Jack has the personality of a little kid. He is very optimistic and loves to make friends. He never really gets upset at anything, but when people make fun of him which wouldn't really happen if he transferred to Amity. Jack also has the ability to make fun out of anything. If someone is upset he can easily cheer them up, if he is caught in a serious situation he just tries to make everyone happy. But he does know when to be serious when it's needed.

History: Jack was born to a family in Erudite. He was never very smart and always fell behind in class. He was always being picked on by the other Erudite kids and his parents were always nagging him because he never had good grades and wasn't as smart as the other kids. Jack had always thought to himself that he would fit better in Amity because he was always very calm and had when we fought and argued.

Current Faction: Erudite

Thoughts on leaving faction or staying and why:
Leaving because he never felt like he fit in and he wasn't actually that smart. He also hated it when people fought and argued.

Divergent: No


message 537: by hannah ❤️ (last edited Mar 25, 2014 07:55AM) (new)

hannah ❤️ (pure-per-fection) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~
{First Name:} Jacob
{Middle Name:} Charles
{Last Name:} Johnson
{Nickname:} Jake
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
{Age:} 16
{Gender:} Male
{Birthday:} May 31
{Zodiac:} Gemini
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
{Appearance:}
[Hair:] Jacob has short black hair.
[Skin:] He has tan skin.
[Height:] Jacob is not as tall as his brother, Chester, who is 6’5”, but he is still tall standing at 6’3”.
[Eyes:] Jacob has dark brown eyes that pull you in and get you lost.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
{Current Faction:}
{Thoughts on leaving/staying in current faction:} Jacob definitely wants to leave Abnegation because he hates being selfless and has a natural aptitude with intelligence. He looks up to the Erudite and admires them and the amount of knowledge they hold. He is also very athletic and a fast runner. He has looked up to Dauntless ever since he could remember.
{Divergent:} Yes. [Erudite and Dauntless]
{Strengths:}
∞ enjoys studying…most of the time
∞ runs extremely fast
∞ reads fast
∞ enjoys telling the truth
∞ very strong
{Weaknesses:}
× super self-confident
× sometimes takes things [opportunities] for granted
× public speech
{Quirks/Habits:}
α loves to spend lots of time with his twin, Chester
α after a good game [of whatever], he interlaces his fingers and puts them behind his head
α sometimes makes fun of Chester for being “too tall”

~~~~~~~~~~~~~
{Personality:} Jake is a really playful, fun-natured person. He loves spending time outside and with animals. He loves spending time with his brother and mother. [not so much with his father] He likes to volunteer [sort of]. His favorite thing to do is to sit down at a table and study. He can read for hours on end and not get bored. His favorite color has always been blue. He is usually happy. Sometimes he likes to be a daredevil as well.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
{Family:}
Ω Jane Alexandra Johnson, 34, volunteer, Candor-born, alive.
Ω Albert (Al) Arthur Johnson, 40, head of volunteer office, Abnegation-born, alive.
Ω Chester James Johnson, 16, Abnegation-born, alive.

{History:} Jane Johnson, a Candor-born transfer, worked hard to learn to lie a little to make others happy. It ripped out pieces of her soul to think about what she was doing. When she could bear it no longer, she started to teach her two twin sons, Chester and Jacob. She taught them not only to tell the truth but also all of her knowledge. This just happened to be a lot of knowledge. She began her lessons in secret when the boys were ten. She made them promise not to tell their father because she knew it would hurt him. The boys learned to study hard and do all their math problems. That wasn't enough for them. They wanted to know more and more. They became hungry for their mother’s knowledge. They begged and begged and eventually got to spend more time in their secret lessons. They both thrived tremendously. Now, at age sixteen, the boys have to make a choice that will affect the rest of their lives.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
{Other:} Jacob has a huge sweet tooth.


message 538: by hannah ❤️ (last edited Apr 16, 2014 11:17PM) (new)

hannah ❤️ (pure-per-fection) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~
{First Name:} Calcifer
{Middle Name:} Alfie
{Last Name:} Perry
{Nickname:} Cal
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
{Age:} 16
{Gender:} Male
{Birthday:} April 3
{Zodiac:} Gemini
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
{Appearance:} (view spoiler)
[Hair:] He has sandy blonde hair, dyed black.
[Skin:] He is more on the pale side.
[Height:] He is tall, 6’4’’.
[Eyes:] His eyes change colors. Sometimes they’re green, sometimes a shocking blue, and even a dull gray.
[Other:] He has a lip piercing. He has a tattoo on his wrist that says ‘A+’.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
{Current Faction:} Dauntless
{Thoughts on leaving/staying in current faction:} Calcifer wants desperately to leave. He has always been a bookworm with a knack for studying. He has wished he was born Erudite for as long as he can remember. He knows that is where he belongs. Though he is afraid that if he transfers, his new faction will make fun of him for the way he looks, he is determined to transfer and become Erudite.
{Divergent:} No.
{Strengths:}
∞ loves to study
∞ reads fast
∞ strong
∞ great with communication and working things out verbally
{Weaknesses:}
× slow runner
× not-so-great fighter
× a little insecure
