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Nephilim wrote: "((Srry Erica.))

Declan appeared in a shadowed road and turned up the neck of his jackett. He bent his head and walked down the street like he had many times before.

Emmy looked up at the sou..."


Dani couldn't stand being in the house anymore, that house with so many memories. She needed to go someplace she didn't recognize. She grabbed a hoodie and ran out the door.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rosaline laughed, Emmy's head whipped in Salem's mother's direction
"What's so funny?" Emmy asked curious
"You two are."She answered as if it were obvious


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Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem glared at her mom. "I'm not kidding."


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((Hannah...))


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((srry))

Declan banged on the door of the most rundown house he had ever seen

"Nor am I." Rosaline said "You think you can do and say whatever you want here? That may work with Aloysia, but that's not what I expected from you Salem."
Emmy laughed slow and dark
"What could expect from her? You were never there, her entire life."


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Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem looked at her mother closely. "So tell me mother," she said in the overly calm voice of someone on the edge, "What did you expect from me?"


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((thanks.))

Dani was walking through a dark alley ((I should have something bad happen to her....))


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy looked at Salem, she could hear her energy bounce frantically around the room and collide with the runes and her own energy like fireworks. Loud an dpainful the more she heard it.
Rosaline returned the cold stare
"I expected control from you. Emmeline has an excuse, but you. You're better than this."

((yes.))
Declan gave the man behind the door the note then vanished and was walking in a brighter alley in a different place than seconds before.


message 10659: by Ky (last edited Jun 09, 2010 08:22PM) (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem laughed. "You think I'm not choosing this? You really don't know me," her laughter was bitter and slightly amused. "I can stop whenever I want to." She proved it by totally relaxing. Her energy disappeared inside herself and even her eyes were calm. "Better?"



Damien finished styling his hair and looked in the mirror one last time before picking up the thick manilla file again. "Josiah!" he shouted.


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((haha drunk guy with bad intentions... What do you think?))
Dani kept walked further into the alley.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Much. I'm impressed." Rosaline said smoothly

Josiah rolled his eyes and dragged himself out of the chair her was in and pulled up the hood on his hoodie
"What?"

((yeah!))
Declan stopped at a corner and stood there, stock still.


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A beefy guy staggered into the alley, "Hey! You lonely?" he slurred.

Dani made the mistake of turning around.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((night!))

Declan moved on from that corner


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He grinned at her. "You look lonely. Want me to make it better?"


Dani glared at him. "Dont you dare."

The drunk stepped closer until he had her up against the wall.


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Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Nephilim wrote: ""Much. I'm impressed." Rosaline said smoothly

Josiah rolled his eyes and dragged himself out of the chair her was in and pulled up the hood on his hoodie
"What?"

((yeah!))
Declan stopped a..."


((This is my last post.))

Salem smiled but it wasn't happy, bitter, angry nor sad. It was just there. "Oh, so you're impressed."


Damien chuckled and tossed the closed folder at him. "Have you read this yet, man?"


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Nephilim wrote: "((srry my sisi had the comp))

"So I'll see you around yeah?" Declan said nodding

"Yeah, when isn't she?" Rife asked smiling"


"True," Gwen replied smiling. "And Liv and Patrik, how are they?"


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((ahhhh we need Hannah!))


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((uh-huh))


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((wanna rp?))


message 10670: by [deleted user] (new)

((Sure, I'll use...ummm...ohh, what was her name...oh, yeah, Shannon, but I did like Lillie better, even though Shannon is my main character...I'll choose. Lemme make a profile thingy!))


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((Haha okay...))


message 10672: by [deleted user] (new)

((Sorry, did you want Declan to save her, cuz I can delete that!))


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((Haha nice...))

the drunk guy ((he needs a name.)) turned to her for a second then turned back to Dani. He leaned in and pressed his lips forcefully onto hers.

Dani tried to push him off, as tears rolled down her cheeks.


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((Oh, and I made another character...))


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Gwendalynn wrote: "((Sorry, did you want Declan to save her, cuz I can delete that!))"

((actually, yes, but whatever works lol.))


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((Ehhh... I think Ben should rescue Shannon and Declan should just come in and comfort Dani.... And the dude still needs a name...))


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((k! deleting!))

Shannon walked around because her author didn't know what to do.


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turned to Shannon.


message 10679: by [deleted user] (last edited Jun 10, 2010 10:55AM) (new)

((well, then since I deleted that...well, we know what happened!))

"Yeah, you," Shannon said, now unsure what to do now that she had his attention.


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((haha yeah....)
Dave stepped closer. "Oh, you defending her now?"


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"Figure that out on your own, smart one?" Shannon said, trying to buy time, but not sure she was going about it the right way.


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Dave growled and grabbed her wrist roughly, jerking her towards him, "Then I guess you can take her place. Redheads are brats anyway."


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Why did I even take karate for four years of my life if I'm not going to use it, Shannon thought and executed a not so perfect roundhouse kick to Daves jaw, but it did the trick. He stumbled back and gave her the opportunity to punch him in the nose, and kick him where it hurts.


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Dave groaned in pain but stepped forward and kissed her, pinning her down with his body.

"Get off her." called an icy voice from the entrance of the alleyway.


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Shannon turned her head and tried to get him off of her, but they didn't teach you how to get a roughly 200 pound man off of you in karate. She heard a male voice and thanked the stars, maybe this Dave guy would actually listen.


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Ben lunged at him, tackling him to the ground.
Dave swung at his jaw but Ben dodged his fist and rolled to his feet only to kick Dave I'm the ribs. Dave got up and started kicking at him. They fought for about 5 minutes until Ben kicked him so hard, he would probably never have kids. Dave lay on the ground whimpering.

Ben turned to Shannon, "You okay?"


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"Yeah, but you got mouthwash or a Clorox wipe by chance," Shannon asked wiping her mouth disgusted.


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Ben made a face, "Nope, sorry."


Dani had disappeared to a darker part of the alley and lay there sobbing quietly.


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"Thank you, by the way, for helping me and..." Shannon trailed off looking around for the other girl. "Well, there was another girl, I hope she's alright."


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Ben nodded, "No problem. Just glad you're okay. And how did you both get involved?" he asked, looking at her.


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"I don't know how the other girl did, but I tried to help and I guess he liked brunettes better than redheads," She said shrugging. "Well, I need to go sanitize, but it's nice to meet you...uhhh..."


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"Ben. And you are?"


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"Shannon," She said and smiled. "I'll see you around."


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Ben nodded, "Well Shannon, that was pretty heroic of you." he half-smiled at her.


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"Thanks, but it takes more than flattery to woo me," Shannon said then waved a little and left, trying to find the nearest store.


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"Ummm... Okay? Have fun cleaning up." he called after her, his voice filled with sarcasm.


message 10697: by [deleted user] (last edited Jun 10, 2010 11:46AM) (new)

Shannon glared back at him. She saw a gas station and ran in and grabbed some Clorox wipes. She ripped open the package and started wiping her face down.
"You gonna buy that," The cashier asked looking at her warily.
"Of course," Shannon said then paid and left, she didn't need more people staring at her as she washed saliva off her face.


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((Ew.))

Ben walked to a gas station and bought rubbing alcohol. He enjoyed the cashier's face when he saw his cut, bruised face.


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Shannon sat on a bench and wished she had some mouthwash, her mouth still felt like it had some unknown poisonous substance in it.


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((very ewweth!))


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