The Lightning Thief
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help us write a scene part 2
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"I mean it, Piper McLean. Even death will never do us part," Jason said solemnly like a promise. He leaned in really close so even if he whispered, she would hear every word.
"Reyna is a great praetor, but I'm not looking for another person like me. I want someone different, funny, kind, adventurous, dangerous," he said smiling, remembering when Piper told him she was a dangerous girl.
"Piper," he said firmly. "YOU are gorgeous. I don't care if she's pretty. You're the one I care about.
Jason looked her in the eye. "Pipes, they need me out there."
"And I need you here," she cried.
"And I need you here," she cried.
Jason looked like he was on the verge of tears.
"Jason," she said firmly. "You're not going anywhere!"
Jason was getting a little exasperated and Piper could tell. "Sorry, Jas," she whispered.
"You want me to come with you to the battlefield," Piper spoke in charm speak.
"You want me to come with you to the battlefield," Piper spoke in charm speak.
"That won't work. You can't charmspeak me into letting you come!!"
"Piper," he says, clapping a hand over her mouth. "We're making a scene. Please just stay here."
(nice!!)
"Please Piper," Jason pleaded. Suddenly, he slipped his hand off her mouth and kissed her. "Please," he whispered against her lips. Piper's will melted.
"Please Piper," Jason pleaded. Suddenly, he slipped his hand off her mouth and kissed her. "Please," he whispered against her lips. Piper's will melted.

(you can write that part.)
"Thank you Pipes." He kisses her lightly and runs out the door.
"Thank you Pipes." He kisses her lightly and runs out the door.
In response, the monster roared in his face.
The monster tilted its head to the side as if asking him what he was talking about.

The monster was confused. Obviously it didn't have good peripherals.

"Oh no, ugly." Jason growled. "You aren't touching my girlfriend."




Toilers managed to reach Jason in time and, thanks to Clarisse's teachings, managed to protect them both.
(1000+ posts :))
"Get... out of here.... kid," Jason wheezed.
Toilers also learned from Clarisse to never take "no" for an answer.
"Get... out of here.... kid," Jason wheezed.
Toilers also learned from Clarisse to never take "no" for an answer.

"I'm sorry, Piper," he whispered.
But death never came. Something knocked into him and he went flying. He opened his eyes and saw Piper.
Piper.
"you can't get away from me that easy," she teased.
Sarah wrote: "Cara wrote: "(I think it works)"
(ya it does. sorry bout tht)"
(sorry too...)
(ya it does. sorry bout tht)"
(sorry too...)
"Saving your butt," she replied, smirking.
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