We spent the first half of the book getting things in place, establishing characters, and getting the 2 POV characters to the same location—which drains all dramatic tension from this "life or death" situation; they certainly can't both die here, and based on everything to this point, I doubt either is in any danger. So stop pretending they're in any real danger, author! It's garbage, and we all know it!
— Feb 09, 2015 02:08PM
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