On page 17 Aurora runs to this person and hugs her, we get to turn the page and read a few sentences which seem like thoughts and shortly after that Aurora walks into the throne room to find the person she was just hugging?! This needs proof reading by someone who can hold a thought longer than 10 seconds. So far this is poorly written fan fic in my opinion.
— Nov 02, 2017 06:16PM
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