The Lightning Thief
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help us write a scene part 2
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Feb 25, 2013 06:36PM
(Ya, but she's not gonna die. I just had to pull a Cassandra Clare and give a major cliffhanger!!)
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(It's okay.)
Percy glared Thalia.
"Maybe now's not the best time to talk about that," Rachel said.
"Right," Thalia said. "I am so glad I gave up boys."
Percy glared Thalia.
"Maybe now's not the best time to talk about that," Rachel said.
"Right," Thalia said. "I am so glad I gave up boys."
"Sorry."
Nico was staring at them like they were from outer space. Rachel stuck her tongue at him, which made him smile.
"Okay," Thalia said cheerfully, "what's next?"
Nico was staring at them like they were from outer space. Rachel stuck her tongue at him, which made him smile.
"Okay," Thalia said cheerfully, "what's next?"
(haha lol *city of bones buddies high five *)
Percy cracked a small smile at that.
"We'll then," he said, standing up, "let's go get my girlfriend back."
"Where are we getting her back from?" Nico asked.
"We'll then," he said, standing up, "let's go get my girlfriend back."
"Where are we getting her back from?" Nico asked.
Sarah wrote: "(haha lol *city of bones buddies high five *)"
Yeeeah!!! *high five*!! :D
Yeeeah!!! *high five*!! :D
Percy said, "I know the way." He whistled. "Blackjack! I need you, buddy!"
Thalia gulped as the horse flew out of the sky.
Where's the blondie, Blackjack asked.
"Tell you later," Percy answered stiffly and climbed on his back.
Where's the blondie, Blackjack asked.
"Tell you later," Percy answered stiffly and climbed on his back.
Where to, boss? Blackjack asked. Are we stopping for dougnuts this time?
"Not this time. Sorry Blackjack. C'mon guys, hop on."
Thalia looked as if she would rather do anything else. Anything.
Thalia looked as if she would rather do anything else. Anything.
(can't focus! Piper is making me anxious!!!!!)Percy knew exactly how she felt. These past few days, Annabeth's life was always in danger.
(Let's see, who else can we write about before we of back to Piper? ;P)
"It'll be okay, Thalia," Percy said, holding out his hand. "Hold on to me and shut your eyes. Blackjack won't let you fall."
"It'll be okay, Thalia," Percy said, holding out his hand. "Hold on to me and shut your eyes. Blackjack won't let you fall."
Pfft. Let her fall. I am not that bad of a flyer, Blackjack huffed.
Percy glared at him, but to his surprise, he felt Thalia take his hand.
"Let's go Seaweed Brain, before I change my mind."
Nico lifted Rachel on the the pegasus' back and hauled himself up too.
How many humans do you think I can carry boss? I'm not the Hulk!!
"Just go, pony boy."
"Let's go Seaweed Brain, before I change my mind."
Nico lifted Rachel on the the pegasus' back and hauled himself up too.
How many humans do you think I can carry boss? I'm not the Hulk!!
"Just go, pony boy."
Rachel clutched Nico's waist. Her body was shaking badly.
"Percy, you got a seatbelt or something?"
Percy shook his head as blackjack pushed off.
"What's wrong," Nico whispered back to Rachel.
Percy shook his head as blackjack pushed off.
"What's wrong," Nico whispered back to Rachel.
"Nothing," she said.
"You're lying through your chattering teeth," Nico said plainly.
"You're lying through your chattering teeth," Nico said plainly.
She gulped. "I am not that good at staying balanced and I fall off stuff a lot..." she held his waist tighter.
He put his hand protectively over her arms.
"I won't let you fall," he whispered.
"I won't let you fall," he whispered.
Despite all the heartbreak that was going on, Rachel couldn't help but feel grateful she had Nico there with her.
"I still.... don't think you could catch me in time," she whispered, shivering so hard Nico felt like he was vibrating.
"I do," she said, but she didn't stop shivering."Ra-chel," he whispered urgently.
Her grip was like a vice around his waist.
"Rachel," he said, "what's wrong. Really?"
"Rachel," he said, "what's wrong. Really?"
"I-" suddenly her voice was cut off when Blackjack swerved to the side. Rachel lost her grip and fell, to Nico's horror, off of the peguasus, with one hand griping his shirt, dangling to her death.
"PERCY!!" Thalia and Nico screamed at the same time. Percy glanced over, a look of horror passed over his face.
"Blackjack!!" He shouted.
I told you boss, let her fall, the horse said.
"BLACKJACK!!!"
Rachel was just hanging there, clinging to Nico's aviators jacket.
"Nico, please," she begged. Tears were streaming out of her eyes. Thalia was reaching for her hand, but it was dangling and just out of reach.
"Come on you ridiculous bag of feathers!!!" Thalia shouted.
Rachel's fingers were slipping in Nico's hand.
"BLACKJACK!!! Move it!!" Percy screamed.
The horse gave an exasperated whinny and leaned the other direction. Thalia grabbed Rachel's other hand and hauled her up.
"Blackjack!!" He shouted.
I told you boss, let her fall, the horse said.
"BLACKJACK!!!"
Rachel was just hanging there, clinging to Nico's aviators jacket.
"Nico, please," she begged. Tears were streaming out of her eyes. Thalia was reaching for her hand, but it was dangling and just out of reach.
"Come on you ridiculous bag of feathers!!!" Thalia shouted.
Rachel's fingers were slipping in Nico's hand.
"BLACKJACK!!! Move it!!" Percy screamed.
The horse gave an exasperated whinny and leaned the other direction. Thalia grabbed Rachel's other hand and hauled her up.
(um well ur amazing, so i want u to write it, but longer and more intense?)
Percy rolled his eyes. Little did they know, they were about to get shot out of the sky by an unseen force.***************************************************************
(back to Piper Please?)
