Evee’s Comments (group member since May 03, 2010)

Evee’s comments from the The World I Want to Create *Roleplaying* group.

((lol. I noticed that. Luke is like a troubled teen more than anything else but he does have this nasty loner personality. He's really smart, though. The sad thing is that before he started hanging out with these "people" he and Benji were pretty close. He still had a loner personality before then though.))

Dallon Fletcher.

((Now I see why the last one looks weird. I still haven't come up with a last name for him.))

Naomi continued, "He essentially is a God of balance. Destruction, organization, life, death, good, bad. He is also one of the most destructive gods. He is the most wishy washy, which is one of the reason the Black Opal can so easily be corrupted."

(( These are the original characters made for Gemstones. In this version there is no Pearl holder and instead it is a golden stone, the Citrine. Stone of Courage.

Nicky Rea

Karate expert. Dilmore boarding school. Amber Holder. She is the one that relaxes everyone. She has a calm personality and great reflexes.

Taylor Saxton(U know her, though I haven't really had a chance to show off her personality.)

Tactics expert. Hothead and wants to be a one man army for a living. Ruby Holder

Colin Denton

Leader, someone close to his family and good with working with people. Creamy blonde hair and very cute. Citrine Holder

Isaac Felton

Computer expert. Intelligence. ANTI-SOCIAL. Emerald Holder

Violet Yenara

Stealth expert. Overall power. She becomes a very important character in the original story. Acrobatic and careless. Diamond Holder(like Naomi)

Cassie Roberts

Science expert.Holds the most knowledge on the inter-dimensional connections because her father and grandfather found out about it and studied it since before she was born. They were also laughed off and ridiculed because of their research. Chrysoberyl holder.

Luke Anslem

Lazy. A watcher. He wants nothing more to get out of this dumb place and not have to deal with the rest of these losers(note: the other stone holders) He gets a little obsessed with the power he obtains from his stone. The rest are worried about him because of the fate of the previous Holder of his stone. Also because of his attitude. Black Opal Holder

Benjamin Anslem

Is the younger brother of Luke. Has a lot of energy, 11 years old. Very curious and scared of his older brother. Sapphire Holder. Also worried for Benji because in the past the Sapphire and Black Opal Holder's were enemies.

Dallon

Known as leader of the Other's for a time before Nicky sees him and recognizes him. Used to be the person who bullied Nicky at their Dilmore. Amethyst Holder. He eventually becomes their link to meeting Naomi and finding out just who "the enemy" is and what exactly have they become involved with.

((Just for boredom's sake are you any interested in learning about the characters that this RP was based off?))

Naomi shook her head, "They're not Gods. More like the Gods messengers. The one that the black opal represents is Iver, the god life and death."

Naomi smiled a bit, "It's said that originally each of the stones was a precious star sent down as guardians of the land by the celestial gods. They hold the power of the gods wishes in each of them." Naomi rubbed the clear stone on her staff. "It's a pity that war has torn such pure things in such ways."

They moved to the edge of the city just as the streets started to fill. People glanced curiously at them but continued on their way unperturbed. Everyone seemed at peace. Just as they passed the last gates they noticed an odd carving on the outside wall, beside the gate. On a stony cracked wall there was a carving of a starry sky, but it seemed unfinished, like the sculptor had vanished in the middle of carving a star. Derey noticed another thing, there were nine stars of different sizes and colors and they were all falling to the earth.

Driden gave her a weirded out look, "fun sized? What's that?"

"Anyways." Naomi said eyeing Driden, "We must be moving on now."

Driden gave her a wary look, "Going. . .going where?"

Naomi gave him an extremely fake looking smile, "It's about time you actually learned something Driden, so we're going to the training grounds."

Driden went pale and without even any outburst dashed for the door, "Oh no you don't." said Naomi. With a flick of her staff Driden stood frozen. Gripping him by the back of his shirt she commenced to drag him out the door, "Let's get going." she said as she walked out the door.

Naomi sighed, "he refers to the mountain Hochini. A boar known for it's small size but extremely fierce personality."

(Driden is her grandson. You know something kinda annoying happened. I ususally wait until I get an email to post but I never got one so that's why I haven't posted) Naomi turned to Ethan, "I see the prodigal genius has finally reappeared." She smiled, "As to training. . . I'm sure you'll get to enjoy it when it saves you life in the future."

Driden glared daggers at Derey, "Hello Hochini. Is it just me or has your nose grown even longer since I last saw you? Who's the Hochin with you?"
Derey turned to Driden and nodded to the guard, "I'm Driden's guardian."
The guard gave her a bow of respect, "Yes, Lady Naomi." the doors to the cell opened and Driden scowled as he walked out.

((You read my review thing right? Where when I left off Gabriel had been taken by the enemy. Basically Derey gets 2 wishes from the Chaos Imp inside the stone. She uses one to go there. She has a confrontation where the evil jester girl is about to pull a strange lever and at the last moment Gabriel stops her but is still seriously injured. She uses the second wish to send herself to the capital and both she and Gabriel start to heal up. That's around where you popped in the first time. Now that Derey is healed Naomi is taking you, Derey, and a guy named Driden to train in a secluded area. All you have to do is show up at the stocks(Where they're picking up Driden) and take it from there.))

((Yup!))

As soon as they entered the building they heard yelling and screaming, "LET ME OUUUUUUUUTTTTTT! I'll Kill You Knuckle Heads! You think I'm going to stand for this!" Then there was loud clanging as bars from a cell were shaken. A annoyed cell guard stood at the end of the hall leading from the main room that they stood in. "I can't let you out until your Guardian comes."
Driden stopped shaking the cell bars again and scowled, "I don't need no guardian. What I need is to sock that wart head again!"
The guard flinched, "Don't you feel at all bad about what you've done? That guy was down and out cold!"
Driden scoffed, "The little rat deserved it."

Naomi softened a bit, "When we reach the training grounds I will tell you about them." she turned back to the building, "We just need to pick up Driden and be on our way." she started towards the buildings door.

"I'd rather they be alive than honored by any reward." she said. "Alive to see their family and children. All these statues, all of these carvings. Not one of them knows them truly at all."

Naomi's face was as stale as it had ever been, "They're the 8 legendary warriors who protected this land a hundred years ago, locking the great evil away. They died saving this land. Alta, Isiicar, Leila, Meru, Talent, Giegress, Hall and finally. . .Naomi, were all reverenced in the great books of history from that time. Naomi's eyes looked far away as she said this and she held a disgusted look on her face.

Naomi led out the back doors of the building. It was early morning and the sun was just coming up over the horizon. As they reached the outside area's of the hospital Naomi turned back looking there. What's this foreboding? She wondered then kept on moving.

As they continued to move throughout the town Derey was able to see it for the first time. It was a magnificent town. Perfect in it's architecture with building both tall a small. It's stone was pure white somehow undirtied by the passing of daily life. Pattern of beasts and epic battles were carved on the walls of a temple they passed. Derey noticed a set of 8 warriors were depicted time and time again throughout the town, from the most primitive drawing to the most intricate design.
After a time they arrived at small out of the way simple building set on the far side of town, away from the living residence.

Turning back to the door she said, "Now let's go."

Naomi gave her a little scowl, "Then call me Miss Naomi and not a thing more."