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Dani went to bed, thinking about rife, and for once she wasn't scared.


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((I think I win the disappearing contest...))


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((Haha.))


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik went slowly, carefully healing all the points that he had enough energy to.

((I think you do too.))

Rife started thinking about Gwen, and what had happened tio her. Then he thought of that girl he met today, Dani, she seemed normal enough. Atleast she didn't have an Army of Shadows hunting her.


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((No, she just has her past.))


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Yeah. Rife has an Army of Demon like things on him and his family's ass. Liv, Emmy and Patrik are his adoptive family.))


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((Cool!!!))


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((Dani is extremely traumatized and has a sort of schitzophenia...))


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((That's kind of cool in a sad way.))


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((Haha I know, right?))


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((haha yeah it's gonna be interesting to read sctizo convos..))


message 10512: by [deleted user] (last edited Jun 07, 2010 02:02PM) (new)

Gwen walked down the street and stopped at her favorite cafe.
"The usual," She said sitting down at the bar, "And a chocolate muffin."
"Rough day," the waitress asked.
"Yes and no," Gwen said, these employee's knew her too well.
When Gwen got her cappuccino with Irish Cream and lots of sugar, she watched out the window and sipped her coffee, her heart stopping every time she saw a guy with brown hair and green eyes.


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Nephilim wrote: "((haha yeah it's gonna be interesting to read sctizo convos..))"

((and entertaining...))


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((Haha indeed..))


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Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem clenched her jaw and tried hard not to wince. Thanks...Patrik.


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(( SO...What time is it, exactly?))


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments You're welcome Patrik nodded removing his hand tiredly

Rife got that feeling, where he could tell there was someone looking either for or at him. Since he was alone in his room, it was the latter. He moved swiftly and left quietly

((I'm SO SORRY! My sibbs stole the computer!))


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((Haha s'all good. Wait, so what time is it in the roleplay?))


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((it's like mid-day I guess...))


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((Okay...))

Dani suddenly felt restless. She grabbed her iPod and ran out the door.


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Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Nephilim wrote: " You're welcome Patrik nodded removing his hand tiredly

Rife got that feeling, where he could tell there was someone looking either for or at him. Since he was alone in his room, it was the latt..."


((It's alright.))

Go get some rest Patrik.


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((I'm SO SORRY! My sibbs stole the computer!))

((it happens to me all the time.))

Gwen sighed, what was she doing, Rife could be anywhere. It was no use looking anyway, he probably wouldn't even remember her, and if her did, would he want her? No one else seemed to, she thought. She payed for her food and left, walking towards the park, she didn't want to go home to an empty house.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik nodded and Emmy helped him up and kissed him as he went up to his room. Emmy looked down at Salem
"You feel any better?"


Rife appeared under the shade of the willow that was sitting off in some distant corner of a park, somewhere. He looked around surveying the landscape silently


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Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem struggled to sit up. "I'm not perfect, but that wasn't expected anyway. I'm not gonna die," she said simply.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy sighed
"Well Thank God." Emmy said helping her up.
"You want to get some rest? Only if you prmoise not to make Wave scream like that EVER again. It freaked me out." She admitted


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Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem flushed. "Waverley...omigawd is she okay? I didn't even think of that."


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Dani ran to the park. She noticed a corner that was completely deserted. There was a shady- looking willow tree in the corner. She walked over to it and sat down, leaning against the trunk.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy shrugged
"Patrik Calmed her down. She was just screaming at the top of her lungs 'It hurts, It Hurts' Or maybe that was you. You were screaming in your head and the second I walked in I was like BAM! Salem's thoughts."


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Gwen smiled at the playing children as she walked to the far end of the park. Her favorite willow was there. She sat down and leaned her head against the trunk. It was so peaceful to be under the hanging branches.

((she's on the opposite side of the tree from Rife and Dani))


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Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Nephilim wrote: "Emmy shrugged
"Patrik Calmed her down. She was just screaming at the top of her lungs 'It hurts, It Hurts' Or maybe that was you. You were screaming in your head and the second I walked in I was l..."


