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The ending was rushed! 100 more words would've made it concrete, understandable, and believable. As is, it was lazy!

Harry Potter themes... School is a castle, kids are sorted, 'ghosts', trials...

The narrator/author's accent is so thick, I'm have a hard time understanding, unless he's yelling/singing, then it's clear.... And because of the rambling/filler, I'm bored.....

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There is so much rambling about the past in this book that is really only filler, and it takes so much away from the story. It all could be summed up. I like the main plot of the story, but this rambling is taking a star away. As soon as it starts I get bored... (and the author/narrator mumbles, it sounds better when he sings 'cause you can understand the words)