The Lightning Thief
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help us write a scene part 2
(hey sorry I have been so busy and have NOT edited the Lieon and Phillia scene. Do you like Philia and Lieon idea?
(ok good. Im kinda heartless. :) I feel so sad for Philia :) )
(i know, but i love the flashback!)
(haha. Their reunion shall be CUTE!!!)
(Hey guys! I'm finally back. BTW I really want one of my forgotten to appear.... can one?)
(Thanks.)
(I'm so glad you guys didn't write much while I was gone. That could have been a lot of catching up)
(thanks for writing that post erin. i wasn't able to find this and thought it was deleted. thanks! :D)
(Sure! It took me forever to find it!)
(im just gonna bookmark it..if you can do that you should bookmark it.)
(I have the app so I don't think I could do that.)
(i can't go online with my phone.it's a basic phone..it can go online, i just don't have the plan for that. so i use the pc)
(Ya, my phone isn't smart either. In fact it's pretty stupid.)
(haha thats kinda funny)
(sorry if that's mean)
(aww now i got the wrong mean! can't think of how it's spelled..darn...)
Erin {I Wish I Was Audrey} wrote: "(Ya, my phone isn't smart either. In fact it's pretty stupid.)"
(lol, that's what my friend always says)
(lol, that's what my friend always says)
(lol. are u at school?)
(no i have today off for i don't know why exactly. Easter Monday maybe? Day for the teachers? idk :))
(teacher work day over here)
(cool :D)
(eh i have school and dance tomarrow)
(omgosh, I do too. what kind of dance do you do? Me= pointe, jazz, lyrical, tap)
"What is it?" Jason asked sensing that something wasn't right.
"What is it?" Jason asked sensing that something wasn't right.
(advanced jazz and advanced ballet. and they are both on tuesday and when jazz class is over, ballet starts as soon as its over. only good thing is the teachers go overtime A LOT)
Her whole body shook violently as unbearable pain surged through her shuddering body.
"Rachel!!!!!" Piper screamed as Rachel's body plummeted to the ground, having a death grip on the skull ring.
(Thanks for adding, too ;))
(Thanks for adding, too ;))
Her face had lost all colour. Piper looked at Jason in horror.
((You guts dance too!?!?!? Oh may gosh! That's really exciting!!))
((You guts dance too!?!?!? Oh may gosh! That's really exciting!!))
Jason nelt down next to Rachel as Piper put her head in her lap. Jason looked up at Piper. "What happened, Pipes?"(that good?)
(Ya.)
"I don't know," piper said. "She just seized up all of a sudden. I don't know why."
"I don't know," piper said. "She just seized up all of a sudden. I don't know why."
Nemesis, leaning against a tree, gave a low chuckle. These demigods and the hopelessly in love oracle were too much.
The hair on Jasons neck stood up. He felt like someone was watching them. He looked over his shoulder and saw no one, but walked over to the trees(ok?)
(yea :))
"Stay here, Piper," he said, but of course she had already caught up to him by the time he said it. By now, some other campers were tending to Rachel.
"Stay here, Piper," he said, but of course she had already caught up to him by the time he said it. By now, some other campers were tending to Rachel.
(what should we have them do now? go to trees and so or not see nemesis or jason tell piper to stay there again?)
(Maybe both meet so they can both get passage to the Underworld... IDK
(lol how about this?)Jason stopped walking and turned to Piper. "Please stay here Pipes."
Jason and Piper were walking in through the woods.The ground was coated with dust and spoils of war.He was about to turn back to Piper when a voice said."Demigods,so easy to control."Jason turned back.A woman leaned on a tree a few feet away from him.The woman radiated power.Jason was sure she was no dryad nor nymph.
"who are you?"Jason said,as he unsheathed his gladius.Slowly he walked closer.Piper" hand was around Jason's arm.
The woman laughed malevolently then her faced formed a sneer.
"Always dimwitted! I am Nemesis,goddess of revenge and balance.I know what you need.I know what you want.You need passage to the underworld."
"How do you know?"Jason lowered his gladius.
Nemesis laughed again.Jason then realized how stupid his question sounded.
"I can help you" she said "but for a price."Piper's eyes met his and immediately understood that she didn't want him to agree with the goddess.
Jason glared at Nemesis.He heard stories from camp about a camper who recently exchanged and eye for a wish from a goddess.Now he knew which goddess had granted that camper's wish.
"What do I have to give?"He asked nervously
The goddess had pulled a twig from a tree.
"Hmmm.you will know soon if accept my offer."Her fingers twirled the twig.
"NO!"Piper shook her head.
Jason hesitated.What if that price was too much to pay?
"You wont have another way coming to the underworld you know."She reminded
He took a deep breath then thought for a second.Finally he decided.
"I accept the offer."
Nemesis smirked at him.Then her body broke into mist then swept away.Where she stood now lay the broken twig her fingers played with.Jason knelt and picked it up.He pocketed it then ran back with Piper at his side.
(.im sorry for interrupting.Im really bad at writing.)
(no that was good :) we need new voices)
(thank you:)And thanks for letting me join in :))
(so good...don't know what to add!)
(how about the use to the twig like a pencil and draw a line in the earth and a portal opens or something like that?)
(That sounds cool. Rachel has to be there though...)
(What about this? not sure if it fits)"Where are we going?"Piper shouted as they ran.
"We need to see Chiron." Jason replied "maybe he can help."
They slowed down when they were in camp.
"Maybe he's in the infirmary" Piper suggested.They both entered the infirmary.It was full of wounded campers.All of them were tended by nymphs and Apollo campers.One of the wounded was Rachel.She sat up on the bed as Jason approached her and Piper followed.
"Hi" Jason said "um have you seen Chiron?"
"He was here a while ago." Rachel answered "Why?"
Piper told her about their meeting with Nemesis and the twigs that were left behind. Rachel's eyes widened.
"We can save Nico."Rachel said excitedly
"But how will we know which part of the underworld Nico is in?"Jason questioned.
"We'll figure that out later."Rachel said quickly."Can I see the twigs you told me about?"
As Jason took out the twigs Rachel pulled out the ring that Nico owned.
"Here"The twigs that rested on Jason's palm glowed blue then it elongated.They waited breathlessly for the twigs to form something impressive but it turned to a regular pencil.
"oh." Piper said sounding disappointed.But Rachel,who was also crestfallen,could not give up on Nico right away.She started to get up.She staggered a little but she was okay.
"Come on." Rachel gestured the two to follow her.Rachel lead then through the woods.Finally they stopped near a creek.
"Pencil please."Rachel held out her hand.Jason didn't know what she was up to but he gave it to her.Rachel studied it for a moment then she knelt on the ground then drew a circle.They waited for a few seconds.
"Well that was-"Piper started to say.The circle glowed.The ground in the circle cracked.Slowly the dirt fell away until the circle turned into a hole.
(man you are good! im speechless!)
(WOW, WOW AND WOW!!! So glad to have you on board on this story Trisha! :))
"What is that!" Piper exclaimed.
"Our promised way into the Underworld," Jason said grimly. "Ladies first." He said with an overextended hand gesture.
"Fine," Rachel took a shaky step through the literal black hole. "See you on the other side."
The hole felt like walking through time randomly. Rachel didn't know where people got the whole "walk-in-and-walk-out" thing about transporting because there was a wide gap between walking in and out. Once she stepped out the of the forest, she was in this big, transparent room with moving videos on the floor, walls and ceiling. Everything was moving so fast, she couldn't process it all. On one panel, there was Mt. Olympus but on another there was a scene of a random classroom with what looked like a demigod in it.
The Underworld she thought. That's where I need to go.
She walked past several panels (including one that looked strangely like Percy and Annabeth were in), when she finally found the dark panel of what had to be the Underworld.
What now? she thought.
"What is that!" Piper exclaimed.
"Our promised way into the Underworld," Jason said grimly. "Ladies first." He said with an overextended hand gesture.
"Fine," Rachel took a shaky step through the literal black hole. "See you on the other side."
The hole felt like walking through time randomly. Rachel didn't know where people got the whole "walk-in-and-walk-out" thing about transporting because there was a wide gap between walking in and out. Once she stepped out the of the forest, she was in this big, transparent room with moving videos on the floor, walls and ceiling. Everything was moving so fast, she couldn't process it all. On one panel, there was Mt. Olympus but on another there was a scene of a random classroom with what looked like a demigod in it.
The Underworld she thought. That's where I need to go.
She walked past several panels (including one that looked strangely like Percy and Annabeth were in), when she finally found the dark panel of what had to be the Underworld.
What now? she thought.
(no really,i am bad at writing.You people are way better than me)"Rachel?" Piper's voice echoed in the tunnel.She and Jason were walking behind her.Jason looked around with a mixture of surprise and confusion while Piper stared at the vivid image that had to be Percy and Annabeth.Annabeth and Percy had lots of wounds and bruises.Rachel scratched her head.
"Percy and Annabeth are in trouble and so is Nico.Now which way to go?"
"We are not going to split are we?"Piper said carefully.
"We don't know where Percy's at." Jason pointed out his eyes traveled around the ceiling."You think the pencil will work twice?"
"I don't know."Rachel admitted.Her hand tightly held the ring.Rachel had a good feeling about the ring.This is a piece of Nico that hopefuly had some powers.
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Just has her hand closed on it, it began to vibrate, slowly then more rapidly.
Jason came up behind them. "Hey, Pipes. Rachel." He nodded.