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is on page 100 of 464
““TRAITOR!” she hissed”. She hissed in all caps? Come on!
— Nov 03, 2017 01:22PM
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Sandra
is on page 93 of 464
WHY ARE YOU USING ALL CAPS? This looks so unprofessional and the writing is very choppy.
— Nov 03, 2017 01:11PM
Sandra
is on page 17 of 464
On page 17 Aurora runs to this person and hugs her, we get to turn the page and read a few sentences which seem like thoughts and shortly after that Aurora walks into the throne room to find the person she was just hugging?! This needs proof reading by someone who can hold a thought longer than 10 seconds. So far this is poorly written fan fic in my opinion.
— Nov 02, 2017 06:16PM
