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help us write a scene part 2

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message 151: by Sarah (last edited Feb 25, 2013 02:47PM) (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah  ღ (okii this is gonna be so awesome and why dont we make it worse by letting annabeth (while still under the spell) point out percy hiding then mania takes him but doesnt tell her where just says she took care of him but he wasnt hurt so that way annabeth feels worse and mania can taunt her with that while shes locked up?)


message 152: by [deleted user] (new)

(What should Annabeth's new name be? Should it be symbolic, random, something like Annabeth or Athena?


message 153: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah (I GOT SOMETHING!)


message 154: by [deleted user] (last edited Feb 25, 2013 02:52PM) (new)

Mae *academy princess* wrote: "Sarah wrote: "(okii this is gonna be so awesome and why dont we make it worse by letting annabeth (while still under the spell) point out percy hiding then mania takes him but doesnt tell her where..."

That would be a good idea because it's kind of like what Kronos did to form his army/followers


message 155: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah (hold on a sec let me catch up)


message 156: by [deleted user] (new)

(I'm literally looking through my Greek mythology book - had to get it for English)


message 157: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah (hey i have an idea. just an idea. Mania sends Annabeth to kill Percy, and Percy gives up and gives Annabeth his weapon and says, "Kill me, if you want to, Wise Girl," and then she gets overwhelmed with one single memory that makes her hesitate and in that moment he kisses her)


message 158: by [deleted user] (new)

Sarah wrote: "(hey i have an idea. just an idea. Mania sends Annabeth to kill Percy, and Percy gives up and gives Annabeth his weapon and says, "Kill me, if you want to, Wise Girl," and then she gets overwhelmed..."

(That would be good at end after torturing It's so Divergent)


message 159: by [deleted user] (new)

(What about Psyche for Annabeth's new name. From the myth Cupid and Psyche when Cupid is sent by his mother Venus to make Psyche, who's really pretty, fall in love with someone ugly and they fall in love. Sort of goes with Sarah's idea)


message 160: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah u guys like my idea? ok!


message 161: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah Mania paused. "Phsyche," she said.


message 162: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah (mania to annabeth)


Sarah  ღ "hmm...thats interesting name but it doesnt sound right are you sure? Cause Annabeth sounded a whole lot better"

A mixture of emotions flashed over Manias face but were gone in an instant.

"Yes, i am sure, why would you doubt me?"


message 164: by Sarah (last edited Feb 25, 2013 03:23PM) (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah  ღ (omgg i am so excited i cant wait this story is gonna be epic!!! *happy dance* ok back to writing sorry)


message 165: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah "I don't remember you," Annabeth reminded her.


message 166: by [deleted user] (last edited Feb 25, 2013 03:51PM) (new)

(Okay so we have that Annabeth is gonna be wandering around doing mania's dirty work and she sees Percy sneaking around in Manias castle or even lair or whatever and the she tells Mania (she doesnt know what shes doing)then mania tells her that she "took care of him, but didn't hurt him. Then Annabeth starts to question whether mania is really trustworthy then mania throws Annabeth in a cell next to Percy's. Then she tortures Percy and Annabeth can hear his screams and all that drama. THEN mania will realise she needs Annabeth do one more thing for her or something and she sends her to kill Percy and Percy gives her his sword and say "kill me if you want" and Annabeth is overwhelmed and hesitates they Percy kisses her and we'll go from there. After he kisses her Annabeth realises mania is the evil one.


message 167: by [deleted user] (new)

Mae *academy princess* wrote: ""No reason, your the most trustworthy person ive met so far." said Physce.(Idk how to spel or pronounce that)"

Call her Annabeth or we're all gonna get real confused real fast. She just thinks she's physce or whatever


message 168: by [deleted user] (new)

Sarah wrote: ""I don't remember you," Annabeth reminded her."

"You will dear. Just give it time," mania says sweetly.
"Okay," Annabeth says not really believing her.


Sarah  ღ "alright then if you say so. now i can do something im going to waste away if sit in this chair for a moment longer"

"that wouldn't be so bad" muttered Mania under her breath


message 170: by [deleted user] (new)

((Wow!!! LOts of comments!!))

Annabeth eyed her suspiciously, but shrugged it off.


message 171: by Sarah (last edited Feb 25, 2013 03:56PM) (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah  ღ (what sort of things is Mania going to make Annabeth do? like cleaning her house or killing her enemies?)


message 172: by [deleted user] (new)

((Both?))


message 173: by [deleted user] (new)

(No idea.)
I suppose I should just go with it, Annabeth thought. I'm stuck here either way. That made her think....
"Where are we anyway?"


message 174: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah (could u guys like delete the posts with no writing ecept for the explaination ones cuz I am so confused)


message 175: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah *****************************************************
Percy sat on the ruins of the gate to Tartus, looking bummed.
Nico came up and sat beside him. "Hey, man."
"Annabeth's greatest fear was me," Percy said, whirling to face him. "What a great boyfriend, eh?" He cracked a smile, but it had no warmth.


message 176: by [deleted user] (new)

"That can't be right," Nico said, "Why would Annabeth be scared of you?"


message 177: by [deleted user] (new)

Sarah wrote: "(k i deleted all my random comments. did everyone else? just keep the ones that are funny or important :P)"

Done


message 178: by Sarah (last edited Feb 25, 2013 04:06PM) (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah  ღ "I don't know" Percy said in despair "She wouldnt look at me and she even went with Mania willingly! Its all my fault!"

