The Lightning Thief
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help us write a scene part 2
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Feb 24, 2013 05:27PM
Oh no no no no no no times 1000. Annabeth can't be dead... She's too stubborn die.
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As soon as she said those words, Percy broke out into another sobbing fit. Being a son of Poseidon, his tears evaporated immediately after hitting any surface so he looked awful with red and puffy eyes.
As soon as she said those words, Percy broke out into another sobbing fit. Being a son of Poseidon, his tears evaporated immediately after hitting any surface so he looked awful with red and puffy eyes.
Nico turned to Rachel, "Mania took Annabeth's memories, and then she took Annabeth." He explained.
They all started crying all over again.
Thalia was getting tired of crying, waiting to die in Tartarus. She knew if Annabeth and switched places, Annabeth would already be making a plan to go after her. "Always have a plan" echoed in her head.
"Okay," Thalia said. "We've come to this terrible conclusion, but we have to get OUT of this hole to do any good."
"Thalia right," Percy sniffled. "We have to find Annabeth before it's too late."
Thalia was getting tired of crying, waiting to die in Tartarus. She knew if Annabeth and switched places, Annabeth would already be making a plan to go after her. "Always have a plan" echoed in her head.
"Okay," Thalia said. "We've come to this terrible conclusion, but we have to get OUT of this hole to do any good."
"Thalia right," Percy sniffled. "We have to find Annabeth before it's too late."
"Yes ma'am," Nico muttered.
"And how do we plan on getting out of here?" Rachel asked.
"And how do we plan on getting out of here?" Rachel asked.
"What are we gonna do about it?" Leo asked Jason as he explained the situation, "It sounds to me like we've got a serious godly problem... we haven't had very luck with those!"
"Well we can't just sit here." Jason argued.
"Well we can't just sit here." Jason argued.
"Fine," Leo said, smile still intact. "Should we go to Chiron at least? The centaur's been alive for thousands of years; he should have some past experience about girlfriends being stolen by wacky goddesses."
((... LAZEL!!!! But then Frank's lonely... phooey))
"I guess that's the best we can do right now." Jason conceded.
"I guess that's the best we can do right now." Jason conceded.
((Laaaaaaazel!!!))
"Oh goody, campers." Mr. D grumbled sarcastically, "What do you want?"
"Chiron, is he here?" Jason asked.
"Oh goody, campers." Mr. D grumbled sarcastically, "What do you want?"
"Chiron, is he here?" Jason asked.
"Son of Zeus or Jupiter whatever you kids go by nowadays, it's polite to address someone higher by saying good morning or-"
"Is Chiron here," Jason asked again.
"Is Chiron here," Jason asked again.
"Cool it, Sparky." Leo muttered, "We don't have the time."
"When do you think he'll be back," Jason asked through his grin. Mr. D shrugged.
"It could be a while, he used Greek Fire."
"It could be a while, he used Greek Fire."
We're all going crazy... Jason thought as he laughed along.
Great, only one solution left... "Mr. D, we have a problem." Jason said.
"That word again!" Leo yelled, Jason punched his shoulder.
"What do we do?" Jason asked. Mr. D sighed and took a sip of his Diet Coke.
"It sounds to me like you have a quest on your hands."
"What do we do?" Jason asked. Mr. D sighed and took a sip of his Diet Coke.
"It sounds to me like you have a quest on your hands."
"You ready to get out of here?" Nico asked the group.
"Born ready," Percy said grimly.
"Born ready," Percy said grimly.
Mae *daughter of Athena* wrote: "Cara wrote: ""Son of Zeus or Jupiter whatever you kids go by nowadays, it's polite to address someone higher by saying good morning or-"
"Is Chiron here," Jason asked again."
yay it fit!!"
(:)!!!)
"Is Chiron here," Jason asked again."
yay it fit!!"
(:)!!!)
"C'mon, Seaweed Brain," Thalia said. "Hold on now!"
(how are they getting out? Are they flying out like Jason can do?)
(how are they getting out? Are they flying out like Jason can do?)
(Holy crap guys!! You've Ben busy today!!)
"Mania blasted a pretty big hole when she came in here," Percy yelled. "We can climb out, but I don't know the way out of the Underworld from here."
"You act as if I've never been here," Nico said. "Do you forget who I am? Powers or o powers my dad's still hades."
"Sorry," Percy muttered.
"It's alright. Now, Thalia, when we get out of this hell hole, you're going to want to head towards the Fields of Asphodel. Then once you can see Cerberus, turn right!"
"Okay. I don't really understand, but okay," Thalia yelled back.
"Okay. I don't really understand, but okay," Thalia yelled back.
***********************************************************Jason had decided that he was going to find Piper on his own. After all, he was a hero and had battled monsters by himself before. He couldn't ask Leo for help, and he didn't want Mr. D to come with him. Mr. D had showed them a map of where Mania kept her lair. Jason had it in his pocket.
Mania was standing there in a flowing black dress.
(woow uve done a lot and dont u guys sleep and go to school?and mae thats so cool id love to be on that team:P)
"Come out here Demigod" Mania called
Seeing that hiding was hopeless he got some lightning bolts ready and came out from behind the stall.
((Sarah's right. Do you guys never sleep? And I agree, Mae I wanna go to your school!!!))
"What else could you possibly want!?!?" he yelled "I'm sure you already know, i did hear you were smarter than that foolish Perseus Jackson." she replied calmly.
