Evee’s Comments (group member since May 03, 2010)

Evee’s comments from the The World I Want to Create *Roleplaying* group.

Sorry I don't give my age on the Int. Thanks for the encouragement! I have some of the chapters online if you want to read them.

Taylor was running full speed clutching her shoulder. They were right behind her. When she had noticed them she had taken off running but one of them had been around the corner and had cut her off. He had grabbed her before she could run. He'd put her in an arm hold with his hand over her mouth. She had bitten his hand, stomped on his foot and had run. He'd still been holding her arm when she'd taken off. It had twisted her arm. Taylor hissed, she was afraid that it might be dislocated. There was a rumble and Taylor tripped, rolling and landing on her feet again.
What was that!?
No she didn't have time to think, she had to run. She took off again. Somewhere far in front of her she caught view of a Starbucks.

Hi, I'm Evee. I love to read, write and basically anything to do with a descent story line. I want to publish the book I'm working on within this year(180 pages right now) and maybe earn a little dough out of it if I can . . .(if I can get it published in the first place that is.) ;j

Taylor watched as the last of the buses disappeared around the bend taking all her "friends" with them. She turned around and ignored the two men waiting beside the black Ferrari and walked past them. Taylor had dirty blond hair that reached to her ears. Her eyes were a dark, almost black. She wore a dark green turtle neck and army boots with camouflage pants.
Her father was a famous general in the army, someone many terrorists would love to get a hold on, which made anyone related to him liable accidents, dangerous accidents. So her father really worried that someone would try to kidnap her so round the clock people watched Taylor. It was like being babysat from birth. Taylor scowled as she thought. She would give almost anything to have just a day on her own, free.
Taylor smiled a little. A week ago she had lost it. She'd gone on strike. She wouldn't take the car with her bodyguards or even acknowledge that they were even there.
Taylor's eyes darkened. It was great to act as if you were normal but it was just that, an act. Unfortunately her father had drawn the line at entering a bus or anything that wasn't driven by one of his men. So every day it was a long walk back home. Of course it would be nice if one of her friends would have wanted to walk home with her, but of course they all had things they had to do. That was another downside to being a famous generals daughter. You always had "friends" but you were never sure whether you had friends.
Her father had come up with a plan that had saved the president when a terrorist organization had been hired to assassinate him. That had been a little over thirteen years ago. A year after that had happened she had been born. It had been an accident. Her father had been having enough trouble at the time and then he had found out he was a father.
Really, she barely ever even saw her father with all the business he had to take care of. She saw her mother and the men her father hired to watch her, but rarely her father. Then again Bill and Joe, the men who watched her were pretty cool. They had taught her a lot of cool moves. They had tried their best to be the father that was absent. They had worked with her father and told her some cool stories about him.
Unconsciously Taylor glanced back at the Ferrari behind her. Her stomach dropped. The men in the car that was following her weren't Bill and Joe. . .

(( Ok this is the basic idea behind Gemstones. :)
Natural disaster strikes and one by one a number of kids get sent into a strange new world where magic is common and gemstones are legendary. The number of gemstones are in the single digits and each gemstone holds dangerous powers. When they get there each of the people are approached by Belenos, a demon-like character who tells them if they want to go home they must find a gemstone. Ok, here's this gist of what the gemstones are. At maximum there only can be like 10 characters who hold stones. Otherwise it would just get too crazy. In this world Gemstones are powerful stones that give powers. They are few. As for the characters I don't know whether they meet up with each other or whether they even know the others are there, it's up to you RPing people. The point is each Gemstone has a specific type that goes with it. Here's a list of ideas for stones. I guess when people make their stones they can choose what they want.
EX:Color-Stone-Type
White-Pearl-Faith
Red-Ruby-Individuality
Blue-Sapphire-Hope
Green-Emerald-Knowledge
Orange-Amber-Reliability
Yellow-Chrysoberyl-Kindness
Purple-Amethyst-Integrity
Black-Opal-Power
Colorless-Diamond-Protection
Type is there for the type of person it's attracted to. The person it would very likely choose would have those qualities and once it has chosen someone it will stick with that person until they die. No one else will be able to use the stone. When chosen it bestows powers (though if you don't know how to use yours it could be a mess. ;D ) It's up to each you what your power is but to reduce "now I'll pound you with this new power I just made up" fights only one power should be chosen.))

