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((Indeed.))

Ben walked home and started cleaning the cuts off, wincing everytime the alcohol touched his open wounds. This brought back way too many memories of four years ago.


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Shannon walked home thinking about everything that had happened to her the last year. She walked right in, not even noticing that the door was unlocked when she had locked it when she left that morning. She walked straight to her bathroom and was surprised to see someone there.
"What the heck," She said confused, it was the guy, Ben, from earlier.


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((WTC!?!?!?!))


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((She lives next door to him, but they didn't know and she accidently walked into his place instead of hers...is that ok??


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((Haha yeah!!))

"WHat exactly are you doing in my apartment?" he asked and then sighed, "Or is it yours? i'm in too much pain to think straight, you can't blame me." he said as he walked to the front door, "Oh look, 995. It's mine. Now, get out."


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"Well excuse me for interrupting you..wait, you weren't doing anything," Shannon said, then walked out, not wanting to acknowledge that she had gone into the wrong apartment. "997, my apartment," Shannon said walking into the door one down from his.


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Ben slammed the door behind her, thinking that maybe it had been a bad idea to get in that brawl with Dave.


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Shannon slammed her door equally as hard and grabbed her toothbrush. "Stupid...men...apartments...next door...worst...hate...men..." She mumbled through her toothpaste foam.


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Ben went back to cleaning his cuts, cursing Shannon every time it stung.


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She gargled her mouthwash and plopped down on her couch. She smirked and turned up the TV as loud as she could. She was going to annoy this guy as much as she could, she just had to figure out what made him tick.


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Ben heard some kind of soap opera in the apartment next door turned up really loudly. He grabbed his iPod and plugged it into some speaker then blasted The Strokes.


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"Are you serious!" Shannon said and turned off the TV, she hated soap operas anyway. How could she annoy him when he just annoyed her more in return! If this were a cartoon, a light bulb would have turned on over her head. She gabbed something from the kitchen and knocked on Ben's door.


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Ben lifted himself off the couch unwillingly. "What?" he snapped when he saw it was Shannon.


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"I just wanted to welcome you to the building," Shannon said cheerfully and handed him a plate of cookies.


message 10715: by [deleted user] (last edited Jun 10, 2010 04:14PM) (new)

Ben grinned at her, "Thanks...Though I've been in
the building for about a year."


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Kenny wrote:
Salem smiled but it wasn't happy, bitter, angry nor sad. It was just there. "Oh, so you're impressed."


Damien chuckled and tossed the closed folder at him. "Have you read this yet, man?"


Emmy looked over her shoulder at Salem
"Who would have thought?" Emmy asked brushing her fingers over runes. They sizzled under her soft touch.
"I'd be careful if I were you." Aloysia warned softly

Rosaline grinned darkly
"You should watch your friend. She'll end up hurting everyone around her if your not careful."

((What happened with Dani?)

Rife laughed
"Patrik is himself, but him and Emmy finally got together. Liv has a boyfriend and is her usual bubbly crazy self."


message 10717: by [deleted user] (last edited Jun 10, 2010 05:59PM) (new)

((She's sobbing in a dark alley.))


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Poor girl! Declan will appear))

Declan tiredly walked down an alley, he didn't know which one and he didn't know where. Hinestly, he didn't care, but he was brought back to a semi reality when the sound of sobbing hit his ears


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Dani was sitting against a wall, her knees tucked against her chest. She was remembering thngs she'd rather left in the past.

((I love your sympathy toward my character...))


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((hey he doesn't know her yet. Don't hate on Declan yet ;P))

Declan saw her and knelt down in front of her
"What's wrong hun?" he asked


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((No, I meant it.))

Dani shook her head and buried her face in her hands.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Oh sorry! I though that was sarcastic! GR reallly needs a sarcasam font...))

Declan reached out to touch her shoulder, gently.


message 10723: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Nephilim wrote: " Kenny wrote:
Salem smiled but it wasn't happy, bitter, angry nor sad. It was just there. "Oh, so you're impressed."


Damien chuckled and tossed the closed folder at him. "Have you read this ..."


"If I'm not careful?" she said darkly. "Shut the hell up, mother." Salem kept her cool calm and strode over to Emmy. "What are you trying to do, girl?"

Damien tapped his friend's head. "Did you?"


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((Hahaha...))

Dani looked up at him.

((Just wondering, what color are his eyes?))


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rosaline grinned
Emmy looked at Salem
"look." she said tapping the rune.

Josiah shook his head
"No, why? SHould I have?"

((ALmost black))
Declan smiled carfully at her
"You again love?"


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Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem's eyes widened. "Emmy.."


"Mon Dieu," he sighed dramatically. "Yes you should've. The job starts today."


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy shook her head
"Salem, seriously. Look." Emmy said again grabbing Salem's hand and touching her fingertip to it.
Aloysia sighed and Rosaline smiled darkly
"I told you." Rosaline breathed "She's going to be the one to unleash this onto the worlds."

Josiah laughed slowly
"Like I care Damien. It's just some more girls to woo and more guys to charm your way into having them trust you."


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Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem looked at Emmy as she felt its energy running through her. "Em."


His lips twitched. "While that is certainly true we have to be more careful this time, man. These two girls are stronger than any person ever known here. Or anywhere." Granted, Damien and Josiah were stronger than average, much more so, but they still didn't compare to Emmy and Salem.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy smiled gently
"I won't let it get you. Close your eyes. Just look."
"It's not gonna work with her Emmeline." Aloysia said


Josiah shrugged smiling languidly
"So what, the most pressing question on our minds should be; The redhead or the Sliver?"


