Evee’s Comments (group member since May 03, 2010)

Evee’s comments from the The World I Want to Create *Roleplaying* group.

(I saw that you chose Ruby. Since Taylor is the Ruby one I can change her or you can choose a new stone. Either way I'm fine.(Taylor is my original Charrie. I've done like 6-8 though. lol.)))

((The way I see it if you want to join now you can be a character who was already living in the land or you could have been brought there by another disaster or some other reason. If you want to post I'll tell you the gemstones that aren't being used, just tell me.))

Rather-Fellow, feeling a bit springy remained in his elf form and walked beside her into the town.

((If you want me to post details on all the recent characters I can. That includes pics. If you ever have a question feel free to ask.))

((I'm sorry this is the shortest I could get the summary. Well. . .after 1376 posts. . .
There are a bunch of kids who are involved in an earthquake that sends them to a strange land that has magic. In this land there is a Legend of 10 warriors 100 years ago who defeated a great evil, called the Myst. Unfortunately since 1 of the 10 betrayed the others all but the betrayer and 1 other were killed simply sealing the evil away. That's the over all story behind this.

Here's what's happened so far. As soon as they arrive they are attacked, afterwords they meet a suave man named Belenos who tells them the only way to return is to acquire the stones in the legend.

They travel, fight, ect. One of the characters, Taylor, Red Stone is put into a strange coma. She disappears shortly afterword.

Belenos who had saved them shows up trying to steal the stone that Derey, Black Opal Holder had found. He acts pretty insane. A strict woman named Naomi shows up and wards off Belenos. It turns out Belenos was the Betrayer and Naomi was the survivor, still living after 100 years.

Naomi wants to test Derey and sends her up a dangerous mountain to meet a man named Gabriel. He is a warden(guard) over a forest filled with hate spiders(On the spot name), spiders who get power from hate, grief, greed, ect. A disturbance is made after Derey arrives and she and Gabe plan to travel past the spider forest to a tomb in the mountain. The resting place of a man who had tried to resurrect the Myst.

Gabe leaves and returns mortally injured. Derey and Gabe leave as he tells her to run. Naomi shows up and is about to try to help Gabe when they are attacked by a man named Aigus(The man who tried to resurrect the Myst), who apparently has been raised from his grave. (It is also found out that Aigus was Naomi's son.) Naomi and Aigus Battle.

Derey and Gabe ride away on a stone turtle(Naomi's) when they are intercepted by a woman named Joey(Crazy jester girl). She kidnaps Gabe and disappears telling Derey she must come to the tomb to save him.

Derey searches for help and Naomi, afraid she may die in her battle sends Derey her stone, (the Black opal) and another white smooth stone. The stone awakens and a Goblin like creature called Rather-Fellow appears. He helps her get to the Tomb where Joey and Derey start to fight. Joey is about to pull something when Gabe takes her out from behind. They escape(through Rather-Fellow)to a hospital in the capital where Naomi waits for them.

After some recoup time Derey meets a boy named Driden(Grandson of Naomi and Son of Aigus). Ethan(green stone holder), Naomi, Driden(Sapphire holder) and Derey travel to a secret training ground. Naomi tells them of special weapons that words with there stones and the powers that come from them.

She has to ultimately leave as the stone watchman to the Myst's tomb appears and reports disturbances. Derey and Driden get closer as they search and find her weapon(Fans). Driden(weapon:Sapph Sword) and Derey are ambushed as they leave by a reincarnated crazy version of the former Emerald Guardian. (The Myst seems to have control of the bodies and powers of all the Guardians that he killed). Driden is knocked out in the initial blast and is kidnapped.

Meanwhile Naomi who is searching for answers at the Tomb of the Myst is ambushed by Belenos and the new Pearl Holder. Belenos' powers hold her and she is unable to escape because she is unconscious.

(Back with Derey) Gabe shows up and they hunt for and eventually find Driden who after he is freed is confronted by a strange man(Derey, who is with him is unconscious). He leaves.

When Derey awakens she is with Gabe again and he reports that Driden has betrayed them. He even attempted to kill Derey while she slept. Rather-Fellow confirms.

Meanwhile Taylor awakens in a tomb with terrifying knowledge. Strange men open the tomb and she is dragged to a stone room with a deep black pit. Then she is thrown in it.