Jason was lying on the floor, feeling like his insides were burned out. He knew if he used to much of his power, he could spontaneously combust, but that didn't matter at the moment. He wished he had some ambrosia and nectar. Mania was taking her time torturing Piper. She was whimpering and gasping and clutching at different parts of her body with endless tears streaming down her face. Jason knew she couldn't take it much longer.Come on, he willed his body. Just one short burst of speed, and that's all I will ask. Piper needs me, please!
Piper saw out of the corner of her eye that he was getting his strength back. She mouthed Run!
And he did.
But not in the direction or speed Piper wanted him to. He leaped protectively in front of her, his body cold and sweating, his breathing very short and shallow.
"Jason," she breathed. "Why can't you just leave? I need you to be safe."
(erin she can't talk.... can u edit it so that she makes gestures?)
She tried weakly to push him off her, but he wasn't moving, and Mania was not happy.
(OMG u guys are awesome and Erin i loved post 382 and you guys like Cassandra Clare?!!? I LOVE her especially the Infernal Devices im on preorder for Clockwork Princess!!! Cant wait okk lets see were you stopped)
"Move you blasted boy before i destroy you and your pathetic friend"Jasons body shuddered "Never in a million years will i let you hurt the people I love with out putting up a fight!"
Looking down at Jason "In that case killing you will be a pleasure and I cant wait for your stupid, idiotic father to find out"
As soon as those words were out of her mouth a huge crack of thunder shook the room
and booming voice spoke "Who dares insult the God Jupiter and threaten one of his children!"
and in a flash there stood in the center of the room, Jason's father.
(now lets cut to Annabeth and she feels the thunder and gets curious then Mania poofs beside her with Jupiter chasing her so she makes fighting Jupiter the first task, Jupiter can say something to her like Daughter of Athena your on the wrong side or wheres your boyfriend or something like that and that can start her suspions and Jupiter could restore Jasons powers so he can atleast fight for Piper)
K I'm in school so shoot! Write a long scene so I have something good to read when I get home.
AHHHH i just wrote like a huge long post then something happened and it erased!!!!
**************************Annabeth had been dozing quietly on her chair when the throne room began to shake and she fell smack on the floor on her butt. She had barely stood up when Mania magically appeared beside her out of breath.
"This is your task get rid of...THAT!!!" She screeched as she pointed at the middle of the empty throne room.
"Oh, great Mania's gone crazy" thought Annabeth until she heard a deep thundering chuckle
"So this is how low you have swooped, gettin Demigods to protect your pathetic skin." Boomed a huge man that was suddunly in the center of the room.
Sensing some action Annabeth jumped up to stand up for her Mistress.
"Hey who do you think you are!?!?! You can't just come in and insult the Goddess Mania in the middle of her throne room!"
"Hmmmm....I recognize that voice come out here child." Said the great man
"You didn't answer my question! Who are you?" Annabeth said with her hands on her hips. "And what do you want? Wait, don't answer that because even if you say "pretty please" you aren't getting it. At least from my lady."
Zeus shook in rage.
Zeus shook in rage.
Annabeth glared at him defiantly. "Oh!" said the man. "I know that glare! It is the young and boastful Annabeth Chase! Where is my nephew? He is always with you!"Annabeth was confused. That Percy guy had called her Annabeth too. What if Mania was lying to her?
Mania heard that thought and said angrily, "What do you-"
"What nephew?" Annabeth demanded.
"Pers-"
"I think it is time for you to leave," Mania yelled.
"What nephew?" Annabeth screamed.
The man looked confused. "You don't.... but how come....."
"Out, or I'll tell your wife you made an unexpected stop to see her least favorite relative instead of going back to Olympus to spend the summer solstice with her!" Mania yelled.
Zeus looked angry. "I am not going to listen to you, especially when you threaten my son." he paused. "Good luck getting fried." He snapped his fingers and disappeared.
Mania heard a sound in the next room, the buzz of electricity and power of a demigod who was very, very, mad.
Sarah u could add the post u sent me here
(ok I am on it. everyone hold ur posts for like one minute)
Mania raced into the next room. "Stay here," she yelled to Annabeth. Jason crackled with electricity. "Anyone," he said slowly, "That hurts Piper pays for it." He looked really, really, mad. Piper gazed up at him in awe.
Mania seemed to realize what he was going to do and grabbed Piper by the arm.
"Electrocute me, and she gets it with me," Mania hissed.
That made Jason even more mad. The electricity sparked even higher. He met Piper's eyes, as if saying, What do you want me to do?
Piper held up three fingers. Jason shook his head.
Trust me.
Jason gazed into her eyes, and she saw a fire brewing behind them. He gave a slight nod, his body shaking slightly.
Piper held up one finger.
Then a second.
On the third, she twisted away from Mania right as Jason pulsed energy towards Mania. The goddess screamed. Piper fell to the floor. "Get behind me, Piper," he said through gritted teeth.
Piper crawled just in time to get away from Mania and behind Jason. The smell of burnt red velvet cake filled the air.
(Sorry, just how I pictured Mania. Sweet on the outside, red and dark on the inside)
(Sorry, just how I pictured Mania. Sweet on the outside, red and dark on the inside)
(lool sounds good i want some :P)
"Jason," she said, her voice raspy, reaching for him."Don't touch me!" he yelped. "Piper, I would fry you!"
Suddenly Mania hurled some dark spell at Jason. Piper tackled him and they both rolled out of the way. Jason stared at her in horror. She was limp and her hair stood on end.
"Piper? Piper!" Jason screamed. Mania, probably from the dramatic effort, fell unconscious. Jason hoped she would stay like that, but came to him that he was the only conscious one in the room with no idea where he was.
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