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Jun 16, 2013 11:05AM
(so...we going to continue or something?)
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(uh,,,,,read the stuff)
Standing in the doorway was a woman with shimmering long hair. She looked young but had the atmosphere as someone who was much too old in intelligence.
(im not sure where to go from that..o.o)
(i don't really know who it is but she's the head of the Temple of Forgotten. I guess you can make up a name or something to go with how she's outraged? :))
(Why me!? i'm bad at that! last time i did that i came up with the name Zernif![z-er-nif])
(Zernif sounds original and cool :) and I'm equally as bad. I usually use google translate or something like that to mash words together! Maybe we should bring back Mania...)
Percy stopped dead in his tracks. He recognized the woman who stood in the door and all too well.
Percy stopped dead in his tracks. He recognized the woman who stood in the door and all too well.
[who is this god/ess supposed to be?!]
Mania looked at Percy. They knew each other[right?]. She started to walk to Phillia. "What nonsense is Perseus Jackson doing here?"
(AH! YES! We are doing this again!)Percy felt fear dripping down him like ice in his veins.
(THANKYOU SMILES!!!!!!)Mania continued to walk to them. "Peresuse Jackson!? What in the name of Hera are you doing here!?" She wanted him to get out, or be turned into a bug and to be steped on
Philia turned white.
"Mother, what are you doing?" she asked.
"Nothing you need to know about right now child."
hey its leah other spelling so is this like... a play or something? or like a re-creation of it?
Strawberryicecream22 wrote: "hey its leah other spelling so is this like... a play or something? or like a re-creation of it?"(please talk in quotes like [] or {} or () or (()) thanks)
(and im not sure im not the best at battle scenes. im trying by writing my own sci fi series though]
[it's fine you can join if you want]
who wants a percy jackson porn scene? I can make one!
[ok and guys please post in the comas like i am][because we are writing a story and want it so we talk in the comas so the story doesn't have to be and get confusing]
(Hi awesome! Sorry guys! Great new people!)Despite the fact that Philia was a goddess and Annabeth was his girlfriend, Percy found Philia quite beautiful and was concerned for her safety.
"Philia," he cautioned.
I have a question. You know how Piper and Jason are in this story? What happened to them last? And nico and Rachel? Who else am I missing?)
[i fon't know i was gone doing school stuff im lost]
sooo confused i dont even know what's happening..........
(me either.... I think Mania is Philia's mother and she is about to attack Percy.)
[yeah that's what i waws left to asume]
Sarah wrote: "(Hi awesome! Sorry guys! Great new people!)Despite the fact that Philia was a goddess and Annabeth was his girlfriend, Percy found Philia quite beautiful and was concerned for her safety.
"Philia..."
Mania flicked her wrist and sent Percy flying into the wall. "This is none of your concern Percuess Jackson." She said, purposefully saying his name wrong.
Slowly, Mania advanced on Philia. "You are such a weakling that you fell in love with a son of Hades! They are not even capable of love." "Don't you dare talk about Lieon!"
Annabeth grabed Percy's hand to hold him back when Mania said his name wrong, as you could see the anger in his eyes.
everybody slowly died. The End
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