"It was the both of us then," Salem sighed in releif. "She only got the mental part..so she wasn't really in pain...it just felt like it."


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((Wait--Dani is on the opposite side as Rife...))


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((hehe)) Rife spun feeling someone's pulse hit the ground behind him, his powers were tweaking, just like Emmy's and Patrik's. He looked down at the girl seated on the ground. Her profile looked familiar, he gazed down at her trying to put the peices together. Looking at the so familiar stranger, or not so stranger.


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Dani turned and saw Rife. "Oh. Hi." she said quietly.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((WHOA! So many people like Rife suddenly! He's been so inactive and now BOOM!))
Rife turned away from the girl he was looking at and faced the new commer
"Oh, Dani. Hi." he smiled smoothly


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Coffey Bridin Alistriona [Kenny:] wrote: "Nephilim wrote: "Emmy shrugged
"Patrik Calmed her down. She was just screaming at the top of her lungs 'It hurts, It Hurts' Or maybe that was you. You were screaming in your head and the second I..."


Emmy nodded
"Yeah, that makes sense."


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Dani nodded at him. "Looking for something?" she asked.


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((it's a big tree...))

Gwen didn't notice anyone looking at her because all her attention was focused on a brown-haired man in the park. It looks just like Rife's, she thought. She smiled and jumped up running to the man, her blue eyes glowing with joy.
She wrapped her arms around him and looked up into...his brown eyes. "I'm so sorry," She said letting go quickly.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Someone actually." Rife answered.


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Dani nodded and stood up. "Well, good luck." she said and walked away, deciding that it was too crowded.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "thanks." Rife said quietly after her. then he sighed and started walking out into the park.
((I think I'm gonna make another guy for Dani, bc I like her.))


message 10541: by [deleted user] (last edited Jun 07, 2010 07:36PM) (new)

"It's ok, you can keep doing it," He said smirking.
"No, I don't think I will," She said stepping away. But the man kept closing in the distance. "Get away from me," She yelled her eyes glowing an icy blue.
The man held up his hands and backed away, "Ok sweetie."


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((Haha thanks))

Dani walked away, her heart breaking. Again. Suddenly, it was too much and she needed to cut. ((*gasps* ahhhhhhh emo!!))


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife looked up at the raised voice of the girl, she was the same girl from a few seconds ago. Rife walked up behind her and tapped her on the shoulder
"Excuse me" he started


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Aww!!! Poor baby!Cue hot nice guy!))

"Miss!" Yelled a handsomely tall black haired boy with an attractive Irish acctent.


message 10545: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Nephilim wrote: "Coffey Bridin Alistriona [Kenny:] wrote: "Nephilim wrote: "Emmy shrugged
"Patrik Calmed her down. She was just screaming at the top of her lungs 'It hurts, It Hurts' Or maybe that was you. You we..."


She stretched, winced, and promptly dropped her arms to her sides with a wry smile. "Note to self: rest up before doing anything physical."


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy laughed
"I'll keep that in mind next time you want to get fried by our own energy."


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"Yes," Gwen said frustrated, turning to the person who'd tapped her, her eyes still icy. As soon as she saw the mans face, she gasped. Her eyes turned back to normal, but she couldn't say anything, just look at him.


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Nephilim wrote: "((Aww!!! Poor baby!Cue hot nice guy!))

"Miss!" Yelled a handsomely tall black haired boy with an attractive Irish acctent."


((who was that to?))


message 10549: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife gaped at her and finally managed to choke out
"Gwen...?" he couldn't believe it, here she was back in his life like a blazing star.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Annana Flambe du Mort (Erica) wrote: "Nephilim wrote: "((Aww!!! Poor baby!Cue hot nice guy!))

"Miss!" Yelled a handsomely tall black haired boy with an attractive Irish acctent."

((who was that to?))"

((Dani))


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