In search of answers Rather-Fellow takes Derey to the Goddess Ilandere(creator of sapphire stone. Each stone was created by a god.). She advises them to search for allies. She suggest they search down the river. They travel.(In this Derey first sees Rather Fellow in his Elf Form)

They are confronted by Naomi who crazily accuses that Derey killed a high ranked spy names Joey who was close to her. She disappears mysteriously after attacking once.

After the smoke is cleared Derey hears a scream from down the canyon, at the same moment a door opens in the stone wall and she sees a figure of a boy. She goes inside the stone door and finds the boy to be Driden attacks her and mumbles something about Belenos and the Truth. Derey attempts to leave but Driden shoots her with a blue energy. Rather-Fellow intervenes and transports them to a cave. They talk about what Derey plans to do next and she has Rather-Fellow send them to the nearest town.

VOILA I AM FINISHED! ))

In a few seconds they found themselves on the edge of a lovely town. Feilds of blue, green, yellow and purple flowers spread out over the landscape. That was behind them, though. In front of them was a medium-sized finely made village, with a cobble stone road.

Rather-Fellow gave a self-confident smirk, "Don't insult me." he said. The landscape started to melt.

Rather-Fellow's eyes flickered, "As you wish." he said, "Where are we going?"

Rather-Fellow watched he quietly for a moment, "Are you sure you should be straining your injury so soon?" he said.

"If we can prove that to Naomi a whole road filled with new allies could be possible. I just have a feeling that that event has something to do with all this mess. That's the point where everything started falling apart."

Rather Fellow smiled, "Kinda depressing isn't it. First Ethan disappears. Then Driden does his thing, then Naomi. I'm sure there is some way we can convince Naomi you're innocent though. Maybe if we investigate that fighter she was talking about. Joey I think was her name. I'm sure if we prove that she was the enemy, the one attacking us we'd be able to regain Naomi's trust."

Rather-Fellow laughed, "What do you think. . .happened with Naomi?" he said quietly. Clearing his throat he laughed again. "I seem to be happy and then quiet. Happy and then quiet."

Rather-Fellow was tired, despite what people think immortal's aren't immune to the everyday things, like head-aches. He leaned back in his own way, "I'm up for anything right now." he said, "Do you think we should attempt to find Naomi?"

He chuckled mildly. They deserved a laugh. "What about what the Goddess said?" he said, "What about what Driden said?" he said even softer.

Rather-Fellow's silver hair gleamed as he gave her a nod. He leaned back against the cave wall. "They're going to be looking for you even harder now." he said quietly. "What do you plan to do?"

Rather-Fellow appeared again, this time in his Elf-like form. Very carefully he drew some things from his bag, hurriedly moving around. Soon he was finished, he took the mixture and quietly placed it on the area that had hit Derey. The scorch was made out in a symbol. Rather-Fellow stared at it for a moment, turning pale, and then continued on, even faster.

He took off his tunic, which was a dark blue and tore it into strips. Slowly he bound Derey's wound and then padded her on the hard ground of the cave.

It was then that Rather-Fellow intervened. Using his powers they disappeared into the air. They found themselves in a dusty ancient looking cave.

Right before she disappeared a blue light shone out and struck her. The last moment she saw him there was a mad glint in his eyes as he watched her vanish.

A bolt of blue soared up sending it flying into the air. He spoke again, "Unfortunately for you I've worked on my skills since my last mess up."

Something seemed to pain him suddenly and he gripped his head. He screamed, and as he looked up Derey noticed that his eyes were blue again. His voice seemed to be strangling itself, "Belenos. . ." he managed to gasp. He drew his sword and charge towards her swinging wildly. Just as he reached her he embedded his sword into the stone wall, standing right in front of her he whispered, "truth. . .find." gasping he managed to say one last word, "Run." Then a dark spore in the center of his eyes grew out and they returned to being entirely black.

He pulled out his sword, growling and smiled crazily. "You're too much trouble to keep Opal Betrayer. The dark one needs his power returned." he raised his sword up again to attack her.

He knocked it away a smile growing on his face. "So easy to try kill, my friend. Maybe you are more suited for The Myst."