{Quirks/Habits:}
α hates his twin sister, Mavis
α can’t wait to get away from Dauntless [and his sister]
α daydreams [a lot]
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
{Personality:} Calcifer is really shy. He always feels like he doesn’t fit in…everywhere. His sister makes fun of him for being the weakling of the family. Calcifer is normally discouraged by every one in his faction. He is always glad for the next day. One less day until the Choosing Ceremony. He says to himself every morning.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
{Family:}
Ω Mavis Perry, 16 [(evil) twin sister], Dauntless-born, alive.
Ω Hunter Perry, 37, security detail, Amity-born, alive. {ooh la la. that sure puts a twist on things.}
Ω Felicia Oswald-Perry, 37, trainer, Amity-born, alive, divergent.
{History:} Hunter and Felicia met in their home faction, Amity. They met when they were 14. They started out as friends because their families were real close. Then it switched. It switched one night when Felicia was sleeping. She just woke up all of a sudden and knew. She knew he liked her. So she got up out of her bed and traveled across the small courtyard between their houses. Felicia had brought her parents key with her so she could unlock the door. She went right up to Hunter’s room. She opened the door and saw him sleeping. She kissed him. He woke up immediately and saw her. He sat up on his bed and patted next to him, motioning for her to sit down. She sat down next to him. She put her head on his shoulder and fell asleep in his arms. Felicia couldn’t believe what she had just done. She knew she didn’t have that much courage. The next day, everything went to a new level. They started hanging out more, going to parties together and going apple-picking in the field. They’re parents knew something was up, so they asked. Felicia told them. They told her, “Oh, honey, it’s not a big deal. We’re not going to punish you.” But they did. They didn’t let her see him again. One small problem, she had a window in her room and her parents thought she was an angel. One night, Hunter came to her window. He threw little pebbles until she woke up. She went out to meet him. They went to the field where no one would see them. They talked about running away among other things. Felicia was the one who brought up transferring factions. Hunter agreed with her all the way, from the beginning. He promised her that they would stay together, no matter what. So they waited out two more years until the Choosing Ceremony. They had both agreed on Dauntless before-hand. She was sitting two people in front of him. When her name was called, she looked back at him. He smiled, reassuring her. She sliced her hand. When she put her hand over the lit coals, dripping blood, she earned a collective gasp from the crowd. Surely, no one from Amity would ever even think to transfer to Dauntless. Her father had said, while in conversation with her mother that morning. Think again, pops. She smirked. Hunter followed her lead. When they reunited, they kissed each other. Right in front of their parents!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
{Other:} Calcifer likes to play with fire. [anyone get my ‘howl’s moving castle’ reference?]


{[two charries today. WOOP WOOP! ]}


message 539: by DarknessIsUponUs, Frozen, Doctor Who and Sherlock are my lives no judging (new)

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Caterpillar wrote: " Name: Jack Frost
Gender: Male
Appearance: (Minus the staff, paleness and the frost on his clothing )
Personality: Jack has the personality of a little kid. He is very optimistic and loves m..."


Caterpillar you need more in personality


message 540: by hannah ❤️ (new)

hannah ❤️ (pure-per-fection) Emma, what about me?


message 541: by DarknessIsUponUs, Frozen, Doctor Who and Sherlock are my lives no judging (new)

DarknessIsUponUs | 492 comments Mod
@Pure Perfection, you need more personality with Jacob and Calcifer


message 542: by hannah ❤️ (new)

hannah ❤️ (pure-per-fection) lol okay. but no more history, right?


message 543: by DarknessIsUponUs, Frozen, Doctor Who and Sherlock are my lives no judging (new)

DarknessIsUponUs | 492 comments Mod
no no more history I think that is your strong point as it is ALOT easier to do history then personality


message 544: by hannah ❤️ (new)

hannah ❤️ (pure-per-fection) Emma (Sherlock, the Doctor, River, Moriarty, Ayala) wrote: "no no more history I think that is your strong point as it is ALOT easier to do history then personality"

yuppers. you're right about that.


message 545: by DarknessIsUponUs, Frozen, Doctor Who and Sherlock are my lives no judging (new)

DarknessIsUponUs | 492 comments Mod
:P I am good at that sort of thing :P idk why


message 546: by hannah ❤️ (new)

hannah ❤️ (pure-per-fection) Emma (Sherlock, the Doctor, River, Moriarty, Ayala) wrote: ":P I am good at that sort of thing :P idk why"

okay. i updated both.


message 547: by DarknessIsUponUs, Frozen, Doctor Who and Sherlock are my lives no judging (new)

DarknessIsUponUs | 492 comments Mod
cool
Calcifer is approved, Jacob needs a bit more with personality


message 548: by hannah ❤️ (new)

hannah ❤️ (pure-per-fection) Okay. I updated Jacob


message 549: by Sandra ((was olaf)) (last edited Mar 25, 2014 01:04PM) (new)

Sandra ((was olaf))  | 59 comments I updated Jack's personality. I hope it works.


message 550: by DarknessIsUponUs, Frozen, Doctor Who and Sherlock are my lives no judging (new)

DarknessIsUponUs | 492 comments Mod
❤️pure perfection❤️ wrote: "Okay. I updated Jacob"

Jacob is also approved

Olaf wrote: "I updated Jack's personality. I hope it works."

Jack is approved :P


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