And while Mania was torturing all she could say was, "its not spiders, its you"

He covered his face with his hands in anguish


message 179: by [deleted user] (new)

Nico felt awkward. He'd never exactly been good at consoling people...
"Er... it's gonna be ok..." He said, patting Percy's shoulder.


message 180: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah "Brave Annabeth.... why would she be afraid of me? And how could she just forget?"


message 181: by [deleted user] (new)

Nico sighed and shook his head, "I don't know man. Mania said one memory, but Annabeth's completely forgotten everything!"


message 182: by Sarah (last edited Feb 25, 2013 04:10PM) (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah  ღ Rachel, obviously seeing that Nico wasn't helping swooped in and put her arm around Percy.
"Don't worry Percy, Annabeths fine shes smart she probably already had a plan and is on her way home as we speak with Manias head wrapped in a bow"
She left out the part about her having a horrible feeling about the situation too.


message 183: by [deleted user] (new)

"No," Percy muttered, "must have been some memory.'


message 184: by [deleted user] (new)

"What could make her forget everyting?" Thalia asked.


message 185: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah He jumped up. "When we first met!!! I bet that is the memory she chose. But why? I know I was covered in sewage from Clarisse's toilet accident, but it wasn't that bad of a memory."


message 186: by [deleted user] (new)

(Hm... maybe Mania takes away a memory, and when she does that she also takes anything associated with that memory so that Annabeth can never remember it again. And since Percy's connected in some way/shape/form to all her memories whether he was there or she told him about it, she forgot everything. ))


message 187: by Sarah (last edited Feb 25, 2013 04:26PM) (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah  ღ (okkk ya thats right!!! cause maybe she loved him so much or something he was always a part of her life and she always thought about him i'll delete my post)


message 188: by Sarah (last edited Feb 25, 2013 04:29PM) (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah  ღ (lool ya lets go to them we havnt seen them for a while lets end chapter 2 first tho)


Sarah  ღ (lool sarah that works :P)


message 190: by Sarah (last edited Feb 25, 2013 04:33PM) (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah  ღ When he finally opened his eyes he thought he was dead where ever he was, was so dark he couldn't tell if he had actually opened his eyes or not. If not for the throbbing pain in his head he would have definelty believed himself dead


message 191: by [deleted user] (last edited Feb 25, 2013 04:44PM) (new)

Jason tried to sit up, finding it difficult but not impossible. It was dark, but there was enough light to make out his surroundings. It looked like a jail cell, but he couldn't remember how he'd gotten there.
Piper, he thought, I was looking for Piper!!
Using the wall, he stood up.


message 192: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah (okay reposting)
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Jason found out that Piper was in the cell next to him. Turns out, she was in so much pain, she couldn't even talk to him. So, he had mostly been talking to himself, just to keep his sanity. Piper finally whispered one word, but it sounded like that word killed her to say.
"Jason."


Sarah  ღ (should we make it harder for Jason to find piper?)


message 194: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah (lol so r we going to make it harder or not?)


message 195: by Sarah (last edited Feb 25, 2013 04:48PM) (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah  ღ (but we should at least write how he finds her cause its like theres gonna be a window into her cell)


message 196: by Sarah (last edited Feb 25, 2013 04:50PM) (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah  ღ (make it a little harder like he has to convince Mania or digs a hole or steals a key something like that)


message 197: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah He had found her by looking through the bars before Mania threw him in his cell. She had made him wake up to walk, but Jason had seen Piper.
"Piper!" he yelled.
Her head snapped up. He gripped the bars and looked at her dirty tearstreaked face. As Mania pulled him away, he screamed,
"I WILL GET YOU OUT! I WILL COME BACK FOR YOU!!"


message 198: by [deleted user] (new)

A shock came into Piper's cell as if Jason was using his powers against his will.
(It kind of hurts to write about these awesome characters like this)


message 199: by [deleted user] (new)

"Jason!" She screamed.


message 200: by [deleted user] (last edited Feb 25, 2013 05:00PM) (new)

(I think Jason woke up in one of Mania's dungeon cells, he saw Piper, who's very hurt, and Mania just dragged him away screaming, Piper got hurt again somehow to distract Jason and Piper screamed to Jason.)


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