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Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem wished that Emmy's mother would just shut up; she wasn't trying to replace Emmy for goodness sake. She did as Emmy instructed. "Oh my gawd," she said quietly.


"I want the redhead," Damien grinned. "I never get redheads."


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy ignored her
"See?" Emmy said excitedly "It's incredible." She took Salem's hand from the picture.

"Alright. Deal. But I'm under the impression that the redhead has a boyfriend." Josiah laughed "Good luck with the competition." he winked


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Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem grinned at her and it had a slightly wicked tint. "That was sic."


Damien struck an overexaggerated pose, as only a french boy could, and then smiled. "I'll enjoy it."


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy nodded her eyes gleaming then she shook her head
"We need to go." the runes were screaming in her head now, pounding like a stero with way too much bass.

Josiah laughed
"She'll never go for you." he smiled and settled down in a chair an dtossed the file letting it land on the page titled Emmeline Leviah


message 10734: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Yeah I was jsut about to say that," she tapped her temples with an overrated grimace.


He picked it up and read it aloud in his lilting accent that he could take off and put back on as he pleased. "I don't need to woo her," Damien said finally. "Just gain her trust. And the silver-haired one? Apparently she has a stalker," he laughed.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy nodded and closed her eyes
"See you on the other side." She smirked and then dissapeared

Rosaline grasped her daughters arm before she could leave
"Please, just listen for one minute."

Josiah nodded
"Emmy, she's not going to be easy. She can spot liars a mile away." and then he smiled wickedly "Ellis? He can be dealt with easily."


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Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem paused to look at her. "Yeah mom?"


"Of course she won't be easy, that's when a little control over emotions helps a guy out," he smiled slowly. "And of course that kid'll be easy...unless the girl feels the need to protect his sorry ass."


message 10737: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "This has every possibility to sound awful and evil, but you need to get Emmy to do this. I know that you both don't want her to. But it will be, if it already isn't crucial to your survival." Rosaline said simply. There was no beating around the bush with that one.

"It doesn't work on her." Josiah said tilting his head "They've tried. And why would...." He glanced down at the file name "...Salem want to protect the guy that betrayed her?"


message 10738: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I thought you said we were going to die no matter what we did," she said, one hand on her hip.


Damien shrugged to the first statement. "I don't know. She grew up with him." he rolled his eyes. "Files give out so much information that it's easy to make motives."


message 10739: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "You will, but you will live that muc hlonger if Emmeline does this. And quickly too."

Josiah nodded then noticed
"Your project looks a little bit tortured." he tapped the single photo and then read the description "Damn these people have connections everywhere."


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Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Soon?" Salem looked at her mother and sighed. "I'll see what I can do, okay?" she didn't wait for an answer before she disappeared.



Damien nodded. "It's insane. But now you see even more why they're wanted."


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rosaline smiled and then the room faded to black.

Emmy slammed into her body and woke up gasping and scrabbling to stand.

Josiah kept reading
"Why don't we want all four, excuse me, five of them. The Lyrs then Salem? They seem to be one hell of a powerful group."


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Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem jumped out of her bed. "Emmy!"



"I don't know," Damien said. "They don't tell us that kind of stuff," he smirked. "Something to do with a prophecy?"


message 10743: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy looked up
"Salem, you living?" She yelled

Josiah shrugged
"Maybe, I think it has more to do with the fact that those two just got kidnapped by Shadows or whatever they're called. It's a poloitical war as much a power one. We want the throw aways from the enemy. Well, more like one throw away and one escapee" he smiled "That Emmy she's got spunk."


message 10744: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Yeah! I have something to tell you!" she stumbled out of her room. "Something that- well...Emmy you have to do it. And soon."


Damien shrugged. "Either way. We need to get going. Vite vite!" ((hurry hurry))


message 10745: by Hannah (last edited Jun 10, 2010 08:01PM) (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy leaned on the door frame
"Really? I didn't know that." she sighed "Or what will happen Salem?" She shook out her copper hair

Josiah laughed
"Dude, when you do that it's really hard to not think that your gay. But come on." he pulled on a leather jackett over his hoodie and stuck a wicked looking knife in the belt loop of his jeans


message 10746: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "We'll die quicker if you don't," she said slowly.


He smiled wickedly. "Maybe I am gay." Damien popped the collar on his sexy black jacket and bent to shine his shoe before leaving the room with the file tucked into his messenger bag.

((Well that would be a funny twist.))


message 10747: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy blew at her bangs that were so long they covered her eyes.
"Yeah, I figured as much. We'll go back tomorrow night." She closed her eyes for a minute then she spoke "Aren't our mothers something?"

Josiah looked back at him
"I hope not, I'm remarkably good looking and it would be awkward to think that you could be checking me out when I'm not paying attention."
((That would be funny))


message 10748: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "They're absolutely insane," she said agreeably. "Certifiably so."


Damien laughed, "Don't be ridiculous, mon ami!"

((I might make him be. :P))


message 10749: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "No offense to you at all. You're mom is a bitch, like stone cold bitch." Emmy said

"See? There you go again with the gayisms." Josiah sighed and shook the hair out of his eyes

((lol omg.))


message 10750: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem laughed out loud. "Like I haven't noticed. I still loath the fact that she ditched me at birth or whenever it was she did so. Not that your mom's any better."


He rolled his eyes. "It's not gay, it's francais. I'm french, you idiot."

((He is so gay. But he acts like he likes ladies..so maybe he's bi.))


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