"I have no idea what you could want from me all i want is Piper so unless you tell me where she is i'm leaving and you can go find someone else to bother." Jason began to walk away. And failed as he ran in to an invisible wall.
"Well then since your not cooperating i guess your going to need some convincing"
Then Jason felt something cold creep into his mind and then he blacked out and all he knew was pain.
END OF CHAPTER ONE
(I think)
The ride out of Tartarus was something Percy never wanted to repeat. Clinging to a rope and prying for survival while the only person holding you up from dying was terrified of heights, Percy would rather be having a meeting with Mr. D. Not to mention the only thing Thalia said aside for shouting at Nico for directions was "ohgodsohgosdohgodsohgods, we're gonna die! We're gonna die!!" Not a good day for Percy.
When they all finally did get through the hole the only things Percy wanted to do was smack Thalia, jump in the nearest water body and stay underwater till all his problems disappeared. But he knew he couldn't do that he had to save Annabeth.Annabeth, how could she not remember him, everything that happened between them was gone. He felt empty like half of him had been ripped away, and in a sense it had.
What memory could mania possibly taken that would allow her to forget him? They had been thought so much together! And she hadn't looked like she remembered Thalia or Nico either. Mania couldn't have taken only one memory.
But, what if... what if she only did take one memory but maybe she messed up the rest?!?!?(dont know what to do next...im stalling)
Oh, man!! how could he have been so stupid!!! the freaking goddess of crazy made a deal with them and they hadn't even made her swear on the Styx!!!
That was so boneheaded of me! He thought. How could I do that to her?!
"Okay," Thalia said. We're out of Tartarus. I am NOT flying you guys all the way out of here not happening! So Nico, lead the way." She gestured with her hand for him to move. Nico looked like he was going to puke.
"Okay," Thalia said. We're out of Tartarus. I am NOT flying you guys all the way out of here not happening! So Nico, lead the way." She gestured with her hand for him to move. Nico looked like he was going to puke.
"Well then" Nico chocked out "lets keep going"**************************************************
"So who were those people, why did that boy keep saying he loved me? Why'd he call me Annabeth? Who's Percy, Nico, Rachel and Thalia? Were they really bad? What was going on how come I don't remember anything?" Annabeth had begun to whine.
She sat on a small chair hidden behind the curtains on the left of Manias throne. She was comfortable but confused.
(wow that's a lot of posts! I had to go to school... :( )
"Dear child, you shouldn't ask so many questions or you'll be even more confused than when you started," Mania said soothingly. "You will get your answers soon enough."
"Okay," Annabeth said. This woman was right. Did I know her before I woke up? Was she related to me?, Annabeth thought.
Being the goddess of madness and having Annabeth's memories, Mania heard every single thought echoing through Annabeth's mind. Did this girl ever STOP thinking a thousand things at once?
"Dear child, you shouldn't ask so many questions or you'll be even more confused than when you started," Mania said soothingly. "You will get your answers soon enough."
"Okay," Annabeth said. This woman was right. Did I know her before I woke up? Was she related to me?, Annabeth thought.
Being the goddess of madness and having Annabeth's memories, Mania heard every single thought echoing through Annabeth's mind. Did this girl ever STOP thinking a thousand things at once?
(lool ikrr i went to sleep woke up and there were like another 3 pages and im homeschooled so i wrote a bit today)
If that Percy dude did know me, than I'm lucky cause he was kind of cute. These walls are made of celestial bronze. Wait.... how do I even know that? Never a daughter of Athena again, Mania decided.
(I guess we just have to stop sleeping :D)
I guess I just know that, somehow, she thought. Who were those other people that were with that Percy guy? They seem kind of familiar.
Sensing that Annabeth was going to come to conclusions sooner rather than later, Mania said placidly, "Come on, sweetheart. Time to get to training."
"If you're going to be any use to me," Mania muttered under her breath.
"If you're going to be any use to me," Mania muttered under her breath.
((Okay. Is Annabeth trusting mania to the point that she's just gonna go along with anything that she says or is she gonna figure out that she's a horrible person and come to her senses?))
(probably just get suspicious and then mania will realise she cant keep up the act and shows annabeth her tru colours so annabeth will fight her but she wont really know why just that she loves percy and that they are the good guys)(and i cant write right now cause ive got some homework...stupid art class!!)
(she is the daughter of Athena after all)
(Maybe... maybe there should be a big, action, packed, romantic scene at the end? Or she figures it out on her own and destroys Mania behind her back? Or she just blows up Mania in the end? Sorry I've always wanted RR to do something random.)
(I personally think she should get her memory back at some point. Like maybe mania will reveal that she took it and then they'll have her "cornered" or something and mania will give it back just a thought)
(action packed romantic scene sounds really good but we cant have annabeth acting too stupid and oblivious maybe she starts getting suspicius but she doesnt fight back till she finds percy locked away in one of manias dungeons while she was wandering around against Manias orders then Mania senses she found out so she throws her in a cell beside him and she starts torturing percy and annabeth cant help cause shes locked up but she can hear his screams....then something like maybe Jason comes and then Mania dies but Percy is wounded and and Annabeth cries... and basically make it really emotional and action packed)
(what do u guys think? and while annabeth is locked away mania can torture her by showing her glimpses of her memories with percy)
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