The Lightning Thief
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help us write a scene part 2
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He struggled to break the bars and open the doors but the second he started the bars heated up like burning iron.
(yeah had to finish English homework)
He fell back. Piper looked like she wanted to jump up and bring him into her warm embrace but since she couldn't even talk, there was no way that was happening. The last thing Piper remembered as Mania dragged away her boyfriend was that she was sorry she ever got him into this mess.
He fell back. Piper looked like she wanted to jump up and bring him into her warm embrace but since she couldn't even talk, there was no way that was happening. The last thing Piper remembered as Mania dragged away her boyfriend was that she was sorry she ever got him into this mess.
"Please be okay, Jason," she whispered. "Don't let her touch you."
Piper whished Annabeth was here. She would be able to get her out of this mess.
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Piper whished Annabeth was here. She would be able to get her out of this mess.
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(What if Piper reminds Annabeth about her real name and that's when she starts to doubt mania?!?)
"nothing....yet""you wicked beast!!! let me go, i will kill you!!!"
"Bold words for someone who is barely conscious, dont forget ive got your girlfriend."
Then she turned around and grsbbed his collar and pushed him against a wall. "Dont forget who your talking to" she snarled you will do everything i tell you and you will have no say in the matter"
(Ya, but she could be down there and find piper. Then it could all work out!!)
Erin wrote: "(What if Piper reminds Annabeth about her real name and that's when she starts to doubt mania?!?)"
(YESSSSSSSS!!! Then they can all take down Mania there. Well right after Annabeth tries to kill Percy but can't)
(YESSSSSSSS!!! Then they can all take down Mania there. Well right after Annabeth tries to kill Percy but can't)
Cara wrote: "Erin wrote: "(What if Piper reminds Annabeth about her real name and that's when she starts to doubt mania?!?)"(YESSSSSSSS!!! Then they can all take down Mania there. Well right after Annabeth ..."
(sounds like a plan!! and ive got to go for the night bye everyone!!! :))
"Now we run," Jason said to himself. And sprinted back down the hall towards Piper.
"PIPER!!!!!" Jason yanked on the bars. "Come on, I gave her a pretty good shock, but we have to get out of here!"Piper looked at him, her eyes full of tears. "Can't move," she managed.
"C'mon Pipes, I need you! I can't do this on my own!!"
"I can't," She coughed, "Go now while you still can."
"I am NOT going to leave you again! Now how do I get this stupid thing to open," he said, glaring at the bars.
"I'm not leaving you," he protested, yanking at the bars harder. "Come on, why won't it open?" he yelled."Mania, she's coming," Piper coughed again.
"Jason leave," Piper begged. Mania began to stir...
"C'mon, c'mon,"he whispered and gave the bars a good shock. They sparked, but nothing spectacular or heroic happened.
Mania groaned, slowly waking up.
"Jason," Piper whispered. He looked at her, and there were tears in her eyes, "Please."
"Jason," Piper whispered. He looked at her, and there were tears in her eyes, "Please."
"Jason," she whispered hoarsely.
Mania was right behind him. "Run," she cried.
Back to full power, Mania rose upright again.
"Son of Jupiter," she shook her head as if to get the electricity out. "What an idiotic thing to do."
"Son of Jupiter," she shook her head as if to get the electricity out. "What an idiotic thing to do."
His hand slipped off the bars and, to his and mania's surprise, nailed her right in the gut.
(Take that!! Haha)
(Take that!! Haha)
She rose again, but he didn't even look at her, he was staring at Piper, who had gone rigid and was clutching her head and screaming.
((Everyone's posting at once!!!))
(whew. okay one at a time. Someone go.... everyone else hold it)
"You shall pay, demigod!" Mania cried out. She raised her hands, and pointed her palms at Jason. His screams split through the air, making Piper's heart stop beating for a moment.
"NO!" she screamed, and then clutched at her throat in shock. Her voice was gone. That would mean she could no longer charmspeak. Meanwhile, Jason was.....
(Only there was not fun song that took it away. It's just gone)
(Oh my gods, such a genius moment sarah)
(i know. Ursala is kind of like Mania too. awesome :))
(Oh my gosh she is!! Whoa..... Mind blown)
Jason's hands clenched into fists. Thunder could be hear in the distance...
Nicole di Angelo wrote: "(Oh my gods, such a genius moment sarah)"(why thank you, i don't have them very often)
Mae *Deathbringer* wrote: "Cara wrote: "(i know. Ursala is kind of like Mania too)"
(another reason, Prince Jason to the rescue!! wait, she saved herself in TLM, but i havent seen it in a while.....Oh didnt king triton sav..."
(I catch your drift :D)
(another reason, Prince Jason to the rescue!! wait, she saved herself in TLM, but i havent seen it in a while.....Oh didnt king triton sav..."
(I catch your drift :D)
Sarah wrote: "Nicole di Angelo wrote: "(Oh my gods, such a genius moment sarah)"
(why thank you, i don't have them very often)"
(Well your first one was starting this whole thing. I'd say it was pretty brilliant!!)
(why thank you, i don't have them very often)"
(Well your first one was starting this whole thing. I'd say it was pretty brilliant!!)
Mae *Deathbringer* wrote: "Sarah wrote: "Nicole di Angelo wrote: "(Oh my gods, such a genius moment sarah)"
(why thank you, i don't have them very often)"
(haha me either)"
(what are you talking about? You both have genius moments like everyday!!!)
(why thank you, i don't have them very often)"
(haha me either)"
(what are you talking about? You both have genius moments like everyday!!!)
Mania wasn't phased. Apparently she wasn't threatened by Jupiter's wrath.
Cara wrote: "Mae *Deathbringer* wrote: "Sarah wrote: "Nicole di Angelo wrote: "(Oh my gods, such a genius moment sarah)"(why thank you, i don't have them very often)"
(haha me either)"
(what are you talking..."
(thanks for the compliments, guys. Now get back to writing, this is intense!!! ;) )
Jason's eyesight was blurring but that was due to his anger, not the fact that his eyes were swelling shut.
Mania unlocked Piper's cell and advanced towards her. Piper was whimpering.
Jason staggered forward towards them, "Don't touch her!" He gasped in pain.
(Adios amigods, homework calls :P )
(Adios amigods, homework calls :P )
(that sucks, sorry)Mania got up again and stuck her hand out and Piper doubled over in pain. "Poke," said Mania.
(oops should i delete #337)
Obviously Mania did not go down with pain, but Jason was on the ground. The last bolt took his energy.
(That's actually kinda funny. I know Piper in pain shouldn't be funny, but that kinda was)
Mania grabbed a fistful of Piper's hair and yanked her up. Piper fell in weakness, but Mania's hold was firm.
Sarah wrote: "(oops should i delete #337)"
(Some comic relief right now would be good so no :))
(Some comic relief right now would be good so no :))
"And now let us see how your boyfriend responds when he wakes up and you're almost dead."
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Erin wrote: ""And now let us see how your boyfriend responds when he wakes up and you're almost dead."*******************"
(AHHH THAT IS SO HORRIBLE BUT I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)
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