(( Ok this is the idea behind Gemstones. :)
Natural disaster strikes and one by one a number of kids get sent into a strange new world where magic is common and gemstones are legendary. The number of gemstones are in the single digits and each gemstone holds dangerous powers. When they get there they are approached by Belenos, a demon-like character who tells them if they want to go home they must find a gemstone. Ok, here's this gist of it. At maximum there only can be like 10 characters from "our" world. Otherwise as you know it would just get too crazy. In this world Gemstones are powerful stones that give powers. They are in the single digits. As for the characters I don't know whether they meet up with each other or whether they even know the others are there, it's up to you RPing people. The point is each Gemstone has a specific type that goes with it. Here's the list of ideas for stones. I guess when people make their stones they can choose what they want.
EX:Color-Stone-Type
White-Pearl-Faith
Red-Ruby-Individuality
Blue-Sapphire-Hope
Green-Emerald-Knowledge
Orange-Amber-Reliability
Yellow-Chrysoberyl-Kindness
Purple-Amethyst-Integrity
Black-Opal-Power
Colorless-Diamond-Protection
Type is there for the type of person it's attracted to. The person it would very likely choose would have those qualities and once it has chosen someone it will stick with that person until they die. No one else will be able to use the stone. When chosen it bestows powers (though if you don't know how to use yours it could be a mess. ;> ) It's up to each you what the power is but to reduce "now I'll pound you with this new power I just made up" fights only one power should be chosen.))

Name: Taylor
Gender: Female
Age: 15
Personality: gung-ho, fiery, temper, fighter, confident, lonely
Appearance: Blonde hair, 5.4, camo pants, dark green turtle neck.
Stone: Red-Ruby-Individuality
(good idea)Power: It seems she already had weak powers even in our world. She mysteriously learns things about people that they don't tell her. It may be related to her stone but you'll have to wait and find out whether that's true.
Other: She's not so sure she even wants to return home. She likes the freedom of being able to make her own decisions.

Name: Belenos
Gender: Male
Age: Unknown(It's rumored that he's 100. Though he definitely doesn't look it.)
Personality: sleek, a smiler, powerful, light on his feet
Appearance: golden eyes, dark skin, tall , black hair that is shoulder length. He's wearing a sleeveless dark shirt and dirt colored pants.
http://quizilla.teennick.com/user_ima...
Loose the necklace, put him in the clothes I described, darken his skin and give him a knowing smile and he's a close call to what Belenos looks like.
Power:(unknown as of yet but he's definitely powerful.)
Other: the one who tells the people taken about the gemstones and makes a deal with them.

That's cool, thanks!

This just an idea I had. A group of people get caught in a string of strange occurrences that end up sending each of them to a world that uses magic. When they get there each of them is greeted by a strange magical demon who tells them they cannot return home until they each find a "gemstone". They amount in the single digits, but definitely at least 8. In this world he continues to explain gemstones are not so mundane. They give powers to their holders that are specific to each stone. . . anyway if this is approved I can tell you then. What he doesn't tell them is that only specific chosen people can use them and the last time the stones chose someone was 100 years ago.

Gemstones - Natural disaster strikes and one by one 8 kids get sent into a strange new world where magic is common and gemstones are legendary. The number of gemstones is in the single digits and each gemstone represents ancient warriors who fought a great evil a hundred years ago. An evil that seems to be slowly, inch by inch pulling itself back out of the grave.
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

Oron - Steal from the rich and give to the poor! Actually it should go more like steal from the Archons and flee for your life! When a girl gets lost in the mist walking home she ends up in another dimension and runs into a fleeing thief who has stolen a Dimensional Device from the all powerful Archons who control 15 dimensions! He runs, but he leaves her trouble in the form of the missing device. Now the Archons are after her, or more specifically their best investigator/tracker, Ugra. Will she ever be able to get home? Will she be able to escape the clutches of the ingenious investigator, who when he receives a taunting message commits himself to catching her? Read on and find out!!!

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...