The Lightning Thief
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help us write a scene part 2
It's okay, it's okay, it's okay, she thought. You just had a little moment of weakness is all. If you get the chance to kill him again you will. Annabeth didn't even believe herself. He's so trusting. How could I kill him?
She looked to her left. Through the bars she could see him huddled in the corner. He'd been unconscious since the thing had dumped them there. Why is mistress keeping me in here? She wouldn't do this to me.
Again, Annabeth wasn't sure she believed herself. The way mania had screamed at her before, didn't make her feel good.
She looked to her left. Through the bars she could see him huddled in the corner. He'd been unconscious since the thing had dumped them there. Why is mistress keeping me in here? She wouldn't do this to me.
Again, Annabeth wasn't sure she believed herself. The way mania had screamed at her before, didn't make her feel good.
Percy was dreaming. He dreamed about Annabeth. The blonde beauty stood above him, holding her dagger with a hard look in her eyes.
"Die, Jackson." She said. But it wasn't her voice, it was Mania's.
"Annabeth... no..." HE whimpered, "It's me, Percy."
"Bye Percy." This time, it was Annabeth's voice.
And then everything went black again.
"Die, Jackson." She said. But it wasn't her voice, it was Mania's.
"Annabeth... no..." HE whimpered, "It's me, Percy."
"Bye Percy." This time, it was Annabeth's voice.
And then everything went black again.
He woke up in a cold sweat. Where was he? Percy looked around, taking in the slimy walls and the bars. How did he get here? The. He saw Annabeth. She was sitting with her arms wrapped around her knees. The look on her face made party's heart hurt. She looked terrified, confused and lost. Those things were not familiar to Annabeth's face.
Annabeth blinked, and turned her head to find two sea green eyes looking at her.
She jumped and backed away as quickly as possible. Even though there were bars I between them, she didn't want to be near him.
The boys face fell.
"Annabeth," he said, "I'm not going to hurt you. I would never do that. Ever."
"Why do you keep calling me that? Annabeth? I don't know who that is," she said.
The boys face fell.
"Annabeth," he said, "I'm not going to hurt you. I would never do that. Ever."
"Why do you keep calling me that? Annabeth? I don't know who that is," she said.
Percy didn't back down, "You're Annabeth. You're a daughter of Athena, and one of my best friends." He said, "You're smart, and you're brave, and you're stubborn, and you have deadly pride that's sometimes a good thing, sometimes a bad thing."
That sounded strangely familiar. How did he know that?
"How do you know that? Why did you tell me you loved me? I don't KNOW you!!"
"How do you know that? Why did you tell me you loved me? I don't KNOW you!!"
Percy tried to hide his hurt, "I know you better than anyone, Annabeth."
"Prove it."
"Your dad,"Percy said. Her eyes widened, but he kept going. "He owns a Sopwith Camel (I think that's what it was), and he loves old movies like Roman Holiday with Audrey Hepburn and Gregory Peck. And he's funny, with lots of model airplanes."
"Your dad,"Percy said. Her eyes widened, but he kept going. "He owns a Sopwith Camel (I think that's what it was), and he loves old movies like Roman Holiday with Audrey Hepburn and Gregory Peck. And he's funny, with lots of model airplanes."
"I don't even know my dad!"
Percy looked shocked.
"How much did she steal from you?" He whispered loud enough for her to hear.
"How much did she steal from you?" He whispered loud enough for her to hear.
"Steal? What? Who?"
"Mania, Annabeth! The crazy goddess!"
"Goddess? You really are crazy!!"
(This is really painful to write about!!!)
(This is really painful to write about!!!)
(Ikr!!)
Percy just closed his eyes, and shook his head in disbelief, "You have no idea, Annabeth."
Percy just closed his eyes, and shook his head in disbelief, "You have no idea, Annabeth."
"My name really is Annabeth?" She asked, suddenly.
Percy nodded, "Annabeth Chase."
"And my dad likes airplanes?"
Percy smirked a little, "Oh yeah,"
((Yay! But I thought Annabeth didn't know she was a half blood yet?))
((She doesn't, she remembers bits and pieces I think)
(Oops nevermind? ...)
((Sorry, I don't mean to burst your bubble.))
He finally got a smile from that
He finally got a smile from that
((Lol, no worries, happens to us aaaalll the time!! We're deleting and rewriting left and right around here!)
(Crap my small kindle screen - meant to edit but touched delete)
(night peoples ;) )
"And I know you... how?" She was pretty sure she could already guess
"And I know you... how?" She was pretty sure she could already guess
"Ummmm... We we're really good friends. REALLY good friends," he said. Trying to get his point across
"What about my mom? " Annabeth asked softly her grey eyes lighting up like this was a test. Percy only hoped this was one he was passing.(There now we can do something about the goddess comment?)
"We'll," he said hesitantly, "she's a goddess too.... Athena."
"Right - and your the son of some sea god. " Annabeth rolled her eyes doubtfully.
(Just a thought but in the underworld is the river Lethe and the spring of Mnemosyne - goddess of memory and mother of muses. Could use that to get Annabeth's memory back?)
"Actually...."
"You've got to be kidding!! There's no such thing."
"If I showed you something, would you promise not to freak out?"
"I suppose," Annabeth said, curious.
Percy held out his hand, palm down facing the floor.
"Don't freak out," he said.
Water bubbled up out of a small crack in the floor.
"How do I know that you actually did that?"
The small stream left the floor and looped through the air and into Percy's palm.
"Ooookay... You just did that..."
"You've got to be kidding!! There's no such thing."
"If I showed you something, would you promise not to freak out?"
"I suppose," Annabeth said, curious.
Percy held out his hand, palm down facing the floor.
"Don't freak out," he said.
Water bubbled up out of a small crack in the floor.
"How do I know that you actually did that?"
The small stream left the floor and looped through the air and into Percy's palm.
"Ooookay... You just did that..."
(We could. I think a lot of us were going for the romantic stuff. we'll save it for tomorrow. Run it by everybody than)
(K night :) thanks for the welcome!)
(Of course! We love new people!!)
(u guys always right the good stuff with out me :P i think i just slow u guys down :P) loved that last seen and welcome Rena:))
Rena (Greeksays) wrote: "(Just a thought but in the underworld is the river Lethe and the spring of Mnemosyne - goddess of memory and mother of muses. Could use that to get Annabeth's memory back?)"
(Yeah and WELCOME!!! Mania is gone, Dionysus might not be able to help...)
"Yup," Percy said, hoping Annbeth would realize.
"What can I do since my mother is supposedly Athena?" Annabeth asked. "Did I lead people into battle or weave stuff or start my own city?"
"You have her skills in leadership and cleverness and weaving I think," Percy said smiling.
"Huh..."
(Yeah and WELCOME!!! Mania is gone, Dionysus might not be able to help...)
"Yup," Percy said, hoping Annbeth would realize.
"What can I do since my mother is supposedly Athena?" Annabeth asked. "Did I lead people into battle or weave stuff or start my own city?"
"You have her skills in leadership and cleverness and weaving I think," Percy said smiling.
"Huh..."
Sarah wrote: "(u guys always right the good stuff with out me :P i think i just slow u guys down :P) loved that last seen and welcome Rena:))"
(you have good ideas too!)
(you have good ideas too!)
(Awwwwwww!!! So cute!!!!)
"I do know you..." She whispered. "You said your name was Percy, right?"
She inched a little closer to the bars separating them.
"Ya. Percy Jackson."
"I do know you..." She whispered. "You said your name was Percy, right?"
She inched a little closer to the bars separating them.
"Ya. Percy Jackson."
"You like blue," she said. Percy grinned.
"Ya, my mom used-"
"To make you blue food and bring you blue candy, " she finished.
(She can't remember everything, just some things)
"Ya, my mom used-"
"To make you blue food and bring you blue candy, " she finished.
(She can't remember everything, just some things)
(Good mornings to everyone! :)
In the dimness of their cells Annabeth could see his hope."Mistress...she...she told me my name was Psyche...does that name mean anything to you? Percy? "
(I have read that Mania is the goddess of madness - are we also taking traits from the Roman side? Goddess of the dead - mother of the ghosts, the undead, spirits of the night, the Lares and Manes?)
(yes a newbie! Welcome! Hey guys I'm at school u did a great job but please don't finish the scene without me)
(you guys post so much while I'm at school. But I was thinking, I was looking into Mnemosyne and (s)he's a Titan. Maybe they break out of Mania's lair (after torturing, kiss, memory, etc.) to re-install Annabeth memories - since she's only got glimpses and stuff - but Lethe holds a grudge for destroying Kronos, her friend in the Underworld/Tartarus. They finally convince her to give back Annabeth's memory but the blupocalypse starts where Mania left off and creates a blue hole in Annabeth and Percy -> makes a monster/creature based on their characteristics so its like the anti-Percabeth. I don't know. :))
"More like a lot insane. She wanted me to kill you. I don't think the Fates want your string cut yet," Annabeth said. "Your girlfriend must be lucky to have you."
"More like a lot insane. She wanted me to kill you. I don't think the Fates want your string cut yet," Annabeth said. "Your girlfriend must be lucky to have you."
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