The Lightning Thief
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"C'mon Grace!" she said. "Focus here! we got monster butt to whoop!"
"There are more?" Jason asked.
Piper then remembered the promise she'd made to Chiron. She needed to find Nico di Angelo.
"Nico," she whispered. "Jason! Where's Nico?!"
"Not sure. There was a big face-off between him and a monster a little while before. I think the dude got confused with the Cyclopes ability to mimic voiced. He said something about Percy. He might be in the infirmary now with Rachel or out in the woods fighting more monsters."
(was piper there when Nico had his whole mortal shpeel?)

Erin *Arwin Livingston* wrote: "(was piper there when Nico had his whole mortal shpeel?)"
(yeah...love the word shpeel :))
(yeah...love the word shpeel :))
(isn't it a great word?!)
"Percy," she said to herself. "Oh gods!! Please tell me it wasn't about killing him!" She sprinted for the woods.
"Piper!"
"Percy," she said to herself. "Oh gods!! Please tell me it wasn't about killing him!" She sprinted for the woods.
"Piper!"
"Move it or lose it, Jas!" Piper shouted. This was bad. Really bad. Like falling into Tartarus bad.

Piper stopped at the edge of the forest.
"Okay. Okay. If I were a Son of Hades in a panic, where would I be?"
"Okay. Okay. If I were a Son of Hades in a panic, where would I be?"
"Nico," Piper muttered, "Nico. Where are you?"
(Why does she need to find Nico again?)
(Why does she need to find Nico again?)
(to watch him for Chiron to make sure Nemesis isn't in his brain making him do her will)
"Piper."
"I need to find Nico!"
"I need to find Nico!"
"Thank you! SOMEONE got my name right. And sure, I'll take your girlfriend."
Toilers hailed a Party Pony like he would a cab and they were off.
Toilers hailed a Party Pony like he would a cab and they were off.

(Absolutely!! We love new people!!!)
Jason scanned the edge of the forest. He couldn't think of where he might find Nico? Then it hit him. Find Rachel and he would probably find Nico.
Trying to wave his way through the sea of orange and bronze, he spotted flickers of red hair running around in circles trying to figure out what to do.
"Rachel!" he shouted and she whipped around looking to see who had called her name. Jason ran up to her.
"Have you seen Nico?"
"I thought he was with you?!"
"Have you seen Nico?"
"I thought he was with you?!"
"Oh Zeus! What now?! We have to find him!"
Rachel gave him a look that said "I doubt that."
Jason ignored her.
"Where do you think he'd be?" he asked.
Jason ignored her.
"Where do you think he'd be?" he asked.
"Whoa," Jason said leaping back as a stray slice from a Demeter kids with a sword came wizzing past them.
"Let's look by the Big House!" Rachel shouted. "I heard him muttering something about his destiny."
"Let's look by the Big House!" Rachel shouted. "I heard him muttering something about his destiny."
(That's a frightening image)
"Nico?" Rachel took a step back.
"Nico?" Rachel took a step back.

Nico moved closer to her, a knife in his hand. His hair turned gray and his sking withered and turned a dark shade of purple....
Jason stepped in front of Rachel, holding his sword in front of him.

Jason inspected it, jumping out of reach, and saw it was turning black rapidly.
"Rachel," he said trying to stay calm, "run."

Jason looked at his arm and saw that the whole thing was black and was moving to his abdomen, where his heart would push the venom faster than it was moving before
"I'll be right behind you" he said.
Nico suddenly doubled over, gasping. His eyes returned to normal, his mouth stopped foaming, his skin smoothed itself and tuned to while like always, and his knife clattered to the ground.
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