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message 751: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah (yes go right ahead)


message 752: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah She laughed without humor. "Yeah? So important I'm in here while you are out there risking your life!"


message 753: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah Jason sat down beside her. "I'm not going to die."
"How do you KNOW?" she suddenly shouted.


message 754: by Sarah (last edited Mar 04, 2013 07:31PM) (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah Tears were streaming down her face. "Jason," she choked.


message 755: by [deleted user] (new)

"I mean it, Piper McLean. Even death will never do us part," Jason said solemnly like a promise. He leaned in really close so even if he whispered, she would hear every word.


message 756: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah "Jason," she croaked again.


message 757: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah "Why do you like me?" She whispered. "Reyna would be so much better for you."


message 758: by [deleted user] (new)

"Reyna is a great praetor, but I'm not looking for another person like me. I want someone different, funny, kind, adventurous, dangerous," he said smiling, remembering when Piper told him she was a dangerous girl.


message 759: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah "But she's so pretty, Piper said.


message 760: by [deleted user] (new)

"Piper," he said firmly. "YOU are gorgeous. I don't care if she's pretty. You're the one I care about.


message 761: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah "Then stay." She begged him. "Please, Jason, stay."


message 762: by [deleted user] (new)

Jason looked her in the eye. "Pipes, they need me out there."
"And I need you here," she cried.


message 763: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah "Piper-"
"I'll follow you out there," she threatened.
"Your leg-"
"I will DRAG myself," she said.


message 764: by [deleted user] (new)

Jason looked like he was on the verge of tears.


message 765: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah "Pipes."


message 766: by [deleted user] (new)

"Jason," she said firmly. "You're not going anywhere!"


message 767: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah "I don't care about me, Jason. That isn't what I am worried about!"


message 768: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah "No!" She grabbed his arm. "Then I'm coming with you!"


message 769: by [deleted user] (new)

Jason was getting a little exasperated and Piper could tell. "Sorry, Jas," she whispered.
"You want me to come with you to the battlefield," Piper spoke in charm speak.


message 770: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah "Alrigh-" He shook his head. "No! No Piper," he said.


message 771: by [deleted user] (new)

"That won't work. You can't charmspeak me into letting you come!!"


message 772: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah "You aren't going to 'let' me do anything!" Piper cried.


message 773: by [deleted user] (new)

"Piper," he says, clapping a hand over her mouth. "We're making a scene. Please just stay here."


message 774: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah "Mcomim ditg poo," she said.


message 775: by [deleted user] (new)

(nice!!)
"Please Piper," Jason pleaded. Suddenly, he slipped his hand off her mouth and kissed her. "Please," he whispered against her lips. Piper's will melted.


message 776: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah "Jason," she croaked. "Promise me..."


message 777: by [deleted user] (new)

"I'll be careful."


message 778: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah "Promise?"


message 779: by [deleted user] (new)

"I promise."


message 780: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah "Okay." She sighs in defeat. (wouldnt it be funny if he is about to die and she saves him? And then she could be like, "lucky I saved your butt,")


message 781: by [deleted user] (new)

(you can write that part.)
"Thank you Pipes." He kisses her lightly and runs out the door.


message 782: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah And is greeted by a monsters face. "Why, hello ugly," he said.


message 783: by [deleted user] (new)

In response, the monster roared in his face.


message 784: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah He drew out his coin and flipped it. "I hope you aren't allergic to Tartus," he said.


message 785: by [deleted user] (new)

The monster tilted its head to the side as if asking him what he was talking about.


message 786: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah Then, Jason sprung forward and and struck the monster in the side of it's body. It screeched and lunged at Jason, but he was faster. He leaped on top of the hideous thing and grabbed ahold of its scales.


message 787: by [deleted user] (new)

The monster was confused. Obviously it didn't have good peripherals.


message 788: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah Then, it gained its senses and fought back. Jason held on for his life. The monster started towards the building that held Piper.
"Oh no, ugly." Jason growled. "You aren't touching my girlfriend."


Isabella (All Da Ladies Luv Leo) Thomas (BACK!)

tHE MONSTER ROARED


message 790: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah In one fast motion, the beast twisted, knocking Jason off its back. Jason fell and landed hard on his shoulder. Claws reached towards his neck and he fought desperately to keep them away from him, but the pain was making his vision blurry.


Isabella (All Da Ladies Luv Leo) Thomas He finally passed out and as the monster closed in, Tolers yelled, charging, and striked the beast between its necks


message 792: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah It roared and hit Tolers.HE went flying, and reached back for Jason, who was desperately trying to get away.


Isabella (All Da Ladies Luv Leo) Thomas (Sorry, Toilers)

Toilers managed to reach Jason in time and, thanks to Clarisse's teachings, managed to protect them both.


message 794: by [deleted user] (new)

(1000+ posts :))

"Get... out of here.... kid," Jason wheezed.
Toilers also learned from Clarisse to never take "no" for an answer.


message 795: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah For about two seconds. Then, Jason felt himself being lifted by the monster.
"I'm sorry, Piper," he whispered.
But death never came. Something knocked into him and he went flying. He opened his eyes and saw Piper.
Piper.
"you can't get away from me that easy," she teased.


message 796: by [deleted user] (new)

(I think it works)


Isabella (All Da Ladies Luv Leo) Thomas Toilers got angry and hacked more violently after the deamon rasped out "Toilets"


message 798: by [deleted user] (last edited Mar 05, 2013 06:44PM) (new)

Sarah wrote: "Cara wrote: "(I think it works)"

(ya it does. sorry bout tht)"


(sorry too...)


message 799: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah "Piper," said Jason, "What are you doing out here?"


message 800: by [deleted user] (new)

"Saving your butt," she replied